VN - Ren'Py - I Want to make a game like Summertime saga, please help review my character.

Hi, I'm HotBamboo, and I'm a huge fan of Summertime Saga.

I've created a character for my game. Could you please help me review it? Is the art not good enough?

I've previously created a game called "Room of Lust: Dirty Conversation with My Mom."

But I'm just not confident with the art I created. Please give me some advice.