VN - Ren'Py - In Her Service [v0.55] [Blue Factory Games]

This game/story is just odd. The graphics are okay, the characters are okay and the story is okay. It's just weird. I don't know how else to describe it. I tried playing it and it just did not grab me. There was nothing really that grabbed me and made me want to continue. It was just kind of boring and odd.

The dev has some talent and I am hopeful people like it, but it's just not for me.

Story/Character:
The story starts with an interesting premise as you and your partner with a daughter are brought to become slaves for a rich noble woman. As time pass you begin to lust for your master, and the master-servant relationship becomes blurred. This is honestly such a refreshing writing, the pacing feels great. The slow corruption of the main character having an affair with her master is done really well. It’s such an interesting premise that I haven’t seen in many games, a master-servant relationship blurring the line. Unfortunately, at times the dialogue is riddled with typos and inconsistencies. It just takes it out of my immersive reading experience.

The main character is a great loving husband that looks out for his family but slowly succumbs to the lust of an affair. He is mournful yet enticed by the nature of an affair. All the characters in this game are great, except for the daughter. Girlfriend is loving, yet a stubborn and affectionate partner. The master is a seductive and teasing character that continues to lure the main character in.

Content:
There is a chunk of content in this game. However, most of it is mostly writing. The sex scenes, I feel like are quite hit or miss. It’s very much largely inconsistent in its qualities, at times it’s really good and at times it's just so bland. Currently, the game has currently cheating content and sharing, albeit it’s small. However those scenes are exceptionally hot and wants me craving for more.

Gameplay:
It’s just your typical adult visual novel. There are choices throughout the game to pick whether to stay faithful to your wife or have an affair. All choices lead to an affair, which I felt like the option to stay faithful to your wife is pretty much useless.

Visuals:
The visuals are an absolute let down. At the beginning at the game, the visuals are awful. The characters and renders just look terrible. Honestly, I'm not sure what models they use, but it looks like screenshots from the sims. However as the game progresses, the renders of the characters and visuals do become better. But still felt below average. The only redeeming factor is the sex animations are quite good and smooth.

Sound:
The sound design is average. There’s background music and it changes depending on the mood. Honestly the lack of sex sounds and moaning, especially when eavesdropping the master, just made the scene flatter.

The game has such an interesting plot with as equally engaging characters. However the visual just made the experience feel flat and uninspiring at times, the lack of moans and sex noises especially during those voyeurism scenes was really needed. I reckon if they did a remake of this game in regards to it's visuals, we would have a great game on our hands. If you're looking for an interesting cheating/swinging-themed game that's starting to spice up you might wanna try this out.

v0.54
Very strange game. It's somehow similar to Japanese novels, where you read a lot of boring dialogues but less action happens. The story is full of heavy, melancholic feelings; it brings me into a depressive state. And it's not the NTR that's the problem, but it just has no fun at all—just four people suffering in their own way. Also, the girlfriend model is not attractive to me. Lost time, will not come back.

My Rating for (v0.54) is:

Pros:
+ Nice Graphics
+ Nice Beginning
+ interesting story
+ many paths
+ Getting Hotter with each Update
+ Gets updated often

Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:
I find this game interesting although there are not many scenes that are Hot the way I like them, but the Game is just starting and has already shown potential, if the game starts getting spicier, then it would be a game worth supporting, at least for my taste, there is no need to change anything in the game...characters and story are nice.
worth the download.

a game with huge potential. the setup for the story is great. the characters are interesting. the dialogue feels natural and real. the kinks are incorporated in a meaningful way. tight cast of characters.

there are some teething problems. like another reviewer mentioned the first two lewd scenes could use some work. some issues with the renpy UI being let's say experimental, and the usage of periods to denote the passage of time.

in summary, i'm sure this game will be a success.

At v0,41, it's just a prologue (as you're informed at the end of the current version).

I have to say, as early as it is, it is currently 'good'. The premise is interesting and it's generally executed well.

If you don't mind the graphics style (it even has some flair at times), then be sure that the dialogue works well. It's tight, is not cumbersome, or inane. It drives the story cleanly and concisely - as it should in a VN.

After all, dialogue is an artform in of itself.

Anyway! I feel short-changed in respect of lewds. Twice you bang your girlfriend:


From a technical stand-point. The girlfriend lewds are a perfect and natural way to insert prowess when coming to animated H-scenes early in the game. It is like a teaser: 'look how great the sex scenes are going to be!'

So yeah, not a good look for that kind of content so far. Does that mean all lewd scenes are going to be a let-down?!

I did think that having underwhelming 'lewds' with the girlfriend and her child-ish attitude at one point was a way to rail-road the player into choosing to chase the 'Mistress'...

Buuuuuut. The game is worth putting on your watch list, I'd say.

What a well written story. MC is a fallen noble who is relegated to being a slave and was bought by a noblewomen with girlfriend and her daughter.

MC immediately has a crush on mistress and once mistress found out he is a fallen noble from one of the founding families of the kingdom, You knew this story was getting hot.

When Sylvia saw mistress and MC kissing, I laughed for a good 3 minutes. That's crazy. Like Damn bro,Did that just happen. 1st time seeing a female get cucked in a Ren'Py Game

Graphics are not the best but this story is 90% better than the stuff we see here. Incredible character development. From a loving man to a man fighting and wondering to questioning himself and his values.

5/5 for me.

Good start, building off of a compelling master-slave dynamic. I like the netorase part (cheating on your gf), but I'm less a fan of the netorare (her sleeping with another guy) element. For now, the netorare bit is kind of ignorable, and I hope it stays that way, or just extinguishes completely.

Great game.Characters with believable characters, given the theme of the game.very good work with light in scenes (especially at night).The potential of this game is huge.I do not understand the claims to the actions of the main character, given his position as a debtor on the rights of a slave.The tags and description clearly indicate the content of the game, so the claims about the NTR theme seem unfounded. P.S. I apologize for the bad English.

Personally i liked the game, the story is really good and concept in unique. There is drama to the story which makes it interesting than most of the visual novels.
Graphics, animations and models are good.
It's still in the initial stage and i am betting on it that it will do very well in the upcoming updates. Definitely a good game with good potential. Good luck to the dev.

Railroaded by the dev's whims from jump. I didn't even want that spoiled ****, but then we aren't given much choice about anything! And the girlfriend was no prize either. I'm so tired of these whipped, punk ass MC's. By mid point in the prologue, I was ready to chain that fool (MC) to his bed to stop his nocturnal nature hikes. The only remotely interesting woman in the game thus far is the girlfriend's daughter. And she's just there, a pretty carrot dangling at the end of a very ugly stick you'll likely never see the end of... in summation, with it's no account characters and flimsy premise, I've seen test patterns with more plot...