VN - Others - Horse Magic [v0.2.00 Plus] [Abyss Koi]

First up: I really like the art.
The characters look cute and unique.
Thats worth the 1*.

Thats it. Everything else is terrible.
Your MC already has a boyfriend.
Your best friend, which is the forced main LI, is the college whore who literally fucks a random dude right before you booty call her.

The story would be nice and interesting with actual choices, but so far it is just kinetic.
The interface is some custom crap with devoid save features, no rollback and unnecessary complicated continuation options.

It is short and early in development, so maybe the dev gets a grip and restarts. Make an interesting main LI, actual choices, fet rid of boyfriends and focuses on the fun futa story. And please give a save/load feature, don't screw your players

The overview feels longer than the game itself. Which is pretty bad news for something that's supposed to be a visual novel...
The preview images are almost literally the entire game, but maybe I'm missing something. Maybe it's super-duper early in development?

The overall art is good.

The writing is boring. And, again, for a visual novel, there's very little of it.


The NSFW is fine enough, if also a little bland. The characters are pretty sexy, but I'd like to see more scenes.


I'm going to assume this is early in development. If more characters, scenes, and writing gets added, my score will increase.
As-is, can't really say this is anything special. But we'll see.