VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Hosting the Quarterback [Ch. 1-9] [kirsESS]

Dear God!

An abomination of a game.
I don't want to aim the critic at the dev but at the game.
What a unimaginative pile of trash game.

Story makes no sense. Humiliation just for the lols. Poor animation and lame art. Horrible dialogue and terrible concept to execute on.

Hopefully the dev learns and improves in the future but this is a good one to AVOID.

Sorry, but the game is terrible.
There is nothing polished - story and writing is quite bad and not consistent, the plot is generic, but not logical... Renders and CGs are inconsistent and average, but mostly the user experience and the actual gameplay is very bad and hard to navigate (each chapter being as separate distribution).

This "game" is without any idea, any introduction and any builing of the story. The dividing to 9 parts is bad for flowing through the story. It is just visual novel with some sex scenes. At least graphics and renders are not that bad.

story bored me honestly. there is no real build up to the guy fucking any of the girls in it. your mom just kinda fucks him so that he gets into your school or something, and then it just goes on and on without anything of notice. just play reparations

This is not a game.
Just a porn that comes soon to the fuck scene without any plot, any background story, any tension between the characters, any growing desire for the BBC of your own son's bully.

So, why making it as a game?
This is not meant to be played, the definition of "game" does not apply here.
I might just watch a porn at this point, there would be no difference.

Terrible I could not resist more than 10 minute.
Graphic is decent but the story oh men....
The action is to fast and rush everything if the vn have slow action this one is hell quick I think part 1-9 content no have more than 1 hour to play, the story is terrible and it's unbelievable don't understand me wrong I like ntr but this one not worth it. I can tell you is a lot good ntr vn out there than this and more worth it.
I was expecting something good but I was wrong 1/5 for effort.

Ok, were to start...the first thing I learned is, the main character is a dick, a macho self absorbed one, to be more accurate. I can't relate to that, since I consider myself a decent individual in real life, so it's a huge turn off for me. But hey, that's me. The women behave like brain less bimbos, waddling left and right, just waiting to be fucked by a ""stud"", no self consciousness, no shame, and also they are willing to share the main character's dick with other bitches, which kind of murders my suspension of disbelief. The controls are standard, the models have the "already seen a thousand times" look, and as I said, the main character is annoying, or should I say, just plain unlikable on way too many levels. I guess I will have to be much more selective with my hentai games from now on.

If you like interracial NTR and cockolding then this is for you. Very hot!
Please note that this is a visual novel, not a game, you can't make any choices.
Looks great. Text is ok.
My only problem that the chapters (1-9) are very short.
Hopefully we will see a lot more content.

Honestly, very shallow, trivial..
This game it seems to be written by a 13 yr old person. If it is so.. I can congratulate with him/her for the effort.

But if the developer of this game is older.. I just want to ask a question...
Why?
Why would you even spend some of your time for such game?

Development time matter.. do not waste in such kind of thing..

This is not a game at all ! not even one choice throughout the whole game. characters are unbelievably stupid and are made terribly, every aspect of them is extremely stupid, the way they are terrible to the main character is just dumb. the main character is dumb. the only thing i like is the appearance of the sister and that's it. it is not a game at all and as a novel it's just a fucking waste of time.

One of my favorite NTR creators/series. This game has really hot characters and a dominate antagonist(s). It really makes you feel like you're being betrayed by your closest people whom you love which is super hot and the essence of NTR. 10/10

This game (more like a space bar simulator really) is awful, really truly awful. Now hold your horses, I'll explain why. My biggest gripe with this and the rest of KirsESS's games is that they are all missing the point of NTR. There are no characters, no story to follow, nothing. NTR is a fun genre for a lot of people because of the journey, the road from innocent and loyal to being a whore. That's why NTR works best in slow burn games that take their time to fully lay out the road to Rome. There are no journeys to be found in any of these games, just cheap and disappointing destinations over and over again.
Let's go through the not already whore options. First scene, girl deflects obvious advances. Guy pulls out dick. She is reluctant, than after 15 seconds is a whore. Not to mention, no real character for the girl, who is the focus of the entire scene/game. You can get better character arcs from a 7 minute casting couch video for gods sake.
The fact that this isn't a game and a visual novel makes this even worse. With the tyranny of choice and branching dialogues/decisions gone, you'd think the developer would have time to write something halfway interesting to get people into the game. Nope, just the main girls being whores and MC feeling bad. It's so-so at first, but after doing that for a little bit you need to switch it up.
The game has renders, so I guess it earned its one star.
Overall, shitty writing and shitty characters, which concludes in completely missing the point of the genre that all these games are based on, making them completely useless.

Story is pretty good so far even if a little basic, the character models are great and there's a lot of variety with them and it was entertaining, hope the updates are large enough to want to play it again at each patch

Absolutely loved this game. The graphics is phenomenal too. It's definitely not for everyone though, that's for sure. Only hardcore NTR fans would love it. It would've been even better if there was a little story in it but who cares when it's freakin great for a quick jerk off session. Didn't care much about the sister, the mom and girlfriend were all that mattered, atleast to me.

Not a big fan of this so far. The characters are terrible: innocent girlfriend who can't control herself at the sight of a large cock, sadistic psychopathic sister who is apparently hates her brother for no real reason, generic stereotypical super hung black bull, etc. Love how the gf just sees the guy whip out his cock and can't control herself. The renders are ok, but the fact that each scene is really only a couple of pictures w/ text also detracts from the game. Just pretty bad overall, unless you get off on humiliation, then this should be right up your alley.

I love NTR and Sharing but this game just start with everything really fast, the girls are sluts from the beggining, they treat the MC like garbage in the first day. There is not evolution time, all is rushed and happend without much sense, pretty unrealistic and forced.
I love NTR but this game needs more love and a better start. At this pace the game can be completed in the chapter 6 because the Quarterback fucks all the girls in the moment he meet them.

Most people who are shitting on the game it's because it's a NTR game.

Meaning your character is being cucked (Also because the one cucking you is black, so they hate it)

It needs some updates, some "filling" because right now you only have sex stuff. One paragraph he fucks your mother, the other one hes banging your sister. etc etc it doesn't end.

I very much like when a game/VN has a cuckold/sharing theme in it, but this thing is only about it... Despite of that - the story is just freaking stupid, and unreal... And yeah - it is one of these games with enourmous dicks inside... I don't know what else to say... Oh - i know that it's VN, but you have 0 choices here - you're just watching some screens and reading humiliating text

dont let people turn you down. i think that the people that are so afraid of NTR is because they get wayyyy too much involved with the characters, i think they never have got a girlfriend in real life lol. its just a game!
anyways love it! keep it up!

One of my Favorite Novels.....

Pros:
- Nice action
- No boring moments
- no hard game Play
- Fantastic Graphics
- Nice Closeups

Cons:
- Black Dick too Big
- No Suspense.
- Too much degrading .

Conclusion:

Great Scenes in this Game, but just too much downgrading of the white guy,
Mom,Sister, and his Girlfriend all Love the black Guys dick, no doubt about it, but damn, a little more suspense and story behind all this would have been great, the Graphics for a Great NTR Story are there, but a little more Story to it would have been Great.
But as it it now,all the ladies have to do is look at bullies dick and they are hypnotized.
A little more teasing going on and it would have been great.
Also I haven't heard of the Dev before,but he is worth watching in the future that`s for sure.

But all in all I enjoyed this Novel, maybe it is because there are not many good NTR games and Novels out there.