Well, the art style is among the better I've seen on this site, at least in the later half of the game. To be specific, they switch artists, and you'll notice it pretty quickly; some of the new drawings appear in the 3rd chapter of the first game, and then they're completely replaced in the second game. The new drawings are what I'm talking about when I say the art is good; the original art is comparatively average, so I think it was a good switch. The new art is what you'll see in the preview images below the download section, so don't expect to see any of it for a couple hours of playtime unless you skip straight to the second game.
The grammar and spelling are rough, and you'll realize pretty quickly that the person who made the game isn't a native English speaker, and the dialogue feels like it definitely might've just been copied straight from Google Translate. That's nothing unique, though, among porn games.
The gameplay loop is the typical carpal tunnel inducing grind of sending your character to work to earn money while skipping 10's of days at a time so you can save enough money to buy a necessary item to progress the story, although the second game does give you a somewhat automated way of earning money that makes it easier, so far, so maybe that could change since it is still in development. Another note about the gameplay is that it can be kind of confusing when it comes to what to do next for the story, especially in the first game. The second game has a built-in event guide for progression, so it's bearable, but the first one only has a separate guide that you have to install as a text file, which I followed and it worked alright for the most part, but the guide only follows chapters 1-2, while the game has 3 chapters, meaning I ran around chapter 3 like a chicken with its head cut off, clicking on everything and everyone, hoping it would progress me through the story, but maybe that says more about me than the game.
The overarching story is average; nothing crazy. Although I do have some personal qualms about your character's role in the story and how he interacts with it along with the main heroines/girls/peoplehewouldliketobang, I would hesitate to say the MC is in any relationship with any of the heroines as much as he's just trying to have sex with anything that moves, and I'm worried that if he does try to have any deeper relationship, he will seem pretty pathetic, more than he already is, given his actions throughout the games. For instance, so far, literally every main heroine has had a scene involving sex with other people. That already feels kind of awkward, but what makes it weirder is that pretty much every one of those scenes has been a direct result of the MC's actions, and most of the time it was directly set up by him. And most of these events the MC sets up are pretty messed up; I don't have a problem with that individually, but considering later on the game kind of tries to make the MC seem like an alright guy, it just doesn't work for me due to these events.
Some examples without including names would be:
There are several more examples of this, but I feel my review is already too long.
Anyways, while I do prefer serious games with well-done plotlines, I feel like if the game wanted to take itself seriously, in my eyes, it would have to practically rewrite the beginning parts and maybe get an editor for grammar and spelling; otherwise, it should've just stuck to being a satirical porn game. But that's just my two cents on the matter, and maybe for some, what it already is is more than enough. I do like the concept and idea of the game, and of course, the art, so regardless of how it turns out, I wish the developer/developers luck, and maybe when it's finished I can come back and enjoy it for what it is.
The grammar and spelling are rough, and you'll realize pretty quickly that the person who made the game isn't a native English speaker, and the dialogue feels like it definitely might've just been copied straight from Google Translate. That's nothing unique, though, among porn games.
The gameplay loop is the typical carpal tunnel inducing grind of sending your character to work to earn money while skipping 10's of days at a time so you can save enough money to buy a necessary item to progress the story, although the second game does give you a somewhat automated way of earning money that makes it easier, so far, so maybe that could change since it is still in development. Another note about the gameplay is that it can be kind of confusing when it comes to what to do next for the story, especially in the first game. The second game has a built-in event guide for progression, so it's bearable, but the first one only has a separate guide that you have to install as a text file, which I followed and it worked alright for the most part, but the guide only follows chapters 1-2, while the game has 3 chapters, meaning I ran around chapter 3 like a chicken with its head cut off, clicking on everything and everyone, hoping it would progress me through the story, but maybe that says more about me than the game.
The overarching story is average; nothing crazy. Although I do have some personal qualms about your character's role in the story and how he interacts with it along with the main heroines/girls/peoplehewouldliketobang, I would hesitate to say the MC is in any relationship with any of the heroines as much as he's just trying to have sex with anything that moves, and I'm worried that if he does try to have any deeper relationship, he will seem pretty pathetic, more than he already is, given his actions throughout the games. For instance, so far, literally every main heroine has had a scene involving sex with other people. That already feels kind of awkward, but what makes it weirder is that pretty much every one of those scenes has been a direct result of the MC's actions, and most of the time it was directly set up by him. And most of these events the MC sets up are pretty messed up; I don't have a problem with that individually, but considering later on the game kind of tries to make the MC seem like an alright guy, it just doesn't work for me due to these events.
Some examples without including names would be:
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Anyways, while I do prefer serious games with well-done plotlines, I feel like if the game wanted to take itself seriously, in my eyes, it would have to practically rewrite the beginning parts and maybe get an editor for grammar and spelling; otherwise, it should've just stuck to being a satirical porn game. But that's just my two cents on the matter, and maybe for some, what it already is is more than enough. I do like the concept and idea of the game, and of course, the art, so regardless of how it turns out, I wish the developer/developers luck, and maybe when it's finished I can come back and enjoy it for what it is.