VN - Ren'Py - Hoping for a Brighter Future [Ep.3 v0.1] [Fuuccck]

This game is not for everyone, there is a lot of forced content here, so it is natural to drive players away, but overall I still think it is a good game.

Fortunately, the content with the brother is optional, I avoided it as much as possible, but I still think the brother should not exist, I get irritated just seeing him, maybe others like him, but I don't like him.

There are other points that I don't like, such as:
- The MC being a sociopath.
- Sabrina is supposedly 18 years old, but has the body of an 9-year-old girl.
- Amelia, the most attractive girl in the game, someone who I thought would be the "goddess" of the school, ends up being someone with no friends and who suffers from bullying.
- I really liked Gabi, but not the relationship with her and the drama that comes with it. (we were already warned by her about the third and scary guy we will have to face to be with her).

The quality of the renders, including poses, angles and faces, are very good, the animations are also good, above average.

The models, I would say, are average overall, some are very good, others not so much.

The game has its problems, it's hard to judge, but I read all the dialogue and I want more, so I'll recommend it.

I didn't like many of the girls and I think this forced harem will annoy me in the future, so I hope the dev considers changing that.

It would also be good to add a content filter, I'm sure many players will appreciate it, add a checkbox for players to mark what they don't want to see, and even if it still happens, at least skip those scenes, other games do that and it works.

The game starts at what is likely the halfway point of the story. There is a story. It's here somewhere, but the dev felt the need to skip it. You 'play' as the mc, he's an asshole and a massive simp for his anorexic little sister. In truth the sister is the real main character as nearly every choice you make and the plot tends to revolve around her and her whims. How did it get this way? Don't know.

For some reason the mc is leaving his home and on the road to his aunt's house in another country. Why? No clue. His 'family' consists of a mom, sister and brother, who is dressed like a girl with cat ears for some reason. How come? This isn't explained well, shocker! The mc is just an abusive asshole to his little brother for some unknown reason.

As a side note, wtf happened to the mc's dick? It has to be one of the craziest wieners I've had the misfortune of seeing in any weg. It's like a corndog that was left in the microwave for too long and partially exploded. Couple that with the amount of blowjobs the anorexic sister gives and it just was uncomfortable to play through.

This type of storytelling could work if you had some good characters to pull it together. However, the whole game is dominated by the anorexic sister's presence. I got to say, the way the mc simps for her is really off-putting. Sure, some of the models look good, sometimes, but with the way things are shaping up, and how everything revolves around the malnourished little sister, does it really matter? Will any other relationship, or hell even a friendship, be able to flourish if a tamper tantrum throwing child keeps interrupting every scene?

tl;dr this needs to go back to the drawing board

It's a bit rough around the edges by ep3 v0.1, but to me it stands out from the usual incest/harem games by not trying to mess around. It's straight to the action and I can respect that. The characters are rough around the edges but that makes them interesting. I hope the dev keeps on improving as at least for me this game shows great promise to be quite interesting. The characters don't fuck around, instead they fuck around so to speak.

How in the hell is this rated so highly? I am sorry I just do not see it in what I just skipped my way through.

Number one the story, what I can make out of one, because teh Dev may know it but they certainly chose not to share it with the rest of us, makes no sense at all and is boring on top of that.

The family and the extended family are all wierdos. Not a single one is actually likeable. The sister is a complete bitch with her I am a blueberry look. The forced submissiveness to her and her piss fetish was unenjoyable. The homosexual brother that the MC is forced into dominating despite there being no explanation for it given is pathetic an dnot fun. The slut mother/stepmother/former father's whore is supposed to be a person he fucks according to dialog but is merely a toy he gets a blowjob from and feels up on occasion. Hell there is even a conversation about the MC using condoms but the only sex he has is with a paid prostitute who instantly falls in love with him and wants him to take her pimps place. Oh and that was another thing, he had to borrow 30 bucks from mom to put gas in the car but has 200 bucks to spend on a piece of gas station bathroom ass? Makes no sense. When I say only sex I mean where he sticks his penis into a vagina. Apparently that was there to justify the vaginal sex tag. Shit tons of silly Japanese fetish scenes but little decent fap material to be found here.


So lets see. Piss poor story. Piss poor fap material. Cute girls but that is all they are is cute. One is way too thin to be considered attractive at all. Here is looking at you blueberry freak.

Somehow I get that the Dev is going to be forcing to be fucking the Aunt or whatever the hell she is and all her spawns as well before it is over. Not sure about the vampire daughter though (pale skin and blood red eyes with white hair. Too bad she isn't an albino. Dev got that wrong too.)

Sorry there just is not anything likeable here to be worth coming back for.

Alright, so this game really hits a lot of my kinks – in the best way possible. The story is solid, and for a game made with HS renders, it delivers on all fronts. Honestly, there’s not a whole lot to critique – I just wanted to give it a quick shout-out.

Is it the most beautiful or deeply written story I’ve ever played? Not really. But it is hot as hell and incredibly kinky.

Also, huge thanks to the dev for including those little sound effects – they add a surprising amount of immersion and really elevate the experience.

If I had to nitpick, I’d say the game could benefit from a good English proofreader. Some of the early dialogues feels off or awkwardly phrased, which can pull you out of the moment. But beyond that, great job overall.
Keep it up, Dev – looking forward to more

I like this game very much, and I am also looking forward to its development. This game is simply the most amazing work I have played in recent years! First of all, its story deeply attracted me, and the pornographic scene made me want to stop.
The game screen and sound effects are equally impeccable. It's like being in a real virtual country. Personally, I like the scene of the game very much, and the protagonist is also very powerful. Especially in pornographic scenes, I like deep throat content very much. It will be even more exciting if the game can add raised content. Generally speaking, I really like it very much, and I often visit the game update progress. Every time I enter the game page, I hope that there will be an update prompt, which is really wonderful.

⠀ Can't say much about plot or characters yet, as they are in their infancy as of now, but it's all interesting enough to be somewhat invested. Dialogue, though, not to my taste, is pretty realistic and down to earth, so that's gotta count for something. However, what I do have a strong opinion on, is stage direction. It's phenomenal. The scenes are very emotional, immersive and hot. Job well done on that. I was also impressed by sound design and abundance of SFX for every little action/detail, this VN feels more alive compared to the competition.
⠀ On a less positive note, choices are basically just fetish toggles and there is very little variety when it comes to possible decision making. Also script needs some serious proofreading.

+15 бонусов СберСпасибо и миску Чебупелей этому работяге.

This one is an excellent experience, it's got an very good sense of eroticism and knows exactly how to work around the admittedly quite primitive models to make sex scenes work. The characterisation is top-notch, the Protagonist is more than just your usual generic block of wood that most VN's have, and the translation is good aside from some minor pronoun errors. Not very long, but definitely worth a look.

Story 8/10
Animations 9/10
Characters 9/10
Renders 9/10
Music 8/10
Enjoyability 9/10

Incredible game, the sex scene are incredible and hot, the animation is incredible, the sound and effect i like so much its give life to the game, i hope for more story about this game, and i hope he will continue loooong time

This is not a state of the art story nor literature quality novel. This has many, many moments of boring and uninteresting text to read, so you skip it. Then why the high review. Because the erotica is fenomenal. Only the top 15 games of the site can compeat with the scenes. Im not talking about the animation it needs still little work. But the scenes are really kicking it like a high quality drink, you get wasted.

v0.8
The story is alright. Nothing special. It works.

The art is decent. Sex scenes are pretty hot. The girls are also hot.

Can't wait for more. 5/5 for now, dev should continue with this standard.

This one is hit or miss, but it hit me so hard that I can’t rate it other than a five. It’s incest harem fantasy, but it lacks cheesy cliches and awkwardness that plages the genre so much. Your relationships with sister and mother are quite developed and she especially sees you more as an equal partner and man of the house, which is quite refreshing. I really want to praise writing for how very raw and real it feels and conveys the heavy atmosphere in which our characters find themselves. Your dialogs with your extended family members shows that each of them have some cockroaches in the head and gives you hints on how we're gonna corrupt them later. (Important note: I read novel in Russian, and skimmed through the English translation lightly. It’s not horrible, but it loses some of the charm, I really hope translation would be improved in the future versions.)

Some would say that our sister is too annoying and controls us too much, but their dynamic is more like a snowball that gains more and more speed, pushing each other to the new levels of depravity. It started with sister introducing MC to incest fantasy and quickly spiraled out of control, until things became real with our sister, then our mother, then we started influencing out brother, and now we going to wreck our extended family. She is certainly more deprived and spoiled, but to me it’s quite clear that this is only the beginning of her arс and in the future MC would control her more and more. And I have to admit, while usually I’m not into that kind of stuff, I thoroughly enjoyed bullying and sissifying our brother.

Oh, and animations are quite smooth and enjoyable and we have the sound effects. It really checks all the boxes for me. Can’t wait for the continuation of the story.

So much potential ^^
The Story is okey and the scenes are fine, but this Visual Novel has something: that taboo feeling that I was'n feel in a long time. Because a lot of games has it, but the way of implement it
it's what's matters.
I hope an update about Kenny soon

Storh 1/5
This story has a very weird start and an even more stupid way of asking for fetishes, you drive a car and take a break so a girl can take a piss, then MC will go watch her take a piss and then ask AFTER if you liked it or not?
So forcing a urine on the player with the first 2 mins of the game might not be the smartest thing to do if you want players to like the game...also no tag for it.

Next you find out the female bimbo who adopted MC is apprently someone MC is fucking as well? so now a forced LI and forced relationship, forced step mother sex shit, forced big tit fetish, oh and a forced loli as well ofc, whos as big of a pervert as MC apprently....so yeah game really dosent improve does it....and this is still within the first few mins of gameplay....

MC is just a pervert and an evil dude treating others like shit as well and no not in a fun way either, he has some kind of furry dog/cat looking slave thing which is just hes little brother? which he treats like shit, first its a he then mc wants to change it to a she i dunno weird shit.

The loli that is forced on you look like an alien or someone who hasent eaten in 10 years so she has an extremly thin both, i normaly like smols/loli types but this one is just a no.

As for choices you might as well forget it, you arent really in controle of anything importen like relationships and such.
Im expecting this to be a pure mindless fuckfest at some point, atleast thats what its shown up to now.

Some times text shows in russian or whatever it is....and it surely dosent help that the english isent good either....game even starts up with a russian text or whatever it is, so you have to try to find the english setting in a menu you cant read.

Girls 1/5
Its a first for me that i dident even like the smol but way to thin, dident like the milf either, so theres really not much there for me personaly.

Animations 1/5
Pretty poor and some scenes are so dark that you can barely see whats going on

Music 0/5
Silent game, there is a few effects but dosent do much for the game.

Very poor quality story. I appreciate that the dev tried to do something different, but they missed the mark with this one.

I'm usually against infodumps, but in this case, I would've preferred a long infodump at the start so we can have an idea of what the hell is going on. Ideally, dev would've drip fed us information, but you don't really know what happened and why everyone is acting so weird. The characters know, so they don't bother explaining, but you're supposed to get everything.

The characters are really unlikeable. There's a little brother who is apparently an asshole, but he has no dialogue because MC is bullying him and he's afraid to speak. We aren't told what he did, so we just have to bully him not even knowing why.

The MC is really unlikeable. He has no problem bullying his little brother and is basically his little sister's dog. He does everything she tells him and forgives every transgression, but when his mother, very reasonably demands common sense from him, he snaps at her.

The mother is also not very likeable, apparently very judgemental about her son's transition and is overall incompetent enough to be unable to keep her kids in check.

If that wasn't bad enough, the relationships are forced. I really dislike the little sister and I hoped that I would be given some choices, but the choices are mostly about whether or not you want to tell her she's pretty, massage her feet or tell her that you liked seeing her pee. Pretty strange choices, but basically, you have to be okay with her to even attempt to enjoy this game, because most of it revolves around her.

Lastly, the dialogue is horrendous. Engrish everywhere and with so little information and context, it's impossible to decipher what the hell is going on in most conversations.

Only two releases so far, so there's time to get better, but getting through the beginning feels like a chore. I think the introduction to the story needs to be completely remade. Give the player more information and context, get a proofreader and add more choices. I can't see anyone actually liking the anorexic little sister and having to put up with her really drags the game down more than necessary.

I guess I missed the humiliation tag.

Pro -
Female models are good
Lilly is crazy fun
Store over all is ok
Cons -
If you are not into humiliation as I am not then this is not for you
At the start the story was hard to understand
Had to find the English button as it was all in another language to start

Overall I found the MC to be unlikable and the story to be lacking.

Should get more support, great potential here. Seems to be a classic harem game with good amount of humiliation but also with interesting characters. Love to have a trans character in a harem, not much games do that