Alright, let's start from the beginning.
Despite having played probably thousands of VNs over the years, I dont think I've ever seen this one til a few days ago when Episode 2 was uploaded here.
Noticed the spam of 5-stars. People commenting on how extremely well the animations are, the writing, the...well everything.
So being sceptical as I am when it comes to most reviews on F95 (people REALLY need to understand what a 1 or 5 star rating truly means), I figured that hey maybe this one is actually a masterpiece, I mean SO many 5-star reviews, just gushing over this VN.
So today I got around to play thru the entire 'current' content, for the first time.
And finished it some minutes ago.
My impression, opinion and thoughts are incoming, but let me first get right down to the bottom line of this review - This is by NO MEANS a 5-star VN.
I won't argue with other peoples' reviews and thoughts, it's theirs, just like THIS is my review and opinion.
But you gotta ask, when are people gonna stop being so gung-ho with their 5-star ratings?
You see a game with basically 5-star rating, AND several reviews, you can't help but think that this VN has to be one helluva ride(pun intended) right?
Yet, I found this VN rather tiresome and drawn out, and ..boring to be frank.
All respect and kudos to the Dev, I can see and appreciate the work put into many of the scenes and/or animations. But I'm NOT gonna give this a 5 star, it's FAR from a "masterpiece".
To me, this is..average.
Let's get over some of the good and the bad of these first 2-3 chapters (chapter 0 counts I guess...who tf calls it chapter 0? call it prologue or chapter 1 instead)
Good; The girls are...OK. They are attractive enough. SOME of them. This topic is also in the "Bad" section of the review btw.
Animations are pretty good. Unlike one review I read, this is NOT by a mile close to the "game with the best animations I've ever seen". Animations are mostly well done, but definitely not "the best thing ever". Good enough. Definitely way above the average animation quality you find in most VNs.
The atmosphere is pretty well created. I cant put my finger on exactly what makes it so good. I found myself sometimes being pulled in, which very few VNs manages to do. Sadly it's only for a brief moment, but it does happen.
The writing is overall way above average, not the best, but much better than *most* other VNs I've tried. It can get a bit longwinded sometimes, certain scenes that is.
There's probably some more "good" things, but that's all for now.
the BAD:
As I said as a conclusion - somewhat boring overall. I said it pulls me in sometimes, but it's rare but it does at least happen. But the other 95% of the time I'm just waiting for something to f-cking HAPPEN.
It's not even a "slice of life" VN, where I could understand the daily life doesnt always get exciting. But this story - if we can call it a story - is everywhere, and NOwhere at the same time. I'm not supposed to be bored, rolling thumbs waiting for something exciting to happen, am I? Yet this is exactly what I ended up doing. Remember, according to the reviews, this game is a Masterpiece, flawless, 5 out of 5. And here I sit wondering, which of these reviews are made by the dev's alt-accounts? Or are people just THAT extremely easy to please?
I've played slowburn games, I've played VNs that throw sex scenes at you right of the bat. Or some action set piece. But this one, feels like it's just trying to roll down a hill, with no goal, no aim, just rolling...making me sleepy in the process.
Don't get me wrong, I am NOT someone that wants/needs/expect lewd scenes every 5 minutes. IF the story is hooking me, I could easily enjoy the VN with zero lewd scenes. I'm not allowed to mention other VNs in a review, so I can't make examples. But take a game like "SG" (if u know, you know) that one has not exactly spoiled us with lewd stuff - yet THAT VN is way closer to a 5-star than this...game. My point is, the lewd stuff has barely anything to do with my opinion and rating of this particular VN.
Problem is just that nothing else is really happening to keep me interested.
Let's talk about the FEW lewd scenes this VN has mustered up so far - which is VERY few.
I give anyone who played the game and read this review, a homework. COUNT the number of renders where you can see a pussy. Do it.
It's like this dev is afraid of showing pussies, but GLADLY show's the MC's dick every single time.
Basically NO renders with pussy that I can remember, and ZERO penetration renders. It's all so extremely softcore.
But it's on par with the overall impression of this VN, it's just...rolling on, not really excelling in anything. Lewd scenes are boring without at least one or two explicit renders in them. The animations are pretty well done though!
But in one lewd scene with a certain girl (towards the latter half of EP2, MC stays with someone instead of driving home in the rain - wont say more due to spoilers) we actually get to see a tiny bit of MC's dick as he takes her Doggy. And from that angle alone I think I might see why the dev doesnt show us even ONE render of actual penetration. And this angle/animation I'm talking about, shows a problem many VNs have with animations, you can literally see that the dick is not actually going into a hole AT ALL. Because of the way the dick is posititioned, not even the butthole would be penetrated based ono the location of the dick (this explanation sounds so effing dumb lol)
Some inconsistancies in the writing too. Yet you see people GUSH over the writing.
After MC met Melina(?) forgot her name but whatever. She told the MC that his dad had told her he was divorced.
Yet a few scenes later when MC is in the car, talking about this with whoever was in the car with him, he says that Melina said she "did not know he was divorced"
EH? how the Fudge does that make any sense? She literally said minutes ago she was TOLD he was divorced (which he wasnt). But then it's re-told and she didnt know he was divorced?
Yea, totally 5 out of 5 writing here folks.
Things also seems to happen very convenient -which isn't really THAT bad, as movies etc has done this "trick" for years.
Like, MC ends up homeless basically, for a little while, because lo and behold, suddenly and old friend that he haven't seen in a year or whatever, is suddenly there. And he's "saved". What a f-cking lucky coincidence that in this city, this very place and this very moment, they found eachother so he didnt have to sleep on a park bench. Wow. Contrived maybe?
By no means could *I* write a better story, definitely not. Nor could I make animations this 'good'. And in no shape or form is this an attack on the game or the dev. HOWEVER, this game, thanks to previous reviews, has given this game a WAY too high rating. It's really misleading, it's not even close to a 5 out of 5.
Sure maybe every single review *after* mine will keep pushing for 5 star, but I can at least with good conciene leave my thoughts and opinions for others to read, for people that is NOT easily impressed by...whatever there is to be impressed about here.
Again, most animations are well made. Atmosphere is often pretty dang good and well made.
Some of the girls are pretty, well pretty enough to like them on a surface level.
Some of the girls are NOT attractive.
But those things I dont really want to base a rating on, as we all like what we like when it comes to the looks of girls (or guys?).
So, in a way I'm sorry dear "Wingmen Labs" but this is really not a 5/5 - and obviously it's (hopefully not) not you who claimed it to be so. I hope this review doesnt kill any momentum or joy you have in making this VN. It's definitely a good enough VN.
My frustration goes towards these 5-stars, making this sound like the perfect VN, flawless, a *masterpiece*. Imagine my disappointment when it's far from a masterpiece.
I do have hopes for this one. This is probably just still "early days" in the so-called story.
But that's what this review is about, what's in the game *NOW*.
The game is NOT worth my time for it's "story". It's NOT worth my time for the lewd stuff - which is as exciting to watch as some german softcore porn from the 80s.
Not many of the characters are THAT likeable. No one that I disliked, but no one really managed to make me feel "I like this character". They are just...there. Ruby seems to be the best girl so far, but they also go waaay back.
Her friend..celeste? Just comes off as a nutcase - dont stick your dick in crazy man.
Yuna? meh. boring.
Forgot the name of the others, Stella? Well she seemed like she could be a bit spicey, but lost interest in her rather quickly.
Though some of the girls are yet to really shine, I do need to give a serious plus point regarding the girls overall. They all feel and look pretty unique, not your typical female model you see in every VN out there. So for that, I applaud the dev. Now just make them more interesting too
It might sound harsh at the end of a review, but I think the lucky ones of the characters in this VN, is actually MC's mom. At least based on current content - what a bloody drag this was.
Again, apologies to Wingmen Labs if this review came off as "hostile" etc.
Just my 100% unfiltered honest opinion.
There's nothing saying that this can't become a friggin great VN, but right NOW, there's literally hundreds of more interesting VNs - in MY opinion.
I do wish the absolute best to the dev, for this VN. And I truly do want to see where this one ends up eventually. I just hope the journey gets more..fun and exciting.
And dear Dev, I know you care about this VN and opinions, so again, sorry to not joining the flock of yes-men with a 5-star, but if you ever want more opinions from me or need clarifications of whatever I've said in this review, do reach out. There's only so much you can fit in a review - and this one is already way, waay too long. (bonus cookie to anyone that read this entire review)
It's funny, I think we(as the players) are supposed to have the hots for Ruby. Yet the female I personally want to know more about, is for some reason, Melina..dunno WHY. But she's more interesting to me than any of the other "ladies" - again I dunno why. (not a milf-fetish or anything like that lol)
super shortened summary:
Story somehow gets praised in other reviews. Yet there isn't really that much of a story. There's no real hook, nothing that made me feel like "damn I cant wait for the next episode". I'm literally bored out of my mind.
Lewd scenes are bad and good. Animations are often decent. But no real build up, it's zero feelings or emotions involved. Literally feels like dev just threw in random sex scenes to fill a quota. Oh and pulling from my so-so memory now, I'm pretty sure there's not a single image of a pussy or penetration. Add all this together, you can have the greatest animations of all times(which this is not!) and yet the lewd scenes fall very VERY flat. These scenes are NOT hot, and are about as interesting as the rest of the game - that's to say, not very.
The so called "love interests" implies they are interesting. They are not. Most of the ladies have NO depth - another weird comment in most of the weird reviews here. Story aint great. The ladies are somewhat unique, but not much depth, makes it really hard to really care for or like any of them.
3 out of 5 is all I can give it as of now (Episode 2). I *WILL* if warrented, edit this review after several more updates, IF there's a valid reason to change my score. it's really more a 3.5.
Conclusion, based on the *current* content - the real winner here really was MC's mom.