Ren'Py Help with first game!

[Ahentaiguy69]

Hey everyone!
I just released the demo for my very first game — you can download it for free here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/chained-girl-demo-ahentaiguy69.251551/

So… here’s the thing:
I don’t really know anything about coding, drawing, or even writing a proper story, but I decided to give it a shot anyway and I did it all on my own lol.
I’ve been learning a bit of coding and drawing, but my writing still needs a lot of work.

That said, I’d really appreciate any advice you might have — whether it’s about art, storytelling, or programming.
Also, if you have any ideas for mechanics or features I could add to the game, I’d love to hear them!


Thanks in advance!

 

[Winterfire]

I didn't play the game, but the art looks like a fine start. I doubt anyone would honestly enjoy it, but it's a very solid start better than others I've seen for sure. I'd say it's about time you learnt

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As for how to get those dark colors to the right spot, you usually have a layer where you draw a circle for the directional light, then pretty much draw the shadows on the opposite side, (Base Color, dark shadows, darker shadows) then blend them. You do the same for light.
Easiest is having the light source directly pointed at the character.

Doesn't have to be mathematically correct imho, just a rough base you can follow. If you don't want to worry about where each shadow should go to look right, just help yourself with some 3D (I suggest DesignDoll).