VN - Ren'Py - Completed - How to Lose One's Virginity [v1.022 B FE] [GPoint]

This was one of those timeless examples of a good underlying effort game that ends up shooting itself in the foot without a fluent english proofreader. The review a couple posts down really nailed it while pointing out that the writing resides in this uncanny state where it really would be better off if it was worse. Which at least for me just made it more off putting then usual.

On top of that the story itself was clearly in a massive rush to get to full sex scene payouts. If like me you prefer gradual buildup and/or a sense of accomplishment with your girls...you might want to skip this one by.

Which is a shame too, since the girls and animated sex scenes themselves are pretty solid. Enough so that it would feel wrong to give this game less then an average rating. It's a decent "download for one fap and probably never care for playing again" pick on that night nothing else popping up on the update looks interesting.

Great game! The renders look good, the story is funny, the dev seems to care for the project and I really like that there are no choices all the time where one needs to be careful not to miss anything. I also like how this VN motivates readers to work on themselves like the MC does.

I thought the game was really good!
In my opinion, the graphics and animations are excellent too. The plot isn't bad either. I'm very curious to know how the game will end, especially with what was said by the developer.

Appealing so far. Great models, nice animations, promising things to come.

I have to take two whole stars off because the English is not great. It's in that uncanny valley state where it might be better if it was worse, if that makes sense. It's just wrong enough to really bother you when you see it.

If you're going to release a game in a language you do not speak fluently, have a proofreader who is fluent in that language.

Love the quality of the renders. Looking forward to further developments in the story. There is enough originality in the story line, that the little twists from other stories using similar tags, make it a legitimate stand alone game, that is worth the time to play through. I feel the attention to detail on this game is up there with the best of them

This is a demo. Not bad, good animations, and everything but lacks content.

Bad:
1. faces contort weirdly sometimes. It seems it's really hard to make the characters look sad, or have any negative emotion. maybe the ai is "ethical"?

2. lack of content.

Boring:
1. the story. I have no clue who is the mc and what does he want.

2. featureless characters with nice bodies.

3. long dialogues, painful to click through.

I played through v0.7FER in two or three hours. Rather than a VN, it might be more accurate to describe this as a kinetic short-story, or demo. The animations are next-level, facial expressions are the best I have seen in any game. It is essentially a light-hearted comedy, and it kept a smile on my face throughout my play.

If you are okay with the incest theme and kinetic structure, I recommend taking the time to experience this game.

This one is a hit or miss. Renders are nice and animations are unique and smooth with unpredictable loops unlike most DAZ premade ones that we so often witness AVNs. It's a harem incest game yet sadly, since it's so far been a kinetic novel, you have no agency on which girls you want to seduce or recruit to your harem fuckfest, you are doing Ash Pokémon gotta fuck them all. This has so far been the only downside that I can't ignore no matter what. The MC starts out as a beta loser type of guy who is having a character development and will probably become dominant in future updates, yet this might seem off putting for some audiences so I'm pointing this one out and my believe in the prospect of it changing for the better so definitely don't avoid this game just for this aspect.

Game version: 0.7FE

The writing reads like written by a child and the plot is boring, redundant.
The MC looks like a undesirable jerk (which might be intentional, whatever).
The animations look stiff.
The women/ their personalities are like 99% of this page: 1 Milf, 1 Slut, 1 Smug, and all are hungy for the MC's oversized c*ck.

Edit:
The game DOES improve with time and wasted potential:
The story stays weak, though.


All in all, there is nothing worth spending time on. Just skip it.

[Review v0.7FE]

At this point, I have to drop this game because the experience is just awful.

First and foremost, I DON'T LIKE kinetic novels, especially regarding the harem genre. I want the usual harem buildup process that requires a bit of choice and consideration (even the simple "accept" or "refuse" option for LIs), so the game already annoys me a bit because of its KN tag.

Second, the story itself is a hot mess. The start of the story is the usual loser description, that's fine for me because it can set up the premise for MC's transformation in the future, but I'm not too fond of excessive anxiety-inducing scenarios, and unfortunately, the first 30 minutes of gameplay is full of them. I almost rage quit this game but still, I toughed it up and the story seems better and better. But then in this update, the need for suspension of disbelief is just OFF THE CHART. You are telling me that by losing only a few pounds, adding a bit of gel on your hair, and wearing some goofy sunglasses, both your teacher (she even calls MC his name in their "first" meeting at the nightclub OMFG!) and your mother (who apparently doesn't recognize her son's voice and face! WOW, talk about mother of the year!) just fuck you instantly because MC's transformation is sooo profound that they can't recognize him anymore! This is the most illogical scenario I've ever seen, and the typical lazy way to skip relationship buildup, which is the exact opposite when it comes to creating good incest and/or harem stories.

To be fair, the render in this game is fine, so credit where credit's due. But for the dev's next game, he/she needs to hire some competent storytellers to set up the story and sort out the relationship buildup, otherwise, I just hope it doesn't end up a hot mess like this game is.

It's a funny game but the plot is absolutely atrocious. Everything is completely stupid. The MC effectively rapes his drunk sister in her sleep and she's just completely fine with it. No mention of her boyfriend, by the way, that she is apparently still with the entire time they are fucking, with the player having no clue if they are a sexually active couple or not. The MC's teacher and mother fuck the MC because apparently, all it takes is a bit of gel in your hair for people that see you every day to not recognize you and your voice. So for you guys that want to fuck your mom, all you have to do is get a nice suit and slick up your hair and she won't have any idea it's you! Easily the most half-assed way to skip relationship build-up I've ever seen. It's Incest porn where you don't know anything about any character before they're all screwing, and for that, I'm not giving it more than 1 star. The romance tag being on this game is laughable. There is no romance here.

3 star game? Sure, that'd be a fair evaluation. A 4.5 star game? Hell no.

Given the effort to create a normal looking protagonist (Not a gigachad, not an ugly bastard), I was thinking some effort would be made to try to keep the dialog and the relationships believable, too. I was so terribly wrong. The VN isn't bad, but it's not anything new, either. If you're not new to these things, you can reliably predict exactly what's going to happen next, which is problematic for a kinetic novel. If you're only here to fap, I'm sure you'll be just fine with this, which is why I'm not going lower than a 3, but if you were looking for anything interesting, this is not it, which is why I'm not going higher than a 3.

Fantastic VN - LOVE the renders and animations .. Beautiful models - especially M*m Looking forward to more of this AND the Devs other project

Models 5/5
Animations 5/5
plot -- interesting premise

what I liked:
- the renders are beautiful and well-made without any obvious flaws or noise
- the girl's models are sexy
- MC is not a wimp nor a jerk
- each one of the love interests has a unique personality some are shy , others are very forward
- the writing is decent, definitely above average

what I didn't like:
- story is a bit uninteresting
- animations are not very good


final verdict: 5/5 game, highly recommended

Review based on the Content of v0.3.

- Story has an interessting start and is besides the overal plot unique.
- Renders and the Li's in gerneral are realy nice in my opinion.
- Not much seen about the others but Bella has a realy nice, teasing
and positive personality. I didn't expect that.
- Overall, every Li is likeable sofar
- I liked the animations with the changing facial expressions,
not the typical "mouth open/close" thing.
- The Mind Controll is not Mind Controll, the MC can hear the thoughts of others.
wich for me is better than Mind Controll.
- Everything i have seen seems above the everage VN's here and i love it.

MC and Bella sex was great.
It was hot, dirty, wholesome and funny at the same time.
With in my opinion good writing/acting in perversion and dirty talk.
Not the typical 13 year olds wet dream dirty talk you would get in so many VN's.
Also not the typical slowburn but also on the other hand not a dumb whore/fuckfest scene.
Also she loves her brother before she got the hots for him.
Usually in VN's like this, "she would hate him until she sees his dick in
the shower" I think you know what i mean...

But, i'll not gona lie. After the content of a Harem/Romance/Incest VN,
it was in my opinion not the best idea to promote a Swinger/Sharing VN
where a "Friend/Sister" gets fucked by several man.
Directly after MC fucking his sister in this VN.
And judging by the text, the other guy holding her hands behind her back
at the beach and the mc covering his eys in the sauna so he dont sees his "friend/sister" getting off,
it seems to be atleast at the beginning more than the typical swinging/sharing

This isn't bad at all and it looks like it's a good VN/Story
if you are into that type of content.
But, it kinda ruined the mood and the good impression for me by
placing this add DIRECTLY after MC fucking his sister inside a VN that seems
to have the exact opposite type of content.
Atleast i hope nothing like this is planned in this VN here.

I would have have rated the content 5 Stars and i know the add
is not part of the VN, but its played directly after the major
ending scene of this update and it just wasn't a good move
to put it there.

I will be a bit cautious based on the Dev's opionion about
setbacks mean character growth, cheating and NTR he wrote
about in the comments.

But overall, i WANT more of this, for now amazing VN.
For me personally it could become one of the best
Incest Harem VN. I realy like the nontypical perversion/dirty talk in here.

Enjoyed the game. First high quality visuals is the biggest pro of this game. This one is kinetical and it will remain as the same. Many won't prefer kinetical games. Since it's Dev's first he decided to do it like this. Well that's a good decision. I didn't mind the kinetical since it's fun and quirk. Older sister is prettier

Seems like Dev's next game is about swinger that's not my cup of tea. But there are some who enjoys it. So good luck with it.

I'm glad this one's harem he didn't included swinging. Overall I enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work dev looking forward to next updates

I finished the present (0.3) version of this game and I liked it.
first thing first, this is not a masterpiece and it does not pretend to be. This is a quirky, fun, short game.

Be warned that the beginning is a bit meh. The scenario is a bit off and the dialogue could use a bit of work.
Yes, this is a game where the girls see or feel the protagonist's big dick and get all interested. The game is unapologetic about that and for this game, it works. As I said, it doesn't pretend to be a masterpiece, and it works well in what it does.

A big plus for me is that the creator has the entire game mapped. The girls are pretty and the animations are smooth. The music is nice too, if you find that thing a bonus (I do).

Really liked this game and would recommend to download it. Its really well made:
+ great visuals
+ lots of different pretty girls
+ good story so no need to skip
Unfortunately no choices, but author said he wanted to concentrate on the story, which is fine
Thank you and I hope to get some updates on this website

Strengths:
1) The interactions were fun, it was interesting that Chloe defended the MC even though she didn't really like them, after all they are sibling.
2) The art is very beautiful.
Weaknesses:
1) I think that Bella just being drunk would be enough and I expected a little more evolution from MC before he managed to lose his virginity.

Whaouh!
That's fraking good! So many great things, story, setup, models : I want to give my full support on this one!
Some advice : Please put more choices along the game, we feel like watchers instead of being the protagonist. The more choices, in story (real or fake for immersion) and sex scenes choices the merrier.
Actually, I would have loved it to be an Open world to concentrate in storylines how I feel, but that's the creator choice ^^
Keep up the good work and can't wait for next update!