VN - Ren'Py - Hiroki's Nightmare [v0.1] [Yuumi]

The writing is bad. And not bad as in oh there are some typing mistakes and plot holes, but bad as in that makes absolutely no sense to the point that I came back to this thread after playing to check if the game was MTL or not.

I know it's a porn game and that shouldn't matter much as people just play it to jerk off to the sex but this is just ridiculous. It's not as if the images are hot enough to make it worth it either. There are plenty better honeyselect renders out there.

I know my opinion is going to be unpopular, because it's a niche game. But there are games where the main theme is NTR and they have good renders and a good story.
In this game, the story is terrible and so are the renders. Seeing this game, I downloaded the previous versions and played them yesterday. The truth is, the girl goes from 0 to 100 in one scene. In the first scene she is a normal girl, in the second she is fully tattooed and is a whore.
The narrator then tries to explain how she came to be like this, but nothing fits and everything is forced.
There are other alternatives, as I say, with a good story, a progression of corruption and not this game that failed to give me even an erection, and look, the NTR is not the topic that I am most passionate about, but I don't dislike it either.

English is not my original language, some parts have been translated with Google Translate. Sorry for the inconvenience.