Help Writing NTR Content

[Deleted member 3736450]

Hello,


Wasn't sure where to post this so I thought I give this general forum a try first. I created a game using the chatgamemaker (see post) which focused on the cuckquean fetish as well as the NTR fetish. Most of the players wanted more NTR content as it was more of a harem based game. If possible, I am asking what makes an NTR game great. Is it the choices, the build up, knowing whats going on or no knowing? I am posting my game below as reference if needed but not required as I want to hear the direct perspectives from the players. Thank you!!!

https://f95zone.to/threads/my-girlfriends-abroad-v1-0-rickrick69.118284/

 

[Icarus Media]

NTR is as varied in terms of what makes it great as much as why people dislike it, some love the humiliating in your face NTR, some love the sneaky type NTR, especially the teasing sneaky type. Some like the use of blackmail or hypnosis, some like male ntr, some like lesbian NTR, some uber chads like Futa NTR. It all varies...

 

[Deleted member 3736450]

NTR is as varied in terms of what makes it great as much as why people dislike it, some love the humiliating in your face NTR, some love the sneaky type NTR, especially the teasing sneaky type. Some like the use of blackmail or hypnosis, some like male ntr, some like lesbian NTR, some uber chads like Futa NTR. It all varies...

Haha well said! I guess I should pick one of these themes and roll with it! Can’t make them all happy

 

[Icarus Media]

Haha well said! I guess I should pick one of these themes and roll with it! Can’t make them all happy

Since you're using real porn in your game, yes I looked, you could use 'shemale' porn rather than futa porn. If you go that route, if you are worried they may not have done any scenes with the actresses you are using then you can use a close up or part where faces are not shown during sex scenes between them. If so, and you find a passable one you could go the sneaky route.

In fact I remember one like that:

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Otherwise male or lesbian I'm sure there is more than enough material to find on the internet.

 

[Deleted member 3736450]

Angela White has done a great scene with a TS. Not sure if I am going to go that route yet but it would capture a larger audience for sure

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I think it is harder to find the POV TS videos

 

[JoleenStar]

Blackmail is typically the weakest kind of NTR because it's always "big pp changes my whole personality" and it's dumb

 

[Meaning Less]

I'd say that the first step is writing about a kink you are into yourself, write about things you enjoy and like-minded people will gravitate towards your content.

Any writer trying to write about something they don't fully understand will end up creating something generic and unappealing most likely.

 

[desmosome]

I mean, if the whole game is just the phone, there is only 2 direction you can take this.

MC knows about getting cucked. He can like it or not. It's pretty much mindless cuck porn.

Sneaky NTR. There is room for some interesting progression with this. Start with a normal long distance relationship. Then she starts getting a bit distant. Her stories don't match up and you notice suspicious messages/pictures. Maybe some dude's arm is visible at the edge of a photo. Gf always making convenient excuses. Ramp it up gradually and then blow the lid. Maybe some other character eventually sends you a vid. Then the MC can break up or jerk off or whatever lol. Or stay together cus she is crying and saying it was a mistake and that it will never happen again. Then at the ending, she has a gangbang with 20 black guys or something.

 

[Deleted member 3736450]

Blackmail is typically the weakest kind of NTR because it's always "big pp changes my whole personality" and it's dumb

I am thinking of going more along the lines of the couple having a fight and the female half gets drunk and ends up sleeping with another man. He MC finds out through he friends and confronts her. He then has the choice of getting revenge which turns the female half on unknowingly or the MC enjoys watching and then asks if she can "cheat" more. He is conflicted with anger and being turned on with her infidelity.

Let me know what you think and thanks for your feedback!

 

[Deleted member 3736450]

I mean, if the whole game is just the phone, there is only 2 direction you can take this.

MC knows about getting cucked. He can like it or not. It's pretty much mindless cuck porn.

Sneaky NTR. There is room for some interesting progression with this. Start with a normal long distance relationship. Then she starts getting a bit distant. Her stories don't match up and you notice suspicious messages/pictures. Maybe some dude's arm is visible at the edge of a photo. Gf always making convenient excuses. Ramp it up gradually and then blow the lid. Maybe some other character eventually sends you a vid. Then the MC can break up or jerk off or whatever lol. Or stay together cus she is crying and saying it was a mistake and that it will never happen again. Then at the ending, she has a gangbang with 20 black guys or something.

This sounds like what I was thinking except for the large gangbang at the end haha. Thanks for the feedback!

 

[Icarus Media]

I am thinking of going more along the lines of the couple having a fight and the female half gets drunk and ends up sleeping with another man. He MC finds out through he friends and confronts her. He then has the choice of getting revenge which turns the female half on unknowingly or the MC enjoys watching and then asks if she can "cheat" more. He is conflicted with anger and being turned on with her infidelity.

Let me know what you think and thanks for your feedback!

Or....and I'm not trying to push my kink on you, maybe she does that thing that girls do when they have a cry and other women comfort them, maybe she goes out has a few drinks and goes to the bathroom to have a good cry and another girl happens to comfort her, hold her, listen to her and they go back to hers and start making out, taking clothes off and before she knows it she feels something worm it's way inside of her, turns out the girl has something extra, but the girl is half drunk with alcohol and lust to really care. MC finds out (but is not told about the extra appendage) and can get revenge OR blows it off as it's just girls having fun right? Maybe he invites her round not knowing and ends up basically setting up situations unknowingly where the two can escalate and sneak in quickies.

Damn...writing that nearly made me paint the ceiling....

 

[Sieglinnde]

I am asking what makes an NTR game great. Is it the choices, the build up, knowing whats going on or no knowing?

well... From my point of view, the background makes it all. I mean, not just make the game and say "well these two have been together for 76 years and they love each other very much" and the next scene put the NTR.... What gives it the magic is to build a little bit the relationship they have so that the viewer feels that there is a connection, and something that adds much more to that is to introduce a person who is going to be the "third in discord" in that story (for example, introduce another guy interested in fucking your girlfriend, but leave to speculation the fact of what happens with them). I played your game a while ago and the little I remember is that she is unfaithful and tells him, and I think you can choose whether you like it or not and then she wants you to be unfaithful and so on.... But well, that's what in my opinion would be good, there are other things but right now I don't remember much

 

[Deleted member 3736450]

well... From my point of view, the background makes it all. I mean, not just make the game and say "well these two have been together for 76 years and they love each other very much" and the next scene put the NTR.... What gives it the magic is to build a little bit the relationship they have so that the viewer feels that there is a connection, and something that adds much more to that is to introduce a person who is going to be the "third in discord" in that story (for example, introduce another guy interested in fucking your girlfriend, but leave to speculation the fact of what happens with them). I played your game a while ago and the little I remember is that she is unfaithful and tells him, and I think you can choose whether you like it or not and then she wants you to be unfaithful and so on.... But well, that's what in my opinion would be good, there are other things but right now I don't remember much

Thanks for the feedback. I plan on adding more back story for the first update along with the save/load feature

 

[woody554]

Any writer trying to write about something they don't fully understand will end up creating something generic and unappealing most likely.

and especially when you write about something generic it will absolutely show if you love it or not.

 

[Icarus Media]

and especially when you write about something generic it will absolutely show if you love it or not.

Generic give me a woody. All those people in threads that ask if 'generic is avoidable'? Need to get with the times!

 

[Deleted member 3736450]

Generic give me a woody. All those people in threads that ask if 'generic is avoidable'? Need to get with the times!

Well as many of you know here and if you read the thread on my game I am very open to feedback and trying to do my best to improve. I think my next full game will be an upgrade as I have learned more about NTR vs. Cuckcold vs. Swinging vs. Humiliation vs. Voyeurism vs. etc etc