VN - Ren'Py - Heavenly Vows, Hellish Temptations [v1.0] [C4cuckoldgames]

Great start. With just 5 minutes of content, it seems very promising.

Ignore that idiot waffling about the game being boring, guessing that the future development will be bad, and whining about the demo being short. Really?? I usually wouldn't write a review with there being so little content, but I just had to counter it.

First of all, the story is engaging. There is no reading a wall of boring text. The writing is clear and concise.

Secondly, the game plays on the angst feeling of ntr. Heartbeat sounds, the "peeping orb," are well implemented. The competent writing amplifies this.

At last, the art is just basic AI CG. It is OK and definitely in the lower half of AI art. I personally don't find this to be a major objection.

It is tough to predict how games will develop, but I am definitely optimistic about this one.

It's the games initial release so the rating probably will change within the next updates when I will take another look. But right now even there are tons of threads, a lot of other games where you could see the thoughts of people of the initial releases the dev did not learn anything at all and it gets even worse.

Lets first talk about the game. Wife joins in heaven and MC in hell. Your wife can visit you once a week and so she does for the first time in that initial release. The introduction to that point where she arrives in hell could not be more boring than it is. You need like 2 minutes to read for that part and another 4 minutes for the rest. The only action you see is a demon fapping. And that demon also tells you his plan.. he wants to corrupt the wife step by step over every visit (once a week). And we all know what that means. Another AI game with NTR where your wife gets banged after 15 updates if we are lucky. Updates will be once a month so do the math.

The images and animation are below average. But the dev said everything is new. still learning etc. so it's acceptable.

The dev wrote:
Early backing is the lifeline that keeps this project moving: funding art, code, music, and the time to polish scenes until they hurt so good.
My counter argument would be.. how about investing some time first developing the skills. And it's all AI anyway so what costs are we talking about?
- Funding AI art = Really?
- code = You don't write it yourself?
- music = It's probably AI too or CC free license = No cost.

And all that with just a 5 minutes of reading initial release with 74 image files. And on those 74 are already included all sprites, backgrounds, overlays, gui etc. The content is 1/5 of a demo.

Let's see what the future brings.

Really like the plot and the slightly dark tone. Not too many NTR games in this genre. The game has potential, hope the dev does justice to it in coming updates. Would like to see more immersion in the gameplay but generally a pretty good start as the first chapter of a VN.