Here is my game pitch. Would you play it?

[zodgod31]

This game will mostly focus on young man with milfs and milfs only. There will be no easy pussy(sorry), you will have to use your primary head to get great rewards. The game will be in Renpy with DAZ assets and will have multiple choices that lead to stat increases or decreases. Sex scenes will have basic animation eventually. This game is inspired by The Man of the House and will have similar UI, map, dialogue, etc.

STORY:
MC is an 18 year old thin built guy, living with his dad and stepmom. MC also has a divorced mother who lives by herself. MC's father divorced her because she smokes too much pot, is an exhibitionist, a spiritual hippie and would be a bad influence on MC growing up (according to dad). MC is working a lame job, not getting laid and dreams about being a big time porn producer. In his research MC finds out that his stepmom used to be a pornstar in her youth. He confronts the stepmom and she tells him that it was a long time ago and money was great. Stepmom asks not to tell dad because they are both happy and past is in the past. MC tells his stepmom he wont blackmail her and wants to start a porn production company himself. MC asks stepmom to be his consultant. She tells him that she could help him with advice, but it wont be easy because he would need to get girls, equipment, place to film, etc. Stepmom suggests one of her milf friends could be interested but would require money in advance. Story will be a sandbox, non-linear. You can choose whichever path you want to pursue. You can choose to take certain kink and taboo routes or avoid them completely.

THINGS TO DO:
Acquire money (a loan from a bank or elsewhere)
Rent a place to film (multiple places available with different prices and different advantages)
Start a modelling and/or porn company with your chosen names (each will require money, might not have money to start both right away)
Buy a website, business cards and marketing, look for models ads and try to hire them
Find girls for modelling and/or porn shoot (many places will be available on the map try to find girls: bars, gym, park, online)
Different girls will have different requirements to be hired. Some will want you to have a nicer studio, a nicer car, or your business will need to be popular enough
Manage your money wisely, stay profitable, dont go bankrupt (game over)
Buy cool new stuff, fancy cars, upgrade to attract high profile girls
Find out which girls have kinky desires and buy necessary equipment to increase profits and grow your company
See if you can convince some of your modelling agency girls to start in porn shoots
Meet potential investors and business partners
Have tons of sex
This game will not be a tedious management sim, it will play out like Big Brother and Man of the House

GAME TAGS:
Sex, nudity, adult language, optionary kinks and taboos.

No walls of text I promise. Movie style dialogue script.

Guys I'm a potential future dev, tell me what you think? Would you play this?

 

[Deleted member 1121028]

The most stupid story could make a good game as long it's well executed.
Dedication, hard work, make a game. Post on a forum not so much o/

 

[zodgod31]

The most stupid story could make a good game as long it's well executed.
Dedication, hard work, make a game. Post on a forum not so much o/

I disagree from my experience. Some games have amazing visuals, and ui but story is so boring and unrealistic that I end up quiting the game. Not all hard work and well executed games succeed. Hard work and execution means nothing if the result is a boring game. Although you probably dont play for the story but for porn and thats ok there are lots of people like that. But I dont want to simply make porn, I want to have a gameplay and a decent somewhat realistic story with interesting characters that actually have personalities.

 

[Deleted member 1121028]

Then disagree. That's about it.

 

[zodgod31]

Then disagree. That's about it.

Why even bother posting on my thread if you have a stick up your ass to begin with? I asked for a constructive criticism not your hate. What happened in your life? Did someone hurt you?

 

[riktor]

milfs only? that's a pass for me. variety is the spice and all..

 

[GrayTShirt]

I voted no, but here's why.
It seems convoluted. He wants to be a porn producer, which is fine. But dealing with the family past, as complicated as it sounds, seems a bit much for a game of this type. The focus is too broad. Character development can be complicated on its own. But when mixed in with management-style gameplay; it's hard to stay focused.
Each part, on their own, sound intriguing. Resolving family relationships while exploring various kinks of the town MILFs (and maybe a few other sexy demographics) sounds good. Building an empire that caters to its wide audience of perverts sounds good. But together, sounds like too much.
In my humble opinion I would narrow my focus.

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[allintine]

Milfs you say... Well count me in

 

[Deleted member 1121028]

Why even bother posting on my thread if you have a stick up your ass to begin with? I asked for a constructive criticism not your hate. What happened in your life? Did someone hurt you?

Don't mind me go on.

 

[Ghostboy031]

Legit have some competition with other guys in game ? (A bit like battle of the bulges) Like you can loose girls if you do the wrong thing etc but make it so you can win them back ?

 

[freedom.call]

Only Milfs? Yes

The rest is a no unfortunately. Too much going on that I'm not all that interested in in an adult game.

 

[rk-47]

if your "inspiration" is man of the house and games with that sort of gameplay then count me the fuck in, i would play it in a heartbeat, im kinda sick of VN's where you click to go here and talk constantly - side quests, minigames that arent too hard and activities to increase lust is what more games need as well as money management and buying cosmetics to improve the look of certain things of dress the milfs and mc
i just hope theres some bukkake with mc spewing loads

 

[Volta]

The idea has legs IMO, obviously the standard cart full of advice for a first time dev is relevant, the TL: DR of whish goes something like:
- Make a game your interested in content wise
- Keep it simple the first time you try to make a game
- choose the size of game(smaller is better for a first time dev) and stick to it, don't get caught in content creep and such.
- do finish your first project, then you'll know if your really cut out for this
- Don't bend to patron requests too much, at least not enough to compromise your personal plans for the game, a little fan service is harmless, a lot will devalue your game.
- don't think you need top tier hardware to make a good game, upgrade as you go, make the project pay for itself.

There is a lot more to it though and this site has a lot of decent advice, some of it conflicts with other advice but that boils down to personal choice often, so long as you make point of learning as you go and seeing it through to the end then really you'll be fine.

While i have no particular like or dislike for a purely milf focussed game, i have no doubt you'll have an audience though, plenty of milf lovers out there but i can't help but agree with riktor i do love a bit of variety, at least if your going all milf do vary the body type and height a bit, all tall super stacked milfs will get boring a little too fast IMO.

 

[Silentorange18]

Promising plot it just a matter how you execute it

 

[lazychicken]

I agree with Volta, OP. Make a small one first, then you can continue as part 2 of the game and so on.
While sandbox all fun and nice, I still make a route but not forcing people to choose that. For me, I prefer some route to come back in case I get lost in sandbox and want to use something to measure myself
Also what model are you gona to use? Honey Select or 3D Daz.

 

[Domiek]

I disagree from my experience. Some games have amazing visuals, and ui but story is so boring and unrealistic that I end up quiting the game. Not all hard work and well executed games succeed. Hard work and execution means nothing if the result is a boring game. Although you probably dont play for the story but for porn and thats ok there are lots of people like that. But I dont want to simply make porn, I want to have a gameplay and a decent somewhat realistic story with interesting characters that actually have personalities.

I think the point that No_Name was trying to get across is that the story idea is probably the least important part of a game. Not because writing/story isn't important, but because the execution is what really matters. You could have the best story idea and if executed poorly, it will be boring. Or you can make a show about a girl playing chess and it will be one of the most exciting and talked about shows in 2020.

 

[TheFamilyDog]

I would toss the whole mr. porn king angle and just make the kid a clone of a young Quentin Tarantino (instead of working in a video rental place, maybe a call center for a streamer service). Who then decides to make some fast money in porn for another project closer to his heart. Maybe the sequel to a beloved B-Movie with trying to get it's scream-queen stars out of retirement. Because I watch some film reviews and always hear how they wished this star or that would come out of retirement and make a promised sequel (like Sybil Danning with L.A. Bounty).

 

[nulnil]

The concept is not bad, however I wouldn't play it solely due to personal preference. The game doesn't sound very interesting or have much depth which makes it awfully similar to visual novels.