v 0.6
Story 5/5
Writing 4/5
Characters 4/5
Graphics 4/5
Audio 4/5
UI 3/5
Imperial Chronicles is a true choose-your-own-adventure VN with multiple boobs to follow. Naturally all paths lead to doinking and murder.
You start your career as a bored and exiled princeling filled to the brim with hormonal urges, drinking away the days in a backwater burg, neglecting your studies, and trying your damnedest to get some attention from the local wenches. Depending on your chosen background (nerdy bookworm, worst mage in the world, or capable fighter), you may find some success. Eventually this peaceful boredom ends as your steamy hot sister appears in town with word that you are to return to the capital. At this point MC is free to seek the forbidden hanky panky or a cold shower. And so the adventure begins.
An important aspect of this VN is the presence of choice: not just for show, the choices made shape the story and severely impact how the characters react and respond to MC. There are many paths to tread (as of v0.6 I found three different ways to go) with distinctly different outcomes, and distinctly different doinking.
Story 5/5
The story in this VN truly is top tier. As a political plot it hits well, not too abstract or deus ex machina ridiculous, and not so simple as to be obvious - it is similar to the style in Game of Thrones where patterns are not too complicated but the influx of new events keep adding curve balls to the mix. The different backgrounds also provide some differentiation with different sex scenes, interesting comments (mostly from the nerd), and special paths opening up. So far I have also not encountered my pet peeve, the random assassin ninja lazer pew pew girlfriend that never fits into the western medieval setting. The story has good pacing, and there is just enough information available to try and make rational decisions that aren't random (though we all know that in the end the choices are based off who's tiddies you want to gargle the most). Altogether it works really well, and feels neither forced nor meaningless. On a personal note, I never felt that MC was a mongoloid (except when drunk and looking to score) or a meaningless Superman in this VN, which is a breath of fresh ass in my book. The one thing I would like to see one or two examples more of (as of v0.6) would be silly bits (like the drinking with Aker in the prologue or tricking Aurora as a servant). Oh, and all the forbidden hanky panky is optional, so do not worry about your immortal soul.
Writing 4/5
This is a difficult one, the opposite of what I usually describe. The grammar in this VN is straight up bad. There are a lot of typos, a lot of presumably word-check related misclicks, and I even encountered one screen where the text was in mostly Russian. Not great. On the other hand, the writing never gets wooden, there's rarely any blathering exposition, and most of the text has a distinct purpose that works well together with the scenes in a show don't tell configuration. Something that stands out after having read too many VNs created by below 25-somethings is that this dev tries to avoid sounding like a current year teenager, going so far as to not use current vernacular, which greatly improves the immersion. The semantics are solid too, with all the political groups conveying what they want others to hear, and often a few extra lore points available for those that seek them out (remember that you can choose a lot of stuff here). I much prefer poor grammar to poor semantics, as I can easily parse a typo but not so much a plot. If you have trouble with English, this VN may cause you problems, but otherwise I recommend you overlook it for the high quality semantics and respect for the reader this VN offers.
Characters 5/5
The available characters are just the right amount and most are interesting, not to mention inscrutable. Your mommy (also comes with forbidden hanky panky possibilities) is a very inconspicuous lady that will prevaricate when pressed and has secret meetings with shady elves. Your forbidden fruit sisters are either sus AF or innocently helpful (so far), and due to some poor choices while drinking and a lust for vambussy, you are haunted by a granny vampire that wants to bite your dick off.
The characters are different enough to be interesting, sneaky enough that you do not trust their words, and there's enough going on that you can eventually figure out what they're up to. There's also just the right amount of sexy stuff going on for my tastes, organically flowing into the story but not interrupting it.
Graphics 4/5
Graphics are solid, and animations are solid. In a few areas I feel like they have been clipped, going from one main scene point directly to another, where I would much prefer to have a short interlude showing the journey or plan or whatever. It's disorienting to stand in the throne room talking to some tiddies and then it cuts directly to hanging by the belltower alone. Something is needed inbetween such cuts to make them less abrupt and unexpected.
Audio 4/5
Audio is good, choice of music is mostly good.
UI 3/5
The UI is barebones but works. The text font used could be better.
Summary
A highly enjoyable VN with most boxes ticked. Once the text is cleaned up and the bugs are squashed it would not surprise me if this turned out to be one of the highest rated story-first VNs on F95.