VN - Ren'Py - Hunter: Space Pirates [Ch.3 P1 v0.3.0.1] [Mr.Mister]

(Review of Ch3p1 v0.3.0.1)

Now this was an unexpected surprise. A game with sci-fi, hot MILFs, cat women... I thought this sounded too good to be true and still make a decent novella, but I'm pleased I was wrong.

Don't mind the criticisement on the MC's haircut, that's just a minor detail and it only lasts for a while. Besides it's not that terrible, and also kind of fitting considering the MC is not from Earth.

The writing is suprisingly good; a bit too wordy at times but it won't bore you with nonsense. Animations are average, with some exceptions. The style is always the same: after a certain click the animation starts and every time dialogue is inserted it becomes a two-frame job like you're pounding the girl (or the other way around) with a sledgehammer. I found them quite disappointing most of the time, but it's better than nothing I suppose. Anyway it's not what you see but the pose and especially who the girl is to you what makes the scene hot. Speaking for myself the scenes with the teens left me a bit cold (with the possible exception of Kimmy), but the one with your ex-teacher in the janitor room or the one with the principal while her husband is looking are clearly the highlights of what's done so far. The latter virtually justifies the download by itself, I'll tell you that much.

Summing up, a novella worth checking out amongt so much mediocrity being uploaded.

Needs to have a reward for all those creampies. Add pregnancy so we can repopulate the galaxy as well. Can't say as I have a complaint about the game other than he could get laid more often and it would not hurt my feelings.

Okay I'm taking a stand. There is an injustice in the Renpy community that has gone on for far too long and it is grave and cannot be stood for anymore. Every day its insidious nature infects all we hold dear and threatens the very fabric of our collective sanity and possibly the universe as a whole. A vile enemy that left unchecked may doom us all......wtf is up with that damn hair cut? This devs last MC was a fabio wannabe and now we get this joker. That hair is a crime against humanity. I mean I can't even take this in a satirical funny haha sort of way because its just too much. I'm used to MCs looking like garbage, but its usually not on purpose.

I wish there was a little more back story of MC as a child, he seems to have a problem with Kimmy and Stephanie's daughter but the player has no idea what, so far the characters are really good but there is almost zero time with any of them so that doesn't mean much.

Second choice references stuff in the choice you didn't make(carrying boxes), other than that the only thing the choices did was see sex scene or not but at such an early stage you cant expect story choices to do anything.

Lack of imagination naming the fox girl "foxy" and the cat girl "kitty".

Sex scenes are very good if a bit bland.

At the current content this isn't a game but a super complicated prologue, does the game look interesting? yes, given what is shown is there any chance this game will get completed? very much doubt it given how overly ambitious it is, the cast is huge and the story complex so filling that out into a full game will take many years and as we all know most large games don't get anywhere near completed.

Story 3/5 (good but complicated)
Sex 3/5 (visually good but a bit bland)
Characters 4/5 (so far really good)
Art 4/5 (great)
Choices 2/5 (too early to tell)
Kinks 1/5 (none atm)

A game with indirect incest. I think they should stop running away from it but anyway, loved the game.

Good enough graphics for an interesting story.

The game mother is probably one of my all time favorite character already.

The red and blue choice give a good control over the relationship which I very enjoy.

Can't wait for them to put out more contents.

pardon my engrish
Hunter space pirates mixes sci-fi & slice of life &paranormal elements, one side we get our mc dealing with a normal human life, and on the other side in the far corners of space we have monarchial society and inter-space invasion issues. It seems game will have more creative universe and deeper storyline than the previous game. There are not much alternative setting games so I like it.

The first update mostly focuses on mc's background and information about universe with some spicy scenes. Just like in motherless game has a wide cast of thick pretty ladies and mc has a very big family maternal or paternal, lost step family etc.

I find first parts of the game a bit too info heavy but it later gets easier to digest. Also like everyone I also didn't like mc's initial hair that much but he also has a glow up in terms of hair so its not an issue.

I like how Mr.mr have characters section which includes name-picture-info of the characters in each of his games because he has tons of characters and they are now different planets, galaxies, dimensions stepped into the scene, it can be hard to remember characters each update.

Mister Mister's a developer whom successfully completed 3 seasoned game with regular updates since 2020- motherless- without any controversial kinks. Dev knows how to address all criticism he received. I'm sure Hunter won't be any different than Motherless in that sense. Dev is already fixing the issues asap, removing the dad's sexual scene and adding scene that explains mc's reactions etc.

Also game has super cute giant space kitten!!! I hope we can steal Icefang lol

Con- No content or slow to be released content just stringing people along
Pro well put together, nice story when you get it. Got off to a good start, hard and fast, now its just a dribble. great graphics, characters.

Coming from such a fun and erotic ride that was Motherless, I expect nothing less from Space Pirates. I know Mr will write a hilarious story filled with a plethora of sexy ladies for any and all to love.

The intro to H:SP was refreshingly unique and really had my attention. Each character was likable from what we've seen so far, I really liked Bradoks alien friends and thought they're a great team. Hunter will have to do a lot to earn the same love I have for Sam from Motherless. The cast of ladies so far are a treat to admire and there's only more to come! I may have to play a few more times to understand all the space time and relations of all the characters to Hunter before I get it all down lol.

This is only the beginning of another great journey and I'm so happy to be along for the ride !

Since its only first chapter story is all over the place, but story its self is interesting and so are the characters. Only small minus is MC's hair specially because he was in the army doesn't make any sense.

I think the ratings for this one are a bit harsh early on. If you've played Motherless you know what you're going to get. A complicated incest harem story where Gary Stu impregnates literally every female within either 50 miles or 50 shades of relation, aided by the convoluted revelation that he has at least two mothers. The twist here is that some of it is set [drumroll] IN SPACE.

So, not exactly original. And we're not at the 'impregnating fifth cousin five times removed' stage quite yet. Nowhere near, in fact. This time round, Mr M has given us a back story with THE DAD who (horror) isn't dead and (double horror) has sex too. It's probably wise that Mr M has now hidden the Dad stuff behind a Preferences button.

But if the premise floats your boat - and why wouldn't it? - then get stuck in. Decent renders and promising LIs, slightly goofy looking MC. Horse dick is a bit much.

I was hesitant to rate this, but I feel like I need to. The story is basically two stories. That of the father Bardok… I mean Bradok, and that of the so-called Main Character his son. Bradok is a prince, a warrior, a ladies man, and the story starts with him, explaining the back drop of the VN and bringing the reader up to speed. It was weird, but could work. At first I actually thought he was the Mc, that when he got to earth maybe we’d get to name him (pick a false identity kind of thing some other games do) but no. He bangs several earth chicks (thankfully we never see that) before he exits the story… or I should say, before he ought to exit the story.

You see it goes to the Main Character’s life and just gets started laying out the major players in his story on Earth, and then suddenly cuts back to Bradok. He has a parallel story, told in tandem with that of the Mc. And he even has a full sex scene. Nearly all of the sexual related tag on the game right now are due to him… he is a main character of his own story, a protagonist in his own right… in many ways he is more of a focus than the character we get to name.

I give it two stars and not one because the girls are nice looking, but that almost makes it worse. The girl the dad fucks is cute and sexy, and I had to waste time seeing her get plowed by some guy I don’t care about. It brings the whole future of the game into question.

Who else will the dad fuck instead of the Mc? This spoken of Lady Dakara (or whatever her name is the chick in charge of his prison), is she going to be fucked by the dad? If so, that’s bad too. What about Bradok’s sisters, the Mc’s aunts, they tell Bradok they are willing to fuck him. What will happen with them? Will they go through with it? Will they be with the Mc if/when he meets them? Will the dad survive? If he does then that will mean that the Mc meets his dad and his harem and then what? They rock, paper, scissors for each girl they meet after that? I’m being a bit facetious but these are all legitimate concerns.

I’ve seen games get five stars for the potential they might have. Well I’m giving this two stars because of the current content and state of the story. If I was rating it on just the vibes it’s giving me with having two protagonist (labeled or not) then it’d be at a one star for me.

This is fixable. Remove the Bradok stuff after the prolog set up, and have it be a separate DLC or something. Or just remove his current sex scene and any possible future sex scenes he has. Have him have gotten castrated when he was taken or something and let him find and save girls for the Mc when Bradok escapes, or the Mc rescues him.

Doing either of those options would easily bump this up to a three star (average) release, with the potential to get four or five after a few more updates.

Edit: oh, and the weird sound effects are a little much.

Edit 2: I didn’t consider the Mc’s terrible appearance because I assume that when he comes into his own power, his look will change. But if not, he looks bad and that might affect the rating too.

Updated Review 11/5/25:

3.5/5

Well, it's been awhile since I first touched this VN, but seeing as how I still loved the Devs first major title I thought to myself, "look, it was just a demo, why not give it another shot." So here I am.

First off, the dev has made some massive improvements to the overall story and setting. Offering the readers the option to not watch Bradok's Adventure is a drastic improvement to Hunter's story overall. He's the main character after all and personally I don't care what happens on his father's end, yet. The overall story is pretty decent with a good bit of self aware humor throughout. And while the writing is cheese dick as fuck, it's also in tune with the overall humor. I do feel like there are some areas where it gets a little stiff and those sections could be cleaned up a bit. For example in the beginning with Stephanie and Mary chatting on the couch and Stephanie says, "how terrible, Mary, what your telling me." This just sounds odd. Perhaps changing it to, "Mary, that sounds dreadful." Btw, the missing boy in the woods who's father was killed could lead to another story of that boy hiding in the hollow of a tree only to get transported to another world as the bear tries to attack him. Just spitballing. Feel free to use it. No strings attached.

Anyway, back to this VN. Like I said, some of the writing could be smoothened out bit. I'm pretty sure English isn't the devs first language (I appologize if it is - I have dylexia, so trust me, I get it), so I'm willing to cut the dev some slack in that arena. Speaking of smoothing out, the extra animations. Oof, some of these come off as really dated and could use a touch of AI put on them. Speaking of which, if you're using AI or have thought about it, personally I'm fine with the use of AI. It can be a very useful tool especially when it's taliored to a specific VN and guided by a talented dev. And if it makes the work go faster and allows for the creator to be more creative, I'm all for it. But that's just me. Can't speak for anyone else. Just putting that out there.

Now onto the character models. This dev definitely has a specific style when if comes to the women of his stories. Personally, I think these are top notch. No question about it, the dev knows what he's doing in the department and knows his target audience. No notes. Hunter on the other hand ... he's still a little rough. It's his hair mostly. One of the best desitions the dev ever made in Motherless was cutting Sunny's hair and Hunter, could use a new do. He looks like he's trying to look like an edge lord. I liked what the dev did to his hair with the back knot. Cleaned him up nice, but I'd still commit and give him a new hair cut.

Other than that, keep up what you've got going here. There a really good VN starting out with this story and I'm glad to see so much improvement since the demo. Like always, keep in mind we've all been able to enjoy this VN for free here so if you can show some support to the dev and kick them back something if you can. I hope the dev reads this and knows they've found an audience with me and I look forward to future updates. Cheers.

Original Review:

2/5

Alright, I want to start out by saying I loved Motherless. So with that said, I was genuinely looking forward to reading this. But ... wow, this is ... just not good. The MC is easily one of the worst designs I've seen in years. Like Bill Skarsgård's The Crow got his hair cut by a blender bad. Additionally his ultra dick, gifted to him by his "gets laid everyday" father is face palmingly stupid this early in the VN. It reminds me of VNs where the dev gave zero fucks about proportions. If this is going to be norm for this VN just stop fucking around and give all the ladies balloon tits while you're at it. Seriously, I was able to accept the lunacy of Motherless and I could even accept this nonsensical story, but gigantic horse penis on a guy with so little blood in his system he'd pass out every time he got a hard on ... it's just too stupid. I can only guess that the crystal at the end will give this Rita Repulsa the full ability to make his monster grow and shrink at will, much like how his father can grow as well. We, the readers, can only hope.

The real shame is that the women, even the Space Orc, look freaking great. A bit canned (most seem to be lifted from the same source as other VNs) but that's not necessarily a bad thing. But honestly, I couldn't care less about who the MC's dad is bagging throughout the galaxy. It literally adds nothing to the story and I'd rather this be a story about the MC discovering his past rather than the narrator telling the reader what the fuck is happening out in the galaxy before the MC can even experience it. I enjoyed the return of Ms. Truchbull. Wished she had joined the harem in Motherless, but it was nice to see her in this. Then there's the Animations (not the "bonus video" - you should keep that shit to yourself, that was bad) which were well done. Seriously, top notch. But it is a bit awkward when transitioning between the smooth animations and the dialogue associated frame-by-frame ones. There is a way to do smooth motion animations with dialogue and allowing the reader to click through while those play and it would be nice to see that implemented here.

The story, as I've said, is bad. It's poorly paced and blows it's load (figuratively) way too quickly by showing right away that the MCs dad Bradok, intergalactic space biker and prince of Aurora Magicus, is from another world and removing all mystery around the entire story. In fact, the character sheets basically spell out the entire story for the reader. Why the MC's grandfather needs his son to go to earth, have a kid and in two years needs him to return with said child to fight along side him ... I don't know. I was unaware that a two year old can win wars. But regardless, Bradok doesn't return. Hell he's on earth for four years before he gets caught by Space Pirates and forced to fight in gladiatorial fights. Why we, the readers, need to see his side of the story this early is beyond my understanding. In fact, at this point he's treated more like the MC of the story than the supposed MC is, which is a big no no in VNs. When the MC get's sidelined to tell someone else's story before we've even seen them? I mean, the narration starts out telling Bradoks story right away. I thought I had made a mistake at first and somehow loaded in the middle of the VN. This will instantly make every reader ask, why wasn't this guy the main character then? Why am I supposed to become more emotionally invested in a secondary character when I haven't even been introduced to the main character? Is this side character going to come to a tragic end, leading to the main characters own journey beginning? Spoiler ... NOPE. Nothing happens to his dad. So why are we going through his story right away? His story shouldn't matter yet. Hell his own planet's story shouldn't matter yet.

So how can this be fix? Get rid of all of the father's story. No joke. It doesn't matter and likely won't until the MC askes, "where have you been?" This is when all of that content should come into play. Hearing his father's story along with his son is far more impactful than reading about it before we've even gotten to know the MC yet. Next, change the MCs hair at the least. He looks like a reject from The Cure and his scar makes him look like the he's trying to be the edgiest edge lord to ever edge lorded. Also, if his ability is going to be that he can grow/enlarge himself (no just his dick) use that as a point for humor. Make his arm or leg randomly huge when he wakes up. Have his hands and feet get clownishly large while doing track and field. Then have him be about to throw a shot put ball clean across a field. Play with the idea of him trying to conceal what's happening to him from his friends and family. Like a super hero just discovering their powers. Then give him the big dick, only have that happen when he's losing his virginity to ... I don't know, Ms. Truchbull looked like she could handle it, have it be her gift to him and his gift to her (wink wink).

There's a lot of fun ways to play this off, but right now it's just not funny and frankly rather stupid. The fact is that the family dynamic between the MC, his foster sisters and mother hasn't even been established and there's more relationship building on his father's end than his and that's bad. The MC needs to have a focused story and needs to have that familial bond established well before he's in his young adulthood. Motherless actually accomplished this pretty fast. Hell if even established it's main relationships when the MC was a kid really well. That needs to be the focus here. Then when he meets his father ... we get Bradok's story. We get to hear about what happened to him. What happened to the MC's mother (if anything). Hearing about his hardships with the MC to make the readers care more about him and understand why he had to give up his son.

Anyway, feel free to use anything I've written here. I honestly do not mind if it makes for a better story (which it will, trust me). This is still in it's really early stages and even with all of the content here, there's still time for this to get good. The dev's last VN was three seasons after all so there's plenty of time for this to cook. I indeed wish this dev all the best and hope that they find their audience with this one. Do the dev a favor and leave a review whether you like this or not. Tell them what you liked and what you didn't. And don't let my opinion sway you in anyway. If you do like this, keep in mind it was made available for free on F95 and consider contributing whatever you can, whenever you can to help the dev keep working. Cheers.