VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - I Want to Dream [v1.0] [Yost]

Sad to see it abandoned. It had potential, but I could kind of see myself getting tired of the models.

I can tell there are some translation issues (mostly grammatical). but animations are standard. Its a good first attempt.

Not many scenes basically only what the pictures show. But good start

Pretty unique art style, I can see potential here.

The only problem I found is the lighting in the face of every character, the shadows looks a little weird sometimes, so I suggest you to avoid lighting above character.

Keep the good job and try to put an update every month if possible.

OK I give it a 3.5, why? the dev did actually make a playable (if short) game/vn that accounts for a lot in my book... is the story kinda thin? paper, are the characters off? yes very cartoony Im hoping that was a style choice (I happen to like it) not a talent issue. Do I have a lot of hope for this game? yes I think it has potential and yes I will d/l next ep. A few things do need addressing, name consistancy, are you "MC" or are you "LISA", and an english proofreader might help a bit.