I'll start be prefacing that the game has an interesting focus on Asians which might be to your tastes if you're into that. And for all the complaints about the models, they are pretty good, a shame then that all these women basically share the same body type.
But, from here onward, everything crumbles down.
Art:
There's an ungodly amount of filtering in these scenes, outside, the bloom is turned to eleven, inside, there's blinding lights pointed at the scene, which detracts from the art.
Writing:
Terrible. There really isn't any other way to put it, from the moment the game boots up, and I shit you not, the very first proper phrase is immediate engrish and it never gets better,
Another incredible offender is, and I understand the average porn game enjoyer is illiterate but presenting a character by having MC call her mom, and the following up with a parenthesis explaining that this is indeed the MC's mom is... illustrative of the level of writing you can expect.
And as far as narrative goes, it's in shambles. There's multiple "antagonists" that barely get any buildup to tension, the MC is the classical loser trope for no reason, and every woman is either seemingly dumb, or a slut from the get go. The NTR is weak, the Corruption is weak and the Harem is... just a series of women with the MC, and barely any cross-interaction between them.
Soundtrack:
Mute it. There's 2 songs playing on loop no matter what scene you're viewing, sparsely interrupted by jarring showerheadwater.mp3 and birdchirp.mp3. some panels also do with moaning sounds but, honestly this is best enjoyed on mute as there's no thought on matching song to scene ambience.
Improvements:
This game needs two things most urgently, a proof-reader combing for grammar and orthography, and a second proof-reader who has picked up one single piece of literature to help stylize conversations. A VN is composed of two primary elements, text and image, you can't have your "work" fail to stand on one of it's legs and call it a day.