[v0.6]
Great Work, this game has immense potential.
The art style is very nice and true to source for the most part. The animations, although few at the moment, are very well executed. I actually really enjoyed the main bejeweled-esque minigame - I thought it was very snappy and quick (unlike some implementations I've played in the past) and the different buffs you could have add a nice variety .
I thought the characters and setting were also great, although the incredibly linear nature of the game threw me off a bit, but that's probably because I'm not used to playing these sort of story driven VNs, so take this with a grain of salt.
The writing was, in my opinion, nice and appropriate for the setting and I found the story to be entertaining and likewise appropriate.
One issue I had, that I think could really help polish the game, is to add more transition images to the sex scenes. There is some form of this but I think the game is too quick to jump straight into it,- sometimes the text even has to catch up to what you're seeing - The animations are nice so I think they could be highlighted by building up to them more.
All in all, I'm looking forwards to seeing this project develop, great work!