I'm a huge fan of NTR/NTS games but this one stinks. The graphics are way too cartoony for me. The wife is okay but it goes from zero to slut whore in one night.
The dialogue is actually decently written but the ex-girlfriend character is completely unnecessary, bloody annoying, and a waste of time and space. Even if you go the dominate route with her she still worms her way in where she's clearly unwanted. You don't have a choice if you want to deal with her or not, just whether you're dom or sub. This is where the writing is massively unrealistic, 99% of men would've hung up and blocked her.
The sex is unrealistic as well and that makes it hard to get into. No one would (or even could) be texting in such detail while getting fucked, or sucking or whatever. And the photos are being magically taken by ghosts. It should've been presented as after the fact story telling, or broken up into before, maybe a brief text/photo during and the bulk after with video, photos etc. It'd make a whole lot more sense, allowing someone to submerse themselves into the fantasy.
The vacation to Jamaica was a complete wasted opportunity. They're there for a week and other than the first day 6 days disappear and they're going home. Poor story design, I mean if you're going to use the old vacation trope, at least do it well.
I give this a 2/5 and that's because the writing is good (grammar wise) although story wise it leaves a lot to be desired.