Played v0.2b game looks beautiful and its noticeable the dev put some hard work on it but it needs some proofreading, grammar its quite bad and half of the time cant understand whats happening.
It looks like this one will have quite a lot of LIs, most of them looks nice and with unique personalities. Its a little heavy on dialogues and it looks like its quite engaging but grammar its so bad that cant give a proper opinion on dialogues and story, you can get a general idea of whats happening but that's it. I recommend also reworking the choices, there's currently 2 scenes on the game and no choice prior to them (i would have liked to be able to reject the pink hair LI).
TL;DR: I would rate this one a 6.5/10, proper grammar would bump it up to an 8 so it has ton of potential, i will keep an eye on it and will revisit when it gets a proofreader .
It looks like this one will have quite a lot of LIs, most of them looks nice and with unique personalities. Its a little heavy on dialogues and it looks like its quite engaging but grammar its so bad that cant give a proper opinion on dialogues and story, you can get a general idea of whats happening but that's it. I recommend also reworking the choices, there's currently 2 scenes on the game and no choice prior to them (i would have liked to be able to reject the pink hair LI).
TL;DR: I would rate this one a 6.5/10, proper grammar would bump it up to an 8 so it has ton of potential, i will keep an eye on it and will revisit when it gets a proofreader .