VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Her Final Request [v0.3 Final] [Chinzu]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    connor1518

    While the concept isn't bad, nothing really new but still the kind of story I enjoy, it has some of the worst writing I've seen.

    There is no way this was in anyway proofread. I implore the Dev to find writing help. As it is the V/N is pretty close to unplayable.

    Visually it's okay. Standard HS, nothing that stands out and a bit dated but not the worst by any means.

    I wish the best for the Dev but please get assistance with writing and translations. If that gets cleaned up I'll adjust my rating.