VN - RPGM - Completed - Honey Trap Amnesia [v1.0] [MSub-Masochist]

Interesting idea and the theme is quite niche since your girlfriend gets cuckolded. But holy moly is the writing bad like really bad.

It doesnt matter how good the animations are or how well drawn the scenes are when the writing is not there. There's zero build up or tension, the first girl just jumps on you, gives you a titfuck and if you give in the dude immediately falls in love with a gameover.

Theres no feeling of immorality or excitement when the writing is so goofy, instead of a slow corruption with the feeling of getting seduced gradually it jumps right into action. Its just so boring.

The premise makes the game sound better than what it actually is.

You have H scenes with the girls and choose whether to succumb (resulting in a very short "description with fade to black ending" styled game over) or reject them and eventually end up with the boring vanilla girl. So, there's really only one ending that isn't a couple short sentences.

loved the game i hope the developer keeps making games and i wish for everyone to have a great day, i also loved the music and designs, and hope i can see more games like this (good efforts and quality), hope to see more games in this page i love it

Hello! It's me, Illidan! Today i will review this.... Yet another VN, which was made in RPGMaker? Man... Logs don't work here and story is VERY short. Anyway, i will review this hgame by these categories : Translation, Story, Hscenes

Let's start!
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Translation 4/5 - Well... I had some issues with certain parts. But i didn't look into text too much, because i read very fast this one

Story 1/5 - God.... That's Confes##on G##e(censored so certain mods won't punish me) 2.0, but much worser. I will just shortly explain what is happening. MC is amnesiac guy, who was confessed by 2 girls before, have 1 ex and currently dates Kaede. So what is the major problem? First girl is crazy stalker which pushes herself into your house, does handjob, boobjob and starts raping you at sleep. What the hell with this story? 2nd loli girl, isn't much better tbh. While ex is uber toxic and it's easy to understand, why MC part his ways with her. Footjob as first scene and then mop job??? All entire time, MC just got instantly pinned down and forced into all of this, without any kind of resisting. Unless you do choices. There is no even endings for other girls, except for main one. Because if you give into temptation, you instantly get ending.

Hscenes 1/5 - Okay, so you put 10 scenes with not the best L2D into 2gb space RPGMaker game. That's all? I don't even talk about how art looks AI like, even if it's just tracing, considering how it was shown in the end. It doesn't even look good at all
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Conclusion 1/5 - This hgame doesn't deserve any kind of attention. Story is utter trash, low amount of hscenes and there is no variation inside scene, like in Confes##on g##e. This shit also takes 2gb of space.... Why not simply use Renpy or some other engine to make VN, instead of using rpgmaker?