Ren'Py - Horton Bay Stories - Jake [v0.5.1.2] [Lumphorn Games]

Horton Bay Stories - Jake [v0.5.1.2]

Bad, if not for the girls/models and some kinky scenes. You're more than welcome to try this VN, even tho most of it is rough and janky. That's it.

Story - ~0,5/5. It is present here.
Choices - 3.5/5. You can choose some things.
Characters - 0-2,6/5. Pretty one-dimensional. You mostly won't care about them.
Models/animations - 3/5. They're good. I'm really surprised how good they look, but sometimes there are a lot of junk and just passable moments.
Grammar - 3/5. Eh, whatever.

I only started this game. So far its been a fun game. You can turn off NTR. Some parts of game still include males trying to poach your harem, but as I said its still fun. Looking forward to more content.

Graphics are decent.
Story is good.
Have decent teeth for British.
Funny Posters, esp in Doctors office.
Prego content is always a plus.

Built in cheat system for those that cant stand the grind. (its in phone>settings>cheat enable). Comes with warning not to save a cheats used game but whatever.


Should finish by adding; You don't have to be "Jake", can pick a name of your choosing.

This review/opinion is most likely opposite of popular preferences and opinions, but models in this game are such a fresh and great thing to look at.

Personally, I feel honestly tired of every popular game having the same character models with samish proportions and basically no body imperfections - it gets boring real fast.

Most of the models in the game could be considered not conventionally pretty, but it makes this game so much hotter - it does feel much more immersive and real. Characters in this game still are attractive (at least in my opinion) with great bodies, but the key factor is variety and realistic body proportions - which is such a small portion of games on this forum.

The only things - that currently annoy me, are definitely the sandbox . It can get a little confusing and you definitely will be needing a walkthrough to progress further for some characters. Animations and facial expressions in sex scenes are my second annoynace, some of them are super janky and way too slowed down - faster animations and better facial expressions would make the experience so much better.

I am definitely a huge fan and can't wait to see more from this game developer - most fans of variety and more realistic look will definitely find this game highly enjoyable.

Easily one of the best, largest and most consistently updated games in F95, with lots of girls to pursue, lots of guys to compete against, lots of scenes, and plenty of kinks for almost everyone, with a cohesive (although not always necessarily coherent) story, easyto understand gameplay loop, and a built in guide to progress without trouble.
Having said that, like most games in here, it isn't without it's flaws.
First off, I get the feeling that the idea was to present a different art style from the assets everyone else often uses, with more realistic bodily proportions and characters with their own characteristics, however, there are more than a few characters in desperate need of a glow up, like Lillie (she's like watching gizmo getting railed), the three main female characters (I read somebody saying that they looked like they had been hit with joker gas, and I agree), the three main romantic interests should be easily the most attractive ones, and at this point, I would take Shelley, Marley or Regan over any of them (Adel looks like a young old lady, Christine is easily the joker's sister and Gemma looks like a trappy femboy).
Content wise, updates have been steadily coming in, but as of late, I feel like content has become more and more scarce with every new update (currently two or three scenes per update, if we're lucky), bug correction is much appreciated and so are new characters, but I believe more content with existing characters without updates for several months or even longer than that should be priority (Louise, for example).
Story is good, but little to no advancement as of late.
Gameplay is simple to follow and the guide makes it easy to move along, however, most characters feel inconsequential to the main plot, and most vastly under fleshed out, as do plot points (Mc knows about the serum, it would make sense for him to able to dose girls at, say, scoundrel to make the morality system matter), or perhaps having the principal take care of your scores once you establish a sub/dom relationship with her.
I also suggest Mc character development, like setting up a counter for number of NTR scenes seen, until after reaching a certain number, Mc begins to wonder if he truly dislikes such sightings and his dialogs change in consequence (the opposite isn't necessary, as those who don't like that suff will likely turn NTR off anyways)
Overall, definitely a game that desoite it's shortcomings, shines for it's scope, quantity of content and QoL features.
In any case, these are my two cents, hoping this can be of any help to it's developers.

One word: Awesome. Story wonderful, excitation wonderful, sensuality wonderful. Only the visual reality could be a little better, but it would turn work into VR porn rather than a game. Each move puts you into a different labyrinth. It's a game that doesn't make it easy to predict what will happen to you. If the characters become more realistic during the game development process, this game will definitely become many people's favorite game. Finally, it would be better if a gallery section containing all the sexual scenes was opened.

It is between 2 and 3 stars.

Redeeming qualities - there is a lot of game content and scenes, the dialogues and situation settings are all good. The cheat button inbuilt in the phone works well.

Now about why, it is 2 stars. The faces, those are the most ugly faces you can imagine. Few of the characters are looking decent here, with most young females having a face of grandma with some extra genetic diseases on top of wrinkles. I am not certain why the Developer insists on using such faces, it cannot be hard to change or improve it. Faces alone can bring you nighmares and horrors. In particular take a look at Adel, white haired girl you live with.

Second, the interface. The UI/UX of this game is straight out of 90s, a lot of time is spent scrolling through 50 various buildings or the map trying to find the location to go to.

Amazing game ! good work so far. I love the characters and the scenes. I would love for more content involving Lucas and the girls, some sharing or going 2nd and finishing the girls after Lucas has had his way.

Graphics: 3/5
Models: 3/5
Scenes: 3/5
Story: 5/5
Gameplay: 4/5

An interesting project that surprises for the freedom of choices you can make which involve an evolution of relationships with the characters and the story itself.
In this regard, a more detailed guide could be useful when you are faced with choices to make, so that you can predict what direction the story will take.

Still, it's a good game.

seems like everything of worth while in terms of the sleep sex itself, and the interesting characters are still in development. so when theres more of a game to review, ill review it. however as it stands, animations are good, but the loop could be smoother to be less noticable and more immersive.

Version 0.4.1.6 Another difficult one to review, so much to comment on and it swings wildly from poor to great to meh. So I'll give it a shot.

Graphics - well..different can only describe it. Quality is good, some animations and rather well done. The models, are extremely different and kinda weird, but it is throughout the game. Personally I initially didn't like the models at first, but found after some time it worked and I got into it, and some of the models got better. Many weird faces, large hobbit feet and such...bizarre.

Gameplay - so there is a ton of content in here. It has a sandbox, which is not the easiest to navigate, once you start getting locations they show up on the map (most of them) others are difficult to find and the navigation when walking is kinda messed up and very difficult to use. As for the "Ton of Content" that is probably the entry into one of my problems with this game, finding everything.

Interactions are based of specific times, places, and other actions having been done. Now there is a in game mission hint, and the characters have a simple hint system in the character cards - but there is so much, finding things is a chore - and there is literally dozens of NPCs. The hint system is really burdensome and not intuitive. I keep on playing this game, and I have never gotten every scene as I get bored and can't be bothered to go write down all the times, places I need to be to progress certain LIs.

NTR - this one is interesting, so I am not a NTR or Cuck fan at all, don't even like the swinging thing, cheating is fine, but I do enjoy the stress, and adventure of the possibility of losing the girls. So I leave it on, it really helps with the story line. So with it on, you absolutely see your girlfriend getting fucked by the teacher at the beginning...kinda the main plot moment. After that all the NTR moments I have found can be avoided by doing the right things and the girls don't get fucked...screw up and they do. (there is another scene where they teacher and ex phone you as well) but don't worry, it seems we will be getting revenge on him with his daughter and wife in the future.

So after all that, still a 4 star game for a pile of content, decent graphics, a storyline that is reasonable, good english. Pregnancy system is in place, a few milfs (could use more), impregnation and lots of fucking.

A little fix on the navigation, and a easier hint system would be better it would make this an excellent game. i.e. when with a LI a character card is visible and hints readily available, or even mark a certain LI and her hints and timings would be visible during normal gameplay until you selected another.

Solid hours of gametime if you can get used to the models used.

has sleep sex in the tags, there is only like 1 scene with sleep sex. has rape tag but very little rape content. MC has extremely boring good buy sensibilities. But most of the scenes are decent, though highly repetitive. The models' face look very strange on some of these.

Really underrated game. One of the very few games that I binged to complete. I really really like the Christine character model. Even though it was a sandbox game, it did not feel grindy (also cheat system available to check out other paths). Looking forward to the next update with Christine, as well as the interesting main plotline. Possibilities are endless

My review is for the none NTR path where you have it turned off.

From the very start doing the intro/prologue it already starts to feel off, MC and hes girlfriend and hes friend get into a small arguement which ends with MC trowing them out of the room/house, next MC changes college and moves out due to never wanting to see them again, this is waaay overkill compared to what happened and its extremly clear that its not the real story meaning the real reason is due to the NTR path where hes friend fucks MCs girlfriend.

The problem with that is that its just to easy to spot and its like there has been put 0 effort into making the none NTR path work or make any sense.
Also even with NTR turned off the first time you go to sleep you can pick to dream about your exgirlfriend where you see the hole scene of girlfriend cheating on MC with hes friend....so even with NTR off scenes still shows under dreams which i also found a bit idiotic since it dosent have anything to do with the none NTR story path, it even happens in the game like if you sell a video it will show the NTR video in the none NTR path which is really bad if you dont want it.

Some girls will pretty much just trow them selfs at MC, but atleast most you need to build up a relationship with so thats nice.
In the start i couldent get used to the girls they where/are just ugly, weird looks, some almost look evil, it does get a little bit better later on when you meet a ton of other girls so get past the start and you might find something you like since it does get a little better.

It has one huge issue wich effects the game in a bad way, and thats to many LIs, alot will only have very few scenes and arent given enough screen time and you will also run into "in development" alot, i only just got to the the college and proberly seen it 10+ times, it feels like dev just kept adding stuff but at some point it just gets to big so progress will be very slow with to much that hasent even started yet, like 100% of the teachers and some girls are "in development" right after meeting them for the first time.

Its a bit disappointing to see considering game is more then 2 years old now and so many things hasent even started up yet, even main story has barely got anywhere and same with the main girls gets hit by "in development" pretty fast, no pregnancy yet other then a sign saying they are pregnant, so there really isent all the much in game after 2 years, at this rate it will take another 5+ years to finish.

None NTR Story 2/5
The start felt a bit off due to the missing NTR which made it weird, but atleast the rest of the game it rarely feels as stupid as the start when having NTR off, you will however see NTR like sellings vids it shows worng vids with NTR in none NTR path which is just a no go, alot hate NTR so it just shouldent be there when NTR is off, and it does ruin the story as well since it dosent match up with the storyline in none NTR path.

Animations 3/5
They are pretty decent but not great, some are a bit off and jumpy but most are fine.

Girls/LIs 2/5
Got to say i dident really find many if any of them hot, the faces just seems off to me or even ugly in most cases, some look like aliens with very tin bodies and face dident help either, Adel looks evil and old not sure if its the eyes or the weird facial expressions most LIs has but man to me they just feel off and look worng, it does get a little better later on atleast.

Music 3/5
is average background stuff, no bad but nothing special either.

Sandbox 2/5
It is way to grindy to get money, you use more time on that then anything else, the sandbox works fine with out any issues, the hint system is mostly ok as well.

All in all its not a bad game there just to little content and to many LIs which results in...yeah you guessed it, to little content and to few scenes with the LIs, it really hurts the game when there is to much, and its just not fun to wait for more then a year and never see any content with the girls you want.
Also it makes you waste alot of time trying to raise points with girls that has 0 content but dosent say "end of content" so you wont know there isent any.

Rev @ Horton Bay Stories - Jake [v0.3.7.3]

Art's alright, bit amateurish but passable. The faces though are all Brown-Bag Specials and all the girls need an IV drip of sammiches.

Writing is weak, just like all of these are. Scenario is Mom + 2 Hot Daughters subtype 31: 'mom' is Sister #3 and relations are coated with thin veil of Patreon-pleasing.

Porn's alright. Too much peeing and anal, needs more pregnancy that isn't swung around like Damocles.

Gameplay makes my brain hurt. Unironically. If there's a polar opposite to the Scouts' Orienteering badge I nominate whoever made the map for it. Cardinal directions trade off from screen to screen, and it's entirely possible to walk south so far you wind up at the northernmost screen again, and then walk east far enough to wind up on the northernmost map again. Noneuclidian cartography is this game's most noteworthy contribution.

TLDR: Do you suppose the maps hit the faces and that's why they're all so fucked up?

So im going to keep it shot this games story is pretty good but navigating the game is just awful also i wish i could make is so some of the missions i dont want to do wont pop up like some of the male characters side missions

The game isn´t really good but has potential.

First there are a lot of characters, but most don´t have enough scenes.

The gameplay is trash, it is too user unfriendly navigating is confusing, you can´t change the time except in cheap mode, and the UI is awful looking.

The characters are all pretty boring and have little personality.

The models are either okay or just weird, but I didn´t mind anyone except, Adlen her face look awful as if she was 90 years old.

The sex scenes have okay animations.

There is a lot of NTR so if you don´t like it play something else, there is a option to disable NTR but it feels wrong like it isn´t the way it was intented to play, so I would recommend turning NTR on.


But I wouldn´t recommend it the gameplay ruins it for me.

A solid story and solid visuals held back by clunky progression once you get past the first 70% of the game and some issues with the UI. With either more linearity or more clear directions that were less ponderous to use this game would be top-tier... Also for the love of god someone please make the prequal VN of the GFs becoming sluts in HS.

Well, let's be honest... The blonde is scary as hell... A skinny woman with a piercing seems to have escaped from Buckenwald... And NTR is either you're a cuckold or an alpha... Why you can't fuck girls together, etc., it's not clear... But of course the game is not VN and it is much better than most of the "games" here... But only it is not completed... [v0.3.5.3] if we take the finished version 1.0 and 2021 as a start for the value... Everything is sad. .. I hope the game will be completed and improved...

I've downloaded and played this game about three times in two or so years, so my perspective of its progress has changed in large steps. Initially I thought "meh," the second time I thought "hmmmm," and the third time I thought "this is getting great." I wish I could give it 4.5 stars because it's still not perfect. However, there's so much truly inspired and extraordinary content that it comes closer to five than four stars.

Let's start with the "less than perfect" stuff:

(1) the navigation stuff is still a bit wonky. The devs have done a lot to make it easier, adding hot buttons and a very good map, but early on in the game, before the locations are unlocked, new players should expect to spend an hour or so clicking confusing arrows to navigate through town in the free roam setting. What they were trying to do--immersion in Horton Bay--was ambitious, and I give them credit for that. But my sense of what the cardinal directions were kept my internal compass spinning wildly. I think it's gotten better, however, and I expect further revisions to be made in future updates.

(2) some of the character art, particularly with the earlier characters, takes a while to get used to. Much has been said of this, so I don't really need to go into it. I like how the devs weren't going for "photorealism" but rather a cartoony/caricature feel. It's a fun and unique way to use DAZ. But the characters the MC encounters later in the game are far more easy to look at than the characters encountered earlier in the game. It kind of feels like the artist was improving as the game updates kept rolling out, which is completely understandable. But I'm often left with a feeling that the side characters, because they tend to be much hotter, are more compelling than the main characters who were designed earlier in development. I would almost suggest an artistic overhaul on the first three characters, but that would be a huge pain in the ass given the amazing amount of content the game has.

And this brings me to aspects of which this game is doing great:

(1) The afore-mentioned content. There's SO MUCH here. So many stories, side-stories, places to explore and get lost in. Oh, and lest I forget, a cast of characters that seems to stretch into the thousands. It's a truly impressive accomplishment. And the devs do a great job of connecting everyone together and weaving the stories into each other. The in-game directory of characters really helps keep things straight and points me in the right direction (most of the time) for pursuing character storylines I'd like to explore further. It's taken them a while, but the devs have created an immersive universe which can be explored and enjoyed. Bravo.

(2) The artwork. Yes, I know, I'm contradicting myself. As I said, the earlier artwork and character design felt a bit rough and poorly conceived, but in later updates things have smoothed out to a very impressive extent. In particular, the devs spend a lot of time on animation, which can be a huge headache to pull off in DAZ. But the animations are (generally) well-done, plentiful, and well-integrated in the story (it never feels like, "oh, now it's time for an animated cut scene").

(3) The pace of updates. This is something I was never able to handle, but these devs seem to have found a great production groove. The framework they've established lends itself perfectly to small updates here and there. Devoted fans can upload every update to see what story arcs have been pushed, but more casual players can skip a few updates and then be blown away at the accumulation of content.

(4) The writing is solid. It doesn't feel long-winded or "too talky." Instead, conversations tend to be punchy, brief, and entertaining. The game doesn't take itself too seriously, which I appreciate. There's a lot of content here that caters to many different fetishes.

Overall, this is a fun game, well worth a download and support.

This is a hard one to rate but I can at least give my opinion and review of it.


- Story is stock standard, and I don't mean that as a negative, but more so factually speaking. People did some bad things to you, you moved away from them to start this new life where you won't assumingly interact with them, meet the new roommates, etc.

You won't find anything that's going to surprise you, but that being said you at least have choices, and that's probably the biggest selling point.

- You can walk yourself into a corner and run into NTR or just be a jerk, or perhaps you want to be the nicest chill guy and ignore all the corruption and the so on and so on and you can do it all. It's a big plus, but I feel that it's kind of what the game was built around and things are built on toothpick supports from here.

- It's one of those "grind for stats/money/affection" games, and sometimes that works, but this one it feels a bit more grindy because I never felt the pay off was worth it. Yes you can get the girl and get the thing and so on but, it just feels hallow and I don't know why, perhaps it's what this game made me realize, which is the next point.

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- This game, as I eluded to, made me realize how I thought I played these games was way off; I am a bit shallow and I'm not in fact able to push through if the story is good enough. The female characters in this game are ranging from not bad to borderline nightmare fuel looking like they are literally not human beings with their facial bone structure. Eyebrows creeping up their faces in unnatural ways, eyes looking as if they are simply not humans, random still shots during conversations of faces that look like the characters just pooped their pants in the midst of a sentence with awkward expressions. It really took me out of the game more often than they pulled me into it.

They are certainly unique, which is something I've praised other 3D games for, but this feels like it was trying to simply be different and forgot that these games aren't just random RPGS, they are uh, well erotic games for tickling the brain meat, and when a character walks up and smiles at me and I'm like "Do I need to call your sponsor, cause you look like you fell off the wagon" and not "oooo I'd like to get intimate with you pretty lady", feels like it's missing the entire point.

Not every character is this bad, but there were far too many times that I almost stopped playing altogether because of how off-putting a character model or an expression was.

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- I know this is an unfinished game but it really FEELS like an unfinished game more than others at times. I saw another comment saying this wasn't immersion breaking, but I felt exactly the opposite.



I don't hate this game and there is something there that could still make this really good, but I just can't in good conscious recommend it as is. The people rating this 4 and 5 stars just to "balance out the low ratings" are really doing people a disservice, because it's not a 4/5 rating game right now.