HTML - Completed - Husband's Phone [P2 v1.0.0] [Devorny]

I cant give this game more than 1 star. The horrible UX is enough to validate that. You need WAY to many clicks for this.

And all that work just for a generic ntr story with bland and boring characters. I dont understand why some devs have to make things so complicated and add so many clicks for a simple "next" action.

I love the actual NTR content, and the corruption of Layla. The only thing I don't like is the passivity of the MC. I can't get immersed in the game, because I can't imagine a scenario where I would ever act like him in many of the situations. He just lets the boss walk all over him, and he assumes the boss is right when he tells him the report is wrong at the beginning of Part 2. Dude, all he had to do was say, "Show me where it's wrong." Bam! The lie is out. If the boss refuses to show, then he knows it's bullshit. If the boss shows, he can point out the boss is the one who's wrong. If the boss pulls out a different or altered report, MC can load it from his zip drive, because these things aren't done on typewriters and there are digital files saved of them. I'm surprised he even handed in a paper report instead of just emailing it when he was done. the whole premise falls apart at the start. The only reason it "works" is because the MC just assumes he was wrong without verifying it. I would never do that, and I doubt 99% of people would do that. If those parts were altered so that it wasn't so immersive breaking / just unbelievable, I'd give it 5 stars.

[P2 v0.5.6]

I've been playing this one on and off, and there is actually a lot of content. I don't know how far away I am til the end of the currently available content, but I have played enough to give this a rating.

This seems like a completely kinetic novel. I didn't run into a single choice. It's actually a lot of clicks just for the "immersive" factor of using a phone, but ehh... it's just kinda annoying to cycle through the days and the texts.

The user defined relationship is also basically useless because MC calls the mom by her first name.

4* rating is a bit more subjective than what I would usually base it on. It's just refreshing to finally run into a phone NTR game that uses non-MC POV shifts. FINALLY, we can see stuff happen without the BFF/bull/mysterious person having to send pictures/videos to the MC. Basically, the MC isn't defaulted to the cuck or an extremely clueless idiot by necessity when male protag perspective is strictly maintained in a phone NTR story. He actually acts plausibly given the situation (because he isn't put into a situation where the player has to see NTR through his eyes) and has quite a number of scenes himself.

The writing is... okay. The wife is the only one that actually has some corruption (but even she very easily gives in to anything). The side girls like sis and mom are complete whores right from the start.

Overall, the things I liked about this could be things others hate, like losing the "immersion" factor due to POV shifts. The fact that there are no choices also holds it back. Maybe 3* is more objective all things considered, but I give it a bonus star for finally doing something other than the same shit every other phone NTR game does (whore friend and antagonist sending evidence to MC and the MC acting retarded at all times).

The mother and sister part are already written very bad. But as MC sees her Wife cheating but he basically just turn around.. that was the exact moment I deleted that game.
I really the phone system. I wish there would have been a skip button because some of the black guys scenes very pretty annoying but overall the phone system is good.
But the story.. Jesus. Same goes with the bathroom at the Restaurant.. nothing on earth would stop a guy checking if that is really his wife or not.
The visuals are ok. It's real porn so the dev limited to the porn actress existing scenes but it really ok.

I initially liked the game, yes now it's an HTML, but it's not important for the purposes of the game or story, the images are videos, yes they are beautiful, you have real sex, not cartoon drawings, but then comes the worst side, which in reality, should be the most important part, and it is the worst, the story, without any logic the various speeches, and having such a stupid Mc, is irritating, even if part of the porn role, but too useless, the usual MC who knows things, and stays there like an object, accepts everything passively. what purpose then does the game of the secret application have, if then Mc is a total idiot, without balls, it was better not to wear the application, it is to make him a happy cuckold, better happy, than a total idiot, FMC, talks about love, a slut of absolute dimensions. no, sorry DEV, but you have built two really stupid and useless characters.

P2 v0.5.5

Pros:

• Good choice for the wife; she doesn’t come off as overly promiscuous and is both attractive and sexy.
• I liked the dialogue between the husband and wife. It’s simple but feels somewhat realistic.
• A few good sex scenes so far, pretty vanilla, good nonetheless.
• The phone engine is smooth and generally guides the player to do what they’re supposed to.
• Slow burn with well-developed characters... though this also leads to a big con (explained below).

Cons:

• Phone engine: The game requires a lot of clicking, and automation is needed. Without the ability to backtrack, it's easy to accidentally skip out-of-phone dialogue boxes/events, which is quite frustrating.
• I wasn’t fond of the slutty sister and stepmom characters. They tend to be boring and a waste of time.
• Most generic, cookie cutter black characters, no personalities what so ever, everyone of them just wants to fuck whatever moves.
• I spent a few hours getting to the end. This is definitely a slow burn game (maybe too slow). Three hours of clicking for just 1-2 NTR/NTS scenes doesn’t feel like a good enough return on time invested. With so many other NTR phone games around, the payoff seems relatively small.

3.5 stars just because I want to see what's to come.

The game fails to deliver on multiple levels. It starts with potential but quickly falls into repetitive gameplay, poor writing, and a lack of interactivity. Characters, especially Layla, are reduced to flat stereotypes, and the story becomes unengaging. The visually appealing phone interface is undermined by outdated event designs. Without meaningful choices, the experience feels passive, with awkward dialogue and a lack of depth making it more frustrating than enjoyable. Significant improvements are needed in all aspects for it to be worth playing.

Now I understand what the reviews and negative comments meant about the strange changes in the FMC
FMC invited Jonathan for sexual acts
The reason? Nothing but lust
The MC didn’t cheat on her, there was no blackmail, nothing—she invited him purely out of lust
At this point, the FMC completely lost the character and personality that had set her apart from the MC’s worthless sister and mother

1. The game lacks interactivity and feels repetitive, requiring constant clicking in the same spot for long periods, which becomes boring.
2. The writing quality is poor, with awkward dialogue and many grammatical errors, including confusing pronouns like "you" instead of "she."
3. While the game started off with potential, its plot quickly devolves, turning characters into flat, unappealing stereotypes.
4. Layla’s character transformation into a promiscuous archetype feels forced and detracts from the story's appeal.
5. The storytelling is flat and lacks depth, making the experience unengaging despite some initial promise.
6. The phone interface design is visually appealing but clashes with the outdated look of the events interface.
7. The lack of player choice and the purely kinetic nature of the game make it feel like a passive experience rather than an interactive one.
8. Overall, the game requires significant improvements in dialogue, grammar, plot structure, and interactivity to become worthwhile.

a very poor product, the same as many others, in fact, now they use the html system, and it's even worse, I don't understand why there is the game Tag, it's a simple pre-set visual novel, with protagonists of little interest, and a purely spectator MC and the most idiotic that has ever been invented.

It seems to me to be a good-looking game, but with characters and plot that could be greatly improved.
I know that it is in development and that is why I approve it, but it must improve, especially in giving it a bit of playability, because unfortunately it is only a matter of always clicking the same button and reading and watching videos.

Here is a game that started in an interesting way, ok, the graphics are very photographic, the mobile phone screen is simple, in these types of games, the important thing is the plot, the dialogues, the whole context, but as I was saying, after a nice start to the game, perhaps finally with an MC on the right path, of not being the usual idiot cuckold, but more, Layla even if forced in some circumstances to be a traitor, well, in this update the game has now made Layla the usual nymphomaniac slut, it's no longer blackmail, she's becoming a real slut, and MC, well, the way of the idiot cuckold, another NTR, pure, without choices, just kinetic. Don't waste your time

Well, the game is graphically based on real photos or videos, adapted to the game, the dash is well taken care of, even if the cell phone icons are very useless, for the story, it's not bad, of course, it's an excellent kinetic, just one choice to manage which path to take, nothing more, I settle for a 3 star because the game is not finished, it could improve or remain on this development, waiting for future improvements, a 3 star is now suitable

The phone concept lends itself naturally to the NTR/cuckold and voyeur fetishes and is a nice way of increasing the player's/reader's immersion.

The cast are comparatively well characterized and distinct from each other, and the game takes care to keep the porn stars representing them mostly consistent.

The engrish is bearable and never approaches the point of unintelligibility, but does in a few instances detract from the mood of a scene.

Overall, this game shows a lot of promise and has a satisfying amount of content for the version number (0.3.5).

Not my cup of tea, I don't mine a slow game but repetitively clicking in the same spot for ages is dull. Also half the videos don't load and the writing is not fantastic.

Might be okay with a lot more work but not interactive enough for my preference

Personality of different characters: Excellent
The game is slowburn: it is very good, it means you can fall in love with the characters because they are not boring people from the beginning
User interface: very attractive
Writing: Great, I enjoyed it
Gifs and images: Excellent, very beautiful gifs and photos are used
Story: We don't favor complex stories that don't focus on relationships, the story is great
Models: The model of MC's wife is great, and other models have an attractive appearance

I just hope that the developer will add more choices to the game so that we feel fear and stress when making choices

Reading previous reviews you would believe this is some sort of masterpiece, and I'm sorry to say it isn't.

I get it, English isn't the dev's first language, but it makes for a very frustrating experience in a text based game.
A lot of pronouns mixup for some reason (you instead of she, her instread of my, etc).
The dialogue is pretty awkward as if all characters were strangers to each other.
The storytelling is pretty bad, it's all very straightforward and flat.
This game would need a lot more than just a grammar check to be good in my opinion.

On a more positive note, the phone interface looks and feels nice, but it clashes with the events interface that looks dated.

The game's beginning is undeniably promising, setting the stage for an exciting and immersive gaming experience.
From the very first moments, it captivates players with an intriguing starting setup that leaves them hungry for more.
This initial scenario is like a puzzle waiting to be solved, a canvas with endless potential, and it opens the door to a world of possibilities.

Very good first game! I like this type of games and you did a very good job here. The amount of content is ok. The story is good and I really want to see the paths unfold with the different characters. There is one scene that I have never seen in other phone type games, and I hope you will have more new ideas. If you follow this route I can imagine that your game will be one of the best phone type games.