RPGM Holdcraft Chronicles: Aki [Ch. 5.1] [Seez]

[Samuraibear]

I've enjoyed the game until the last scene, which was just rape no matter how I look at it.
Spoiler for 4.5.
With how Nicole cum works, all that corruption and stuff, her being a friend and MC refusing when asked for permission to fuck Saki, isn't Nicole feeding Saki cum in her sleep resulting in Saki corruption a direct betrayal to MC, her mother and showing that Nicole is in the end just a demon and not worth trusting just as the mother said? It shifts the tone a lot and while I would be fine with it if that was the game theme, I'm not when it's done like this, it really felt like betrayal and pissed me off.
With this shift in tone, I hope they are not all buddy-buddy when what Nicole did is revealed and Nicole becomes an enemy.


Unless I missed something and I'm completely wrong, misreading the situation.

Yeah that scene was weird when it felt like she was trying to be better than that. Especially since she didn't like how hard of addict that one chick became because of her. That her willingly doping someone seems way out of character. But this is also on aki for being the world's biggest enabler and not dropping the demon with addictive semen like a hot lump of coal.

 

[SwchBlade]

I really enjoyed that scene.

 

[DarkLurker12]

The scene was pretty good, just that the surrounding narrative was out of place.

As long as she becomes an enemy it's fine, if not that's some bullshit and my guess is that's not the dev's goal, but who knows. I have a vague idea why this scene happened and where it's heading story wise, but it could have been done in a different way that fit the narrative.

Honestly thats just unfortunate.

I really like how Nichole was always trying her best while blinded by lust. I played up to Ch4 and was waiting on ch5 to continue. Loved how everything was leading to a happily corrupted household with no real antagonist, just a powderkeg setup. I hope the full context of the scene in question doesn't end up making Nichole the badguy.

We got enough villianous bulls in porngames.

 

[Creator Seez]

I think you guys are over thinking this a tad.
I won't say anymore for fear of spoilers.

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[Samuraibear]

I think you guys are over thinking this a tad.
I won't say anymore for fear of spoilers.

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hey man I have no doubts you have a plan. just pointing out its weird how much of a switch up this was for Nicole

 

[Rabonixxx]

I think you guys are over thinking this a tad.
I won't say anymore for fear of spoilers.

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Yeah and game is fine the way it is, I mean, the moment you put more characters, was obviously what´s gonna happen ; and I like it

 

[SidneyV]

Can someone post the mobile version?

 

[Creator Seez]

Can someone post the mobile version?

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[BrandonSuns]

Today I learned that Mac users can't use rar files. So, I'm uploading a zip version now. It'll be ready in a couple hours. I'll edit this post with the link when it's done.

Mac Zip: MEGA

Hello friend.
Mac user here! We Mac users actually very much can open rar files using a very handy app called The Unarchiver.
This app isn't standard on a Mac but it's often preferred over the default app for it, Archive Utility, because it allow you to open all files it can + more.
So rather than go the extra mile and waste time on an unnecessary compression just for Mac users, compress it to rar and give them the advice to download The Unarchiver unto their Mac instead; they'll be happy with it once they learn how well it works.
I hope this info was useful to you.
Thank you as well!

Cheers!

 

[Alandir]

I've enjoyed the game until the last scene, which was just rape no matter how I look at it.
Spoiler for 4.5.
With how Nicole cum works, all that corruption and stuff, her being a friend and MC refusing when asked for permission to fuck Saki, isn't Nicole feeding Saki cum in her sleep resulting in Saki corruption a direct betrayal to MC, her mother and showing that Nicole is in the end just a demon and not worth trusting just as the mother said? It shifts the tone a lot and while I would be fine with it if that was the game theme, I'm not when it's done like this, it really felt like betrayal and pissed me off.
With this shift in tone, I hope they are not all buddy-buddy when what Nicole did is revealed and Nicole becomes an enemy.


Unless I missed something and I'm completely wrong, misreading the situation.

I find it weird because the situation could very easily be framed completely differently.
If you just keep the frames exactly the same, you could easily change the text to make it so that either Nicole doesn't notice or that she does but it was an accident. Given that its out and dripping and she had to pick up Saki to get her back to her bed.
That being said what is shown isn't exactly new for Nichole either. She has been scheming and tricking quite a few times since she told aki everything. She planned Jake's transformation with her sister and then tells Aki that she doesn't know how he'll change.
She sends her wife after Jake and then asks Aki if she can do that after she has already done it.
Ever since the demon reveal she hasn't exactly been an angel, so I don't think this is an unprecedented as you guys claim.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

I've enjoyed the game until the last scene, which was just rape no matter how I look at it.
Spoiler for 4.5.
With how Nicole cum works, all that corruption and stuff, her being a friend and MC refusing when asked for permission to fuck Saki, isn't Nicole feeding Saki cum in her sleep resulting in Saki corruption a direct betrayal to MC, her mother and showing that Nicole is in the end just a demon and not worth trusting just as the mother said? It shifts the tone a lot and while I would be fine with it if that was the game theme, I'm not when it's done like this, it really felt like betrayal and pissed me off.
With this shift in tone, I hope they are not all buddy-buddy when what Nicole did is revealed and Nicole becomes an enemy.


Unless I missed something and I'm completely wrong, misreading the situation.

I don't really think there's the malice people are reading into it. We've seen that Nicole wants to be a better person many times, but that she also falls to her own intrusive horny thoughts fairly often. I don't think she maliciously decided to turn Aki's sister into a cumslut. I think she just couldn't resist the intrusive thoughts to teach her a lesson for being a bitch. Not to say it was morally justified but malice implies a certain level of planning and intent that I really don't think Nicole was showing at that exact moment.

 

[Asura066]

Hell, if Nicole hadn't asked MC before or MC hadn't explicitly said no then everything would be passable, as of now Nicole ignored the one thing that MC ever asked of her not to do. Or if the frames were reversed and Saki made a move first, there were many ways to make it ambiguous.
As for her not being an angel, sure, but this one went quite a bit further considering the circumstances.

I mean, teaching a lesson by addicting someone and corrupting them is just something else. I'm not saying she did it maliciously, but if that's her nature and she can't resist it even in these circumstances - possibly permanently affecting a family member of a close friend despite an explicit prohibition from said friend and the mother that just started trusting her - then what she said about changing her ways and that she affected MC only by accident was simply a lie or at best a dangerous half-truth.

That's how I see it at least, I only point it out because otherwise the writing was pretty good, so if this won't be adressed it will be a major turn off for me.

This gets thrown out the window when you see that she internationally knows that it does. When she feeds it to the MC sister.

 

[comrade007]

Yeah, if she is not a friend and is just using the MC, that's makes sense (and that's how it looks like right now), if she is a friend then this doesn't make sense at all and this is too big to just brush aside: "Oops, I forcibly addicted your sister to drugs in her sleep, but we are still friends and it's okay even if you told me not to do it, she likes drugs now that she is addicted."

It was just a weird tone shift that I'm not sure if it's intentional or will be ignored as just one of Natalie antics.

As others have stated I really don't think there was malice in that scene.

I'd have to replay it again but, wasn't it stated that it's rare for people to get addicted to futa cum? If it's rare then how would Nichole have known that she would get addicted? And if she didn't know then it wouldn't have been intentional.

The way I read it was more of a fetish/in the moment thing and Nichole is excited to fuck another hot fox girl.

Now clearly she is addicted and the repercussions of that will be interesting to see how it plays out.

But that's just my take.

 

[Samuraibear]

As others have stated I really don't think there was malice in that scene.

I'd have to replay it again but, wasn't it stated that it's rare for people to get addicted to futa cum? If it's rare then how would Nichole have known that she would get addicted? And if she didn't know then it wouldn't have been intentional.

The way I read it was more of a fetish/in the moment thing and Nichole is excited to fuck another hot fox girl.

Now clearly she is addicted and the repercussions of that will be interesting to see how it plays out.

But that's just my take.

actual Nicole was surprised and thought Aki was immune. which she isn't she just good at hiding or she has hit the danger zone like the other girl has

 

[comrade007]

actual Nicole was surprised and thought Aki was immune. which she isn't she just good at hiding or she has hit the danger zone like the other girl has

When did that happen? Nevermind I remember. It was in the demon reveal scene right? So clearly Nichole doesn't plan around people being addicted lol.

 

[Gabrielss]

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I really like how the chapter is coming along but I want to make sure that it is in the best possible state for you guys. So, I’m going to take an extra week. Honestly, there isn’t THAT much work to be done but between the last bit of programming and play testing, it always takes longer than I expect.
In the meantime enjoy some of the teasers that I have been posting on discord.
I changed the bar location to an arcade bar. I also wanted to share a scrapped version of the shower scene at the beach. The new version is much better in my opinion.
I'll be posting the rest of the teasers over the next few hours on the appropriate tiers.

 

[Asura066]

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I really like how the chapter is coming along but I want to make sure that it is in the best possible state for you guys. So, I’m going to take an extra week. Honestly, there isn’t THAT much work to be done but between the last bit of programming and play testing, it always takes longer than I expect.
In the meantime enjoy some of the teasers that I have been posting on discord.
I changed the bar location to an arcade bar. I also wanted to share a scrapped version of the shower scene at the beach. The new version is much better in my opinion.
I'll be posting the rest of the teasers over the next few hours on the appropriate tiers.

You got the other tiers one to0?

 

[Creator Seez]

As others have stated I really don't think there was malice in that scene.

I'd have to replay it again but, wasn't it stated that it's rare for people to get addicted to futa cum? If it's rare then how would Nichole have known that she would get addicted? And if she didn't know then it wouldn't have been intentional.

The way I read it was more of a fetish/in the moment thing and Nichole is excited to fuck another hot fox girl.

Now clearly she is addicted and the repercussions of that will be interesting to see how it plays out.

But that's just my take.

Your take is right on the money.

Nope, it's highly addictive and corrupts. The rare part was how fast her body changed.

If it's not malice then it's simply a disregard for others.

It's fine if she is just using MC and is not really a friend, as long as it's a part of narrative. At least for me.

This is incorrect. Nichole's cum has corrupting/transformative effect because of her being a demon. The addiction only happens if you are futa compatible which is very rare.

 

[EdgeOfShadow]

This is incorrect. Nichole's cum has corrupting/transformative effect because of her being a demon. The addiction only happens if you are futa compatible which is very rare.

I've double checked and I admit I was wrong. I've combined two conversations in one and jumbled the parts from others plus this scene was just asking for misunderstanding:

In my defence, I've had some bad experiences with plot holes on this site.
Sorry for annoying you guys.
Deleting my comments.

 

[Creator Seez]

I've double checked and I admit I was wrong. I've combined two conversations in one and jumbled the parts from others plus this scene was just asking for misunderstanding:


In my defence, I've had some bad experiences with plot holes on this site.
Sorry for annoying you guys.
Deleting my comments.

Yeah I agree it could have been worded better.

But hey, no worries on my end. I appreciate you being this invested in the story. I hope you enjoy the rest.