HTML - Human Alteration App [v1.3] [NoodleJacuzzi]

v1.3
This is a kinetic novel with extra steps: the single choice that I found was at the start, where you choose dom or sub through a single option (resting or not) - that's the whole setup.

After that it's just a matter of clicking the right screens and buying the right items to unlock new content, which is very similar (within a single route).

One of the routes uses stolen porn and the other one some weird drawings which are a complete turnoff. The sub route also seems to be strictly shemale drawings, because I guess you can't be submissive and still like women.

The game doesn't feature any character development nor worldbuilding, and the dialogue is as weak as it gets.

I'm giving it 2 stars because it's complete and I didn't find any game-breaking bugs, but I didn't find it enjoyable, engaging, nor arousing.

Played through a few days game time on the sub route.

It's trans content more trans content then some trans content just for spice.

I do enjoy that sort of thing but not as a main course. The author does allow 'vegetarian' mode, but... how about a happy medium without having to tweak things?

This is two separate games, sandwiched together.

The first game is the "Dom route". This uses real porn, and lets you corrupt all the women around you. There's minimal grinding, but also minimal choice - almost every woman's route is linear, and your only choice is who to corrupt next. There are some really hot scenes, but I wish you had more choice and player agency, and you get each scene only once so it feels like you're just unlocking scenes and moving on. There are typos, some scenes don't make sense, the ending feels somewhat random (particularly for one of the women), and it generally feels unfinished. There's a decent foundation there, it just needed more work.

The second game is the "Sub route", where everyone in the world is turned into an anime girl with a monstrous penis. The art is somewhere between grotesque and terrifying. Again, your choice is limited on who to corrupt next, but it feels like you have even less player agency. Again their are typos, more so on this path, and some scenes refer to stuff that didn't happen which makes it confusing.

The HTML structure makes it easy to play on PC or mobile devices, which is nice.

Concept is really interesting, though I feel like they didn't do enough with it, all the choices are very linear, no real freedom as I anticipated from a concept like this one. The alteration aspect is more like a crutch to tell its story, not really let you tell your story. Since all the options are just what the creator designed, not enough variable for you to really make your own setup or situations.

Some branching would be nice, outside "let X be a public fuck toy or your own" since that's still pretty basic. Some options to make them travel 2-3 different routes of personality adjustment would make this a much, much better game.

Also, it's very short, like once you do the 2-5 scripted scenes for each character then it's just like.... ok, so that was the game? It took me less than an hour of taking it slow and reading everything and I unlocked all scenes bar 1 on a couple of characters I wasn't interested in, as shown on the end summary.

In all, great idea, amazing idea even, but it needs much more substance.

Game's great. The only complaint (to some people at least) is that you don't have significant choices. Other than that, it's a fun game with an interesting range of scenes/fetishes. Never played the sub route, but the dom has great images/gifs

This game is... something. I respect the effort that the creator put into it, and am glad that other people are enjoying it, but to me, this game in an prime example of HTML game mediocrity.

The game is divided into two routes, one where the player has the Alteration App, which uses real porn, and one where they lose that App to their sister, which uses drawn artwork.

The game is the star example of uninspired game design. I don't want to call it bad or lazy, because the creator clearly has care put into this game, but its not engaging. There are ways to make HTML games engaging. The Allure of Wanton Cove or Transylvania are good examples of this. This game is just clicking through things, in the text-parallel to a walking simulator, more akin to a VN. In which case, why not just make it one?

On the first route, the plot is as unimagined as its gameplay. You walk around, using the app to make the various women in your life willingly degrade themselves into having sex with you. And then you do it again. And again. Now, there is nothing really wrong with this, per say, but its just so boring and generic. Honestly, I'd give this game three stars, for just being so blandly uninspired if this were the only route. It's generic, but its not bad. But its not the only route.

The second route, where your sister snatches the App from you, has her using it to turn all your friends into huge-dicked futas for you to submit to. The degree of interaction here is even more minimal and more linear then in the first plot, and the artwork, is, well... supremely disappointing.
The artwork is well done, technically speaking. But rather then getting your sissy ass dommed by a bunch of rampaging futas, which would have been my hope, you just get a cascade of scenes where solo futa girls ejaculate cottage cheese out of their hideous, wrinkly, earthworm-looking dicks. You actually are only present in a single scene, where you give a girl a handjob. Its just a bit odd, thematically, and a sweltering mass of missed potential. I mean, if you like seeing solo dickgirls with shlongs that would make an ugly bastard look pretty jacking off, then more power too you. But this game, it ain't for me. Given the choice between mediocrity and missed potential, I'm going to chose to look for other games.

Exelent gifs with some text around them. A type of game where: "you click this 5 times and you get more gifs". Simplistic, no thinking required, just reading where you should click next to get more images. Too bad there is no some story behind it.

Great little game with a heavy emphasis on hypnosis/mind control. If you dislike futa/transformation, play the dom route and it's basically smooth sailing, with warnings and skip options for shemales/watersports.

Reviewed Version 1.0
A game that's both entertaining spank bank material AND complete?!
The route I played was well hashed out with above average visuals, decent writing, and no obvious bugs.
I'd definitely recommend it.

A nice little romp. Personally, I love anything with the MC having mind control powers (to whatever extent the creator lets their mind control go), and I enjoyed what was here. Of course, if I could I'd ask for more, but for a quick, maybe-10-minute-through game, this is perfect.

One of the best HTML games out there, great story for mind control lovers, and the images kept my dick hard all the ways trough!
In my opinion the incest just makes is better but you have the option to skip it at the start of the game so it's open to vanilla MC lovers.
A great game overall plus you can play it online for free so do it faggot!

Great start, I'm really looking forward to the updates. Currently not much in the way of content but what is there is promising, one small critique would be to keep the images consistent. as in anime girls or real models no mixing and matching unless really needed. That is more of a suggestion to polish, not content.

Version 0.7.0 re-review
3/5 stars

I gave this game a second try and found that it had been improved and was deserving of another star. The biggest problem is still the unfinished nature, which of course is always going to be a problem with games in development.

I didn't find the game drastically changed from the previous review, but more content had been added and I didn't notice any glaring spelling issues this time around. So I'll be checking this one out again a few months down the road and seeing how it's coming along.



--- original review ---
2/5 stars

This event is not finished yet. (0.4.1)

I like the concept and the coding of the game seems solid. I didn't have the game break on me once when playing. Further the use of images feels just about right, not being too overly used nor too sparse.

Unfortunately right now the game has a few flaws. First of all there's a few typos and misspellings that could use correcting. Next there is a bit of a lack of focus in the narrative that could use tightening up. While I appreciate the sandbox game play, due to the nature of the story a little more railroading on where to go next might not be the worst thing.

But the real problem is the unfinished events. I'm sort of torn on this. Part of me appreciates that the game doesn't just end when it's at the end of content, but another part of me feels annoyed that the clickable links are there only to have them lead to "This event is not yet finished" yet again.

I think this could be a great game, along the lines of The Company (which is a favorite of mine), but needs some more time and work to pull together.