VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Her Final Request [v0.3 Final] [Chinzu]

the story is extremely hard to follow, not sure if it's just bad translations or bad writing. there is a lot of repetitive coding for texts, so you will get a lot of confusion as if you're stuck in a time loop. the way "thoughts" and "speech" are coded to be portrayed aren't separated into different ways, or even in different dialog windows, you can go from speech to thought without a space in between.

While the concept isn't bad, nothing really new but still the kind of story I enjoy, it has some of the worst writing I've seen.

There is no way this was in anyway proofread. I implore the Dev to find writing help. As it is the V/N is pretty close to unplayable.

Visually it's okay. Standard HS, nothing that stands out and a bit dated but not the worst by any means.

I wish the best for the Dev but please get assistance with writing and translations. If that gets cleaned up I'll adjust my rating.