This seems like it might be an interesting story, but I can't tell if the storytelling is just too disjointed, or the bad English translation makes it impossible to clearly tell what's going on. The story seems to jump from scene to scene without any sense of how we've gotten from one to the next. I don't really care too much about the graphics and sound -- others will have to pass judgment on those. I kind of hope the dev can improve the storytelling so I can finally tell what's happening in what seems like it might be intriguing.