Okay I have no idea why people rave on about this VN so much.
Storywise it's not bad but getting a bit over the top with the amount of villains who have it in for Charlotte and Emma but I guess we have to have the threat factor an ever constant I suppose. It's almost like a cartoon with baddies coming out of the woodwork. The school stuff just felt silly though.
Also, why would the baddie who went after Emma before MC stops him permanently, tell Charlotte to keep the MC on and not get rid of him...thus making his own plans harder? also why did he recommend MC? it just doesn't make sense.
Characters...okay I'm just going to say it...probably upset all those simping over them but fuck it.
I find Charlotte annoying. I get the whole abuse thing and she hates/distrusts guys because of it but damn I find her schizo persona annoying. I actually tried her path until the part when MC kills the dude and she starts coming out with how she can't be near him but admits to her sister she would have wanted him to kill her attacker...oh ffs. At that point I restarted and went for Lucy who has a more appealing personality - apart from when she bosses the MC around.
Suzi...talk about a massive bitch who needs drop kicked into the nearest waste bin. Her screaming, aggressive rants make her the most unappealing ungrateful stupid bitch ever. I wish MC would tell her to shut the fuck up! I couldn't stand her.
Emma is actually pretty sweet but naive as hell thanks to mommy dearest treating her like a 5 year old. So far it's hard to see her as a LI as she is so immature despite her figure. Feels a bit creepy to be honest.
Lucy is the stereotypical "slut" type of char with a heart of gold underneath but living under big sis's shadow which makes her vulnerable and bitter.
She is fun though, especially compared to the other females in her family.
The chars just swing back and forth too much at times and half the time feel like cliches out of a cheap dime novel. One really annoying thing is how the big bad ass MC acts scared when these women start getting aggressive with him. Really? You can be professional but still not take shit from clients. I doubt most bodyguards would. No way I would take that kind of crap from a client, they would be told to button it or look for a new bodyguard. Suzi would just be told to shut her toxic face..
Renders are very average, nothing that jumps out compared to some games on here. I can live with that if the story and chars really draw me in though but unfortunately in this case, nope.
Updates are pretty slow for this game and there is very little adult scenes which means probably by the time you get them it will be near end game. For me that's not a problem if the love interest hooks you so much that it's worth it. I don't feel that with any of them in this, so I find it more a case of losing interest over time than being invested.
All in all I just found this a completely average VN that left me wondering what all the hype was about. I also found myself not really caring much about the characters apart from Emma really.
I wont be bothering to check for future updates but good luck to the dev regardless.
Storywise it's not bad but getting a bit over the top with the amount of villains who have it in for Charlotte and Emma but I guess we have to have the threat factor an ever constant I suppose. It's almost like a cartoon with baddies coming out of the woodwork. The school stuff just felt silly though.
Also, why would the baddie who went after Emma before MC stops him permanently, tell Charlotte to keep the MC on and not get rid of him...thus making his own plans harder? also why did he recommend MC? it just doesn't make sense.
Characters...okay I'm just going to say it...probably upset all those simping over them but fuck it.
I find Charlotte annoying. I get the whole abuse thing and she hates/distrusts guys because of it but damn I find her schizo persona annoying. I actually tried her path until the part when MC kills the dude and she starts coming out with how she can't be near him but admits to her sister she would have wanted him to kill her attacker...oh ffs. At that point I restarted and went for Lucy who has a more appealing personality - apart from when she bosses the MC around.
Suzi...talk about a massive bitch who needs drop kicked into the nearest waste bin. Her screaming, aggressive rants make her the most unappealing ungrateful stupid bitch ever. I wish MC would tell her to shut the fuck up! I couldn't stand her.
Emma is actually pretty sweet but naive as hell thanks to mommy dearest treating her like a 5 year old. So far it's hard to see her as a LI as she is so immature despite her figure. Feels a bit creepy to be honest.
Lucy is the stereotypical "slut" type of char with a heart of gold underneath but living under big sis's shadow which makes her vulnerable and bitter.
She is fun though, especially compared to the other females in her family.
The chars just swing back and forth too much at times and half the time feel like cliches out of a cheap dime novel. One really annoying thing is how the big bad ass MC acts scared when these women start getting aggressive with him. Really? You can be professional but still not take shit from clients. I doubt most bodyguards would. No way I would take that kind of crap from a client, they would be told to button it or look for a new bodyguard. Suzi would just be told to shut her toxic face..
Renders are very average, nothing that jumps out compared to some games on here. I can live with that if the story and chars really draw me in though but unfortunately in this case, nope.
Updates are pretty slow for this game and there is very little adult scenes which means probably by the time you get them it will be near end game. For me that's not a problem if the love interest hooks you so much that it's worth it. I don't feel that with any of them in this, so I find it more a case of losing interest over time than being invested.
All in all I just found this a completely average VN that left me wondering what all the hype was about. I also found myself not really caring much about the characters apart from Emma really.
I wont be bothering to check for future updates but good luck to the dev regardless.