VN - Ren'Py - Immoral Stories Rebecca [v1.7.5] [GGG33]

EDIT: V1.4.2 - All the early potential this VN showed has been squandered, and now it's a mess that focuses on the most vile of taboos. Surprised it's still allowed on here given the egregious pedo stuff. Dropping my rating to one star because of that and more. And I will no longer be following this one.

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Pleasantly surprised at how well this has been done so far (v1.3). Certainly has the potential to be one of the better corruption games / stories out there.

Pros (thus far)

• Beautiful female characters, realistically proportioned and beautifully rendered
• Excellent writing, with a refreshing focus on the subtleties of each situation and the complexity of emotions that the characters are experiencing
• Nice character development, allowing the viewer / player / reader to become emotionally invested in them...reader can definitely feel the helplessness the characters are experiencing, fully empathize with them, route for them to succeed, and dread when they don't
• Feels like an intriguing and complex story that will involve multiple characters is developing, and there is definitely anticipation building for that the unfold

Cons (and these are big)

• The pee thing was out of nowhere and a complete turnoff (for me at least); it was also totally unnecessary; the situation was already humiliating enough for the main character, and arguably too much of a descent at this early stage; the addition of urine just made it way over the top
• There is definitely a question on the ages of the characters; Rebecca is supposed to be in high school, but she probably looks more like college age. Why does that matter? Because Rebecca has a younger sister (Dee), and when we we first meet Dee, she is attractive and intriguing, looks like she might be just on the edge of legal age; but when we meet her the second time, she looks like she's 10; if the developer is reading this, please fix this; nobody with a soul wants to read a corruption story involving children
• There are some early and troubling signs that the developer might veer off course, as so many of these corruption stories do, with uninspired scenes involving random characters; seeing the MC in an unnecessary event with some homeless guy is wasteful; it robs the reader of anticipation and buildup, and it minimizes the impact that future events with characters that matter have on both the MC and the reader; in short, these kinds of random scenes ruin the entire corruption storyline. Again, if the developer is reading this, please please please rethink your approach to this. This game (so far) and these characters are way to intriguing to waste on meaningless encounters.

For the moment, I would rate this 4 stars, because the writing, story, characters, and renders are top notch. But if the developer isn't careful managing the descent and the use taboos, this could quickly turn south. Definitely hoping the developer navigates that successfully.

Excellent graphics, highly fetishistic imagery (foot, socks, panty), the game surely knows how to built excitement. The scene with the homeless guy goes way overboard with uglyness and works agains the games narrative of build up corrupting Rebecca, rest works fine. As of V1.3 Part Two the game is fairly short but already delivers. Game would benefit from some lesbian content.

It's real great story and pictures. The girl is so realistic in her reactions and her mimic. The story is complex but traceable and really not only a copy of other games. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

The renders are great, the story is realistic, the only negative is that there is not much content in here. I am considering supporting this game.
The sex scenes may turn off a few so be careful about that.

My Rating of this Game is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Good Story
+ Makes you want to play for hours
+ Different looking Characters
+ Fast Pace in the Game (No Bullshit)
+ Unique looking Characters
+ Good Closeups

Cons:
- None

Conclusion:
Loved this Game, didn't think much about it when I started, but when moving on, the scenes stared getting hotter and hotter, damn it would have been a lot hotter if he would had a chance to go all the way.
The Mother is Hot with natural skin age and the scenes like I said was hot as hell.
Am also a Fan of the knie high socks she has on.
Just hope to see more of this and hope the dev continues with this work.
Overall a great Game with every bit worth the download.
5 stars in my book.

So my play through was nice.

The game is obviously for perverts. So anyone who does not like abuse, should just ignore the game.

Models are nicely rendered and detailed.
The story may not be really special but build the foundation for the progression of the story.
So we have a girl that dreams about a future as a dancer but wants to have a dress. So what she does, stealing of course. Because no money.
And so it starts.
Like i said, maybe not the best story but a story to get it rolling.

Though i noticed that later on the shoes seemed to change during the action. Why?
Anyhow, this is the kind of game i am looking for. I admit that i find abuse themes very arousing. Man, am i perverted.
The main character looks really nice and is totally innocent. So now she will be corrupted to fulfill old pervs dreams.
I am not sure where the story will lead. Maybe the dev likes to prostitute her? Would not mind.

Details are very great in this game. I like the emphasis of the cock penetrating the throat. It looks really great.
So a lot of work went into the game. I do like the old story owner and his soiled pants. What a great start.

edit: I would like to emphasize that i really liked the situation of her being kind of force to do his bidding and her reaction to it.
Like when tears run down her eyes and she looks up and down. I do not think that i seen this in another game like it is here.
So that made a huge impression on me. If the dev sticks to this artistic, i think the story can be really real and great and be lewd at the same time. You kind of feel sorry for her. Even though, the situation build up is generic. But it is believable to me. I am not sure if the choices that are presented have a meaning besides the reaction of the male. In some sense i wish they do, because of more punishment or her being able to free herself. Well, but we also want to see more of her being lewd. Anyway, i tried to answer differently and the response was great.

Since there is not much content so far, but what is there is already great and good enough for a fap.

So lets hope we can see her "adventure" continue.

There aren't many player choices. Though i am not really caring as i like to see what the dev want her to experience.

Its early to judge the game as a whole. The more content comes the better we can make a judgement.
So far, i am giving it a 4. Seems justified to me.

The visuals are interesting. The Old and young thing is done in a halfway the worst of both worlds.

Some scenarios are barely believable unless the female protagonist is utterly stupid. The thing that is raped in this game is Suspension fo disbelief. Like:
The girl is watching a dress, and the owner offers her to go inside, and she steals it thinking "nobody will be able to tell"
REALLY? There were no costumers and you took the dress with the owner looking at you.
Or how did the guy get the phone with his dick in the girls mouth? Sure he didnt get it from his pants or the jersey, HE WAS NAKED. he didnt have it previously cause he was holding her head seconds before.
Well he got his DEUS EX MACHINA (or diabolos) phone misteriouly while cumming, no kidding.
That recording is used to blackmail her further, so its an important part of the plot.

There are too many shots of the old dude, which is good for storytelling, but not so good for fapping unless you are into it, but then having to watch a girls face would be bad for you.
There is an unbalance in that aspect since the girl doesnt go naked but the guy does, so take that nto account cause you might end up masturbating to an old guy instead of a girl.

TLDR of sorts:
So, overall the writing is stupid with plotholes in every step of the way. The female lead is utterly stupid, like really unbelievably stupid.
The old guys are disgusting to look at, and they have quite a lot of renders for them.
The female lead doesnt get naked.
Sex scenes are very well shot for storytelling, but too many shots for the guys, so too bad for fapping.

Nice nice nice! Really nice. Few concise dialogues, excellent graphic rendering (too bad only for the resolution that stops at 720p, if it was a 1080p the details would make it even better). Beautiful story .. please continue and do not stop as many do now that start and then stop after a few months leaving the story hanging!
Congratulations

Normally this vn's setting is easy 5 stars for my preferences, humiliation and whole elder&young thing is usually made by eastern devs, so plus one for that too, altho both are not really my thing i follow female mc wheverever they go ^^

But if a pissing scene appears without a warning, that pisses me off. I know vn is mostly about gross things happening to a very beautiful and young mc but at least you could tone down some things like this or give warning.

The story line is not bad , the renders look very good and the fetishes are done very good. See the ending where she and mom looks at each other, can think of some content there.

I will not criticize this game inline with my liking and i myself are not able to create something like this. So in the end a very good game so far will wait for the next update.

Nice story, you like it or not.
maybe if we can have some choice it would be great (I’m not into pee, my way but everybody is free)
I know choices make more work, more coding but if you can do it it can be wonderful game
Waiting for next updates

Really realistic looking pictures. Somewhat gloomy start, but even such stories happen. So why shouldn't someone tell them here.
The atmosphere that the developer creates with his narrative is also very polarizing.
I like that.
I´am curious about the continuation

Edit: I'm out. Judging by the preview, the little girl (little sister) will probably get a part too, which is going too far for me personally. From 18 ok, but she is clearly below that.

First off, let me just say my kinks are probably what the average person would call dark and twisted. That's fine, I don't give a fuck.
I will even admit that I would probably eat your liver with some fava beans and a fine glass of chianti....slllpppp...sllpppp...ssllpp..

I like my games dark too, trouble is theres not a lot on here that satisfies a twisted pervert like myself.

This game has some potential though. A beautiful young virgin being coerced into being a cumslut. The thought brings a tear to my glass eye.
Unlike other corruption games, it's not long before the gorgeous Rebecca is choking on a wrinkly old bastards cock. I love it. Then being molested by aforementioned old bastard and his fat bastard brother. Hot as fuck.

The renders are stunning in this game, really top notch. I like the fast corruption pace too, no blueballs for 10 episodes shit here. I mean it's a porn game, not fucking Tolstoy's War and Peace...

This dev has made a great start, I hope he also ignores the usual whiners and moralistic crusaders bitching about "OOH IT'S RAPE NOT COERCION!" or " IF YOU ENJOY THIS YOU ARE IMMORAL"..

Bitches, please. If you don't like it then go play one of the many fucking fluffy games on here, while cradling your care bear. Don't expect the dev to change his game just for your whining ass. Move the fuck on.

Overall a brilliant start to a stunning game that has great potential.

Good job dev!

It's too bad I can't rate this any higher, because the dev has talent. The renders are great and the dev can render and setup a scene. Plus they dropped a lot of content with some really good fapping material. I like the detail and lighting on all of the characters and I appreciate how difficult it was to setup some of those scenes. Really well done.

The game/VN, however, starts off with an overview of the MC and how she is virtuous, pure, etc and how all the other kids probably think she is a "Looser". Sigh... I knew right then the rest of this steaming pile of a story was going to be a "Looser" as well and I was not wrong. It's just bad. There is nothing likable about the MC and it makes it hard to feel bad for her. I had zero emotional connection to the story and just clicked from scene to scene, wondering why I was bothering to continue.

To be honest, I will probably keep my eye on this one in the hopes it gets better, but for now, don't expect much.

I'm loving the Novel so far. This is the story of many girls in this world. Sometimes their bodies and witts are what they have to survive. The MC is still naive and is just being exploited. I hope she gets to the point that she will take her life by the horns and make all those guys pay for what they are doing to her. Of course it will be nice to see her, her syster and mom enjoying a lot of cocks in the way to success! Go Rebecca, Go!

Complete garbage. Bad writing, attempt of a story with no logic at all(even for a porn game) and shallow main character. Quite possible schyzophrenic ass well, cause some of her "deeds" are in unhealthy conflict with each other.
Unavoidable sex content related to fetish (old/young) so game is targeting narrow audience. If that is not your kink, don't even try to play it.
Renders are passable.
Would not recommend to others.

Version: 1.0

I think most reviewers on this site rate based on two things only: whether the female is hot and whether they get fucked in the way they like. That's the only thing I think could explain the high ratings that this game has received.

Unfortunately, apart from the pretty girl, there is nothing else good about this game.

Firstly, I'm guessing the dev isn't too proficient in English, because each sentence is awkward or just sounds weird. Next, the story hasn't got a drop of originality. This particular game is about a naive and beautiful girl making a poor decision and a despicable old man who is ready to exploit her vulnerability. Nothing groundbreaking, but hey, if it ain't broke, don't fix it! The problem is that there is nothing more to the characters or the story: there is no personality, just the trope of a poor, naive and sheltered girl, and that of a lecherous and unscrupulous old man. It lacks any substance or anything that connects us to the characters.

This game will only really appeal to people who are really into women being abused and humiliated without needing to have any investment in their character.

Pros:

• Hot girl.

Cons:

• No story.
• Characters with no personality.
• Facial expressions don't match the situation.

Verdict: good for a quick fap if you are REALLY into humiliation/blackmail, nothing more.

Ep. 1 - Great blackmailing start I hope its gonna continue, Great renders and main protagonist, so far its one of the best first release version I have played.

There is not many choices so far (just one) but Its first release. If its gonna continue in similar way as ep. 1 it can be one of the best corruption/blackmail games in the future.

A game about corrupting a young and cute innocent virgin girl can only drag my attention. And this one made an amazing start.
The female MC, Rebecca, is sweet and innocent : the perfect prey for the kind corruption games I love.
The start is a little harsh for the girl (those who played the game know what I am talking about), I wish for ther next events a slower a pace to give Rebecca the time necessary to make her grow her lust so that she can enjoy her fall into depravity and corruption.

So some stupid girl who looks like an android -with weird blue eyes and all the wrong facial expressions- and is supposed to be highly moral, somehow gets caught stealing a slutty dress and is forced to give BJ to the shopkeeper, who happens to be an ugly old fart... This is the story... told as a series of DAZ renders that cover every single facial expression and head turn as a separate image... luckily for you, you're given the option to make her swallow... This glorious piece of shit work ends with a very important message... DONATE!