VN - Ren'Py - Impurities [v0.1.4] [LewdLogic]

The game itself is not bad, but the decision to make the MC an unlikable sociopath no matter which path is taken with the various LIs really kills the enjoyment. It really takes the fun out of getting women when you want the guy getting them to just get beaten to death for being such a scheming scumbag.

v0.1.4
fantastic VN.
decent amount of content for the version number.
I like the girls.
every girl you have a choice between the typical romance simp power fantasy route or being a dominant chad. you can mix and match.
there are additional choices beyond the girl route.

This game has decent graphics.
The writing is pretty bad. None of the characters are interesting in the slightest. The pacing is terrible. . That's another thing, MC is unlikable and unrealistic but worst of all deeply inconsistent. The game chooses to make MC have a defined personality sort of rather than going with the silent protagonist thing, but that personality doesn't make sense.

As far as constructive criticism goes, I'd recommend working with writers who actually have experience writing fiction. Properly establish characters before jumping straight into sexual stuff. I'd recommend a redux of some sort because the opening is sort of beyond saving from a narrative point.

Very nice graphics, considering the engine, very high pace - almost instant action, characters all at some inference point at the first or second scene, meaning you can set the direction fast. As I've seen these go - its a fuckfest, and it might peter out before reaching a conclusion or it might just shoot off to the stars. As of 0.1.4 its a solid 4,5 star!

As of latest update the game has felt jarring because of the tone. What do I mean by this? Well it feels like two very distinct personalities exist a maledom guy and a submissive wimp (if that’s your thing more power to you). I get some of the issue he’s completely powerless in many ways but it’s all about attitude even when powerless and I don’t mean how people have different personalities at work than from home because even in those environments the person still shows reflections of the true personality. No this about how dumb this character is and then immediately regrets it and now looks like a wimp instead of calmly (as you would expect for the dom path to be) analyzing and planning.

One of the best newer games out there for a maledom lover like me. I'm sure if you like romance routes there's plenty to like too, but the writing and model work on this one is damn near perfect for a game of this type imo. The screen flashing with the girls' futures is brilliant and a great way to show the player where the important choices are and telegraph the consequences without straight up saying it in text (which is fine, but often takes me out of the narrative a little bit). Girls are hot, love the direction the game's going, writing was good enough that I didn't want to skip any of the dialogue, can't really ask for much more at this stage of development. Can't wait to see where this one ends up in the future.

not a big hs guy but i wanted to give this one a try as it looked interesting . This was an excellent game in the genre, providing some both usual and unusual kinks that I found surprising and welcomed. The character designs were appealing accented by their wardrobe and the sounds as well as music matching the scene and not just background or generic. the girls are one the sub side i really like that..

The choices were incredible providing a warning when it affected relationship direction and a brief flash of where it would lead. Rollback provided an alternate glimpse, which opened replay options if a player wants to explore the other path not taken originally.

All in all a great gaming experience that I know I will want to support further development and look forward to where this dev will take this amazing game. best of luck

I really like this game. The models and animations are amazing, really like different routes for each character. Right now its beginning but there is a content and many sex scenes with in my opinion great animations. Cannot wait for day 2 update and good luck

This was an excellent game in the genre, providing some both usual and unusual kinks that I found surprising and welcomed. The character designs were appealing accented by their wardrobe and the sounds as well as music matching the scene and not just background or generic.

The choices were incredible providing a warning when it affected relationship direction and a brief flash of where it would lead. Rollback provided an alternate glimpse, which opened replay options if a player wants to explore the other path not taken originally.

All in all a great gaming experience that I know I will want to support further development and look forward to where this dev will take this amazing game.

Pretty good for a new release. There are a variety of different girls and kinks, but none of them are much explored yet. There are alot of animations and well as still frames. The plot is okay if a bit generic. No real bugs. The UI is clean. 5/5 for a first release.

First release [v0.1.0]
The update end with day one, so the story will be divided in days, no sandbox, choices regarding the type of relationships you want with a character(love or corruption style). For now there is only one scene, standard animation WITH SOUNDS, imortant to notice. Nice characters with the classic mom, older sis and younger sis + aunt. Also the school characters like principal, teacher and classmates look good.
Overall looks like a solid game and it's pretty promising