OK, this game has a good start, nice potential and definitely a room for improvement. The plot revolving around Onlyf*ans analog is okay-ish providing for opportunities to advance the story and lead the characters on their sexual self-discovery path.
Girls are cute and distinguishable in character. Jason is a dummy
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Body proportions are good without overly huge bloated butts and boobs, and Emma's and Maya's 'assets' being the biggest among the group is just on point, no need for bigger (but that's just my taste).
I don't know how far and kinky-deep the story is planned to go, but in light of Chapter 4 events the pace might need some balancing (I'll add some thoughts on that below).
Things for improvement (some already mentioned but anyway):
My suggestions about the story I'll put under spoiler:
Girls are cute and distinguishable in character. Jason is a dummy
Body proportions are good without overly huge bloated butts and boobs, and Emma's and Maya's 'assets' being the biggest among the group is just on point, no need for bigger (but that's just my taste).
I don't know how far and kinky-deep the story is planned to go, but in light of Chapter 4 events the pace might need some balancing (I'll add some thoughts on that below).
Things for improvement (some already mentioned but anyway):
- If not pointed out yet, there's a line in the story3.rpy file
show chloe 125 with dissolvethat should be changed toshow sc3 125 with dissolveotherwise it shows an error instead of Chloe image in Emma's boob (cum)shooting scene. - Visual consistency. Boob size and shape varies across different scenes, well this can be overlooked for most part as it quite tricky with AI, but the characters' physique and faces should probably be more consistent. E.g., Ava's overall appearance ranges from basically child to college student, same for Liam - on some panels he looks like a skinny teenager although he is supposed to be a well-built muscular guy.
- Liam's fullscreen closeups are too much
- Some female voices sound too milfy
and rather be changed to more girly ones. Male cumming moans, in all honestly, are just gross and better be removed or replaced with (cum)splash sfx already used in the game.
My suggestions about the story I'll put under spoiler:
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