It has potential, but it is in serious need of TLC.
So, the good parts first:
- I like that the MILFs actually look like real MILFs rather than what passes for MILFs in other games (ie 20-year old women models with extra big boobs). The models still look good for the most part as well.
- Highlighting imperfections in the characters is also a nice concept to play with. It's a bold decision that I wish more developers would keep in mind; not every character needs to look like Megan Fox.
- Likewise, I think some of the smut scenes and teasing have the potential to be really good.
There are, however, a lot of things that the developer should work on.
- First and foremost, hiring a writer. I can tell that English is not their first language, and it makes the dialogue read awkwardly.
- Everything is extremely abrupt. There is really no pacing whatsoever. It seems more like a series of one-off scenes from Pornhub than a smutty Renpy game.
- There's really no cohesiveness. Scenes abruptly change to things that have nothing to do with what just happened and the non-sequitur storytelling can get jarring. Worse yet, there are branching paths but none of them really make sense, and sometimes reference things the player hasn't experienced.
I'm not a huge fan of the concept of the player having to offer up their mom, but it can be looked passed to some extent if the rest of the material were promising enough. If the developer works to correct some of the flaws I mentioned, this could have some real potential.