Simple summary
This is a very remarkable and thoughtful work.
It really deserves the audience to savor it carefully.
Why do you say that?
It mainly has the following characteristics:
First of all, it is more of a pure novel than a game.
Compared to AVN, which emphasizes visual content and performance,
He is more inclined to focus on and express the plot part. This description means
He prefers the plot novels that used to be presented on paper, which rely on the imagination of the audience.
To supplement the insufficient image content
The content is mostly static, static, low-frame images (but with good models, and the light performance is enhanced in many places)
So here is a special suggestion to add sexual intercourse scenes
Especially when inserting
(This is a very important and useful key)
2. He is a very carefully written content (even though many places here lack supplementary explanation and logic
This is also true from the perspective of the design conditions in the world view of this work)
Especially wrote about human nature, politics
So if the development and production team wants to fully display and emphasize these features
So I suggest you think carefully.
This is not to say that these contents are unpleasant.
It is precisely because of these characteristics that the main structural content
So it should be clearer, more cautious, more complete, and more fluent.
Three Next
Let me briefly explain the impressive part mentioned.
1. First of all... I like Oufeilia the most
He has a very attractive appearance and a cute personality.
Development and production team
PC has to catch the pro sisters' preferences
amazing
It's amazing
2.
Next is mom
He is my designated queen choice (what princess night, this must be the queen night
In particular, all kinds of stupid and low-level actions of the protagonist do not detract from her temperament and wisdom.
This is simply talent.
Noble
(Development and production team, you have demonstrated noble and worthy)
3.
The rest is relatively free color matching
Just like things
I like Spring's first impression, even if she is just a country girl... (It doesn't matter, in "We Go West", my mother also has a country girl look)
(Production block, please give me the follow-up...)
Lockhart's mother, (Does he represent the archetype of a Western woman?)
Val, I'm surprised that the opening character... doesn't have much screen time... (The Red Emperor appears more than him, right?)
There are many, many supporting characters...
4. I like it very much
MC chooses magic and travels through the wormhole with Big Sister
This is cliche (and relatable) but I like that the devs remembered to include this
But at the same time, many of the contents are too restrictive.
Like
Bookworm will definitely lose face in front of ISIS and won't be able to do anything more against Val
or
In the reunion banner (resistance to the coup) the MC didn't perform well enough... (at least I think so. A prince who has been exiled to the grassroots for 10 years and has enough knowledge and training
Even if the ministry is directly involved in military
You should also have at least a certain level of knowledge and understanding of negotiation, power struggle, and intrigue.
Four
1.
But I still have to remind you again
This work shows that the plot is well described
But seriously lacking performance
Notice that I want to see acting, taking action, not talking, imagining.
(This is not different from our traditional Eastern opera performance ideas)
2.
In addition, in fact, the main structure
Begins with linear (main structure)
This avoids the uncertainty and time sacrifice of multiple routes and cultivation.
3. There are many more even if they do have characteristics
But here is the part that I think is a pity
Get eyes from cass
I don't hate or repel obstacles
But there are too many obstacles.
Even if this is a problem of character design and structural design
So the production team can consider returning the eyes to Cass
Otherwise I would not have the heart to treat Cass badly.
Because you set the eyes as the MC.
4. There is some content
Due to limited development resources, it has been shelved.
Not yet complete
at last
This is probably the first and most complete review I have written here.
Looking forward to your guidance and suggestions
It took me a lot of time, seven or eight days, to complete the content of version 0.8.
Equivalent to 8*14 hours, more than 100 hours of reading and comprehension
(Both English and Rucia are not allowed here)
So, when can I take Aurora and ISIS at the same time? It doesn't seem to conflict with each other. Haha.
This is a very remarkable and thoughtful work.
It really deserves the audience to savor it carefully.
Why do you say that?
It mainly has the following characteristics:
First of all, it is more of a pure novel than a game.
Compared to AVN, which emphasizes visual content and performance,
He is more inclined to focus on and express the plot part. This description means
He prefers the plot novels that used to be presented on paper, which rely on the imagination of the audience.
To supplement the insufficient image content
The content is mostly static, static, low-frame images (but with good models, and the light performance is enhanced in many places)
So here is a special suggestion to add sexual intercourse scenes
Especially when inserting
(This is a very important and useful key)
2. He is a very carefully written content (even though many places here lack supplementary explanation and logic
This is also true from the perspective of the design conditions in the world view of this work)
Especially wrote about human nature, politics
So if the development and production team wants to fully display and emphasize these features
So I suggest you think carefully.
This is not to say that these contents are unpleasant.
It is precisely because of these characteristics that the main structural content
So it should be clearer, more cautious, more complete, and more fluent.
Three Next
Let me briefly explain the impressive part mentioned.
1. First of all... I like Oufeilia the most
He has a very attractive appearance and a cute personality.
Development and production team
PC has to catch the pro sisters' preferences
amazing
It's amazing
2.
Next is mom
He is my designated queen choice (what princess night, this must be the queen night
In particular, all kinds of stupid and low-level actions of the protagonist do not detract from her temperament and wisdom.
This is simply talent.
Noble
(Development and production team, you have demonstrated noble and worthy)
3.
The rest is relatively free color matching
Just like things
I like Spring's first impression, even if she is just a country girl... (It doesn't matter, in "We Go West", my mother also has a country girl look)
(Production block, please give me the follow-up...)
Lockhart's mother, (Does he represent the archetype of a Western woman?)
Val, I'm surprised that the opening character... doesn't have much screen time... (The Red Emperor appears more than him, right?)
There are many, many supporting characters...
4. I like it very much
MC chooses magic and travels through the wormhole with Big Sister
This is cliche (and relatable) but I like that the devs remembered to include this
But at the same time, many of the contents are too restrictive.
Like
Bookworm will definitely lose face in front of ISIS and won't be able to do anything more against Val
or
In the reunion banner (resistance to the coup) the MC didn't perform well enough... (at least I think so. A prince who has been exiled to the grassroots for 10 years and has enough knowledge and training
Even if the ministry is directly involved in military
You should also have at least a certain level of knowledge and understanding of negotiation, power struggle, and intrigue.
Four
1.
But I still have to remind you again
This work shows that the plot is well described
But seriously lacking performance
Notice that I want to see acting, taking action, not talking, imagining.
(This is not different from our traditional Eastern opera performance ideas)
2.
In addition, in fact, the main structure
Begins with linear (main structure)
This avoids the uncertainty and time sacrifice of multiple routes and cultivation.
3. There are many more even if they do have characteristics
But here is the part that I think is a pity
Get eyes from cass
I don't hate or repel obstacles
But there are too many obstacles.
Even if this is a problem of character design and structural design
So the production team can consider returning the eyes to Cass
Otherwise I would not have the heart to treat Cass badly.
Because you set the eyes as the MC.
4. There is some content
Due to limited development resources, it has been shelved.
Not yet complete
at last
This is probably the first and most complete review I have written here.
Looking forward to your guidance and suggestions
It took me a lot of time, seven or eight days, to complete the content of version 0.8.
Equivalent to 8*14 hours, more than 100 hours of reading and comprehension
(Both English and Rucia are not allowed here)
So, when can I take Aurora and ISIS at the same time? It doesn't seem to conflict with each other. Haha.