Hey Guys. I am making a new Comic. How do you like it so far?

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Only a noob

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If you have not checked out my previous work, here it is:
https://f95zone.to/threads/hunting-a-minotaur-2021-03-30-only-a-noob.78067/#post-5555669

Anyway, I have thought of an epic new high fantasy adventure intrigue action and erotic story that will span many comic parts and trust me will be a bitch to make, but any and all quality work from this pervert is forever gonna be free :D

Check out some of the characters I made for it :




Here's the map of where the story will take place:




Takes much inspiration from the WARHAMMER FANTASY Universe.

And this my kind audience is the finished official First Scene of Comic Part 1:



I Hope You Like It :D
 
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No way i had minotaur comic already, this looks really good, would you ever add bukkakes or cumflations to your comics?
 
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Personally, I get a massive cringe when I easily identify a daz3d asset and your king in the last image is obviously
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. I also use daz3d and I always invest some time in modifying assets so they don't look very similar to their promotion images. For example, I try to avoid the default materials and replace them with substitutes where possible.

Having said that, your skills are impressive.
 
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Some decent images here. I was interested enough to look at your earlier work.

As far as the Minotaur comic goes...If I'm honest, aside from the minotaurs having slightly weird dicks (that's a plus. Standing out in any way is better than not), your comic felt extremely cookie cutter. Your fantasy action babes are very ordinary for the genre, the minotaurs had the usual level of snark I tend to expect from nameless low-mid level bad guys in parody porn comics, and I just didn't really care what happened to anybody in your story.

My hope is that that was mostly just an artistic exercise, because I do think you make pretty good (if not exactly amazing) 3D art. For your next comic, I'd definitely suggest some character building and worldbuilding. It helps motivate the action if the reader knows why they ladies are putting up with porn comic sex.

So far, aside from the ladies' tattoos (not personally my thing, but I'm sure somebody's into that), it was all very vanilla sex. There seemed to be a suggestion of some kind of mind control or something, which might have been neat, but I didn't really have enough of an investment in the ladies (or the minotaurs for that matter) to care about what happened to them.

Give your main character(s) a backstory. Have there be some stakes that the reader might care about. It doesn't have to be anything Earth-shaking, but just like a "We need to get the Orb of Whatever. It's behind those goblins! If they see us coming, they'll just break it, so we need to seduce and get gangbanged by a bunch of enemies we'd normally kill like they were nothing, and also we think that sex with them is super gross and it's really easy for them to knock up humans!" would go a long way to making your comics more interesting to read.
 
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looks good for the first impression. My only complain is your girls are too chubby. Make em more sporty and i'm in :D
But that's only my personal taste. Best wishes for the project
 
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