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VN - Ren'Py - In-Security [v0.1] [NTR Bakery]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    NotJonathanFrakes

    Quality of renders is very good and interspersed with well generated AI-animations.

    Writing is good, but appears already preset in a very cuck-focused direction of the game with rather few choices overall, which feels like there is little to no control over what happens so far.

    The apparent target fetish range on a scale from cuck to pimp definitely points far-cuck

    The design choices show a beta male MC with a scrawny appearance around the age of 20, while the girlfriend appears strong, tall, curvy and more decisive with looks suggesting an age around her late 20s. The MC's workspace also emphasizes his immature looks with a highly stereotyped hacker-den design and posters on the walls, creating further contrast to all other characters' more mature and adult appearances.

    Other characters so far all look older, more muscular and masculine than the MC, while also appearing mostly attractive.

    The only candidate for an old-ugly-bastard type character for humiliation content would be the janitor, whose design is old, long bearded with an unkempt appearance, but the direction of the game so far (v0.1) does not suggest to focus on those types of encounters.

    There are some minigame events, which did not add any value to the game imo.
    The menu design all the way to the textbox is also styled to appear very hacker™, though I found the fitting scanlines-designed textbox annoying due being animated.

    Conclusion
    Altogether a good effort I think, however not my personal cup of tea as I prefer the humiliation/corruption focused games with old-ugly-bastards and no interracial content.

    Best of luck to the dev!
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    Seittitgib

    Very attractive female MC and supporting cast. I enjoyed the quick time event minigames, it adds an extra layer to usual visual novel which is just standard choices. Also seems that the MC and his girl have a good degree of control over things despite the unavoidable NTS. 5/5 as of 0.1
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    mrvyrin

    really good start, the art and story i have high hopes for. the only con i have is the mini game stuff. i had to go back and reread a lot because the mini games take away from the story. i hope the dev adds a way to turn them off.
  4. 4.00 star(s)

    N0madS0uL

    VERSION: v0.1
    SUMMARY: Pretty good start, lots of potential, but clearly for the cuck/ntr type
    RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐⭐

    NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.
    1. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    2. General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    4. Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    5. Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    6. Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    7. UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    8. Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    9. Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐
    10. Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐
    Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

    PROS: (y)- See my opinions section for details.
    1. Really sexy/beautiful looking LIs
    2. General renders and visuals are good and scenes are detailed
    3. Animations during lewd scenes are great but its truly nice to see small animations during normal play scenes also.
    4. Writing is structured and reads well, not bloated with frivolous text.
    5. Story is semi interesting but nothing profound.
    CONS: (n)- See my opinions section for details.
    1. Almost feels more kinetic than anything, not sure how you can avoid NTR or Cuck content and then if you playing this, you probably wont want to...so whats the deal here?
    2. MC is a bit of a beta in his ways, where the wife is much more inclined to step out and makes that I question how they ever stuck together...
    3. Lack of music and any really decent sounds save for annoying bells, phone ringing is pretty disappointing, especially lacking lewd scene sounds.
    4. Stupid button spamming mini games are annoying.
    5. Lack of gallery option.
    OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS: :unsure::coffee:

    NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)
    • I am not a fan of mini-games, mostly because they not done very well, either too annoying to complete and long winded or simply annoying period. Like in this button spamming is irritating and just messes up your mouse...why have crap like that?
    TLDR:

    Impressive for initial start, developer has some skills for sure and the visual quality is very good, the story is basic but lack of decent audio does make this a bit disappointing, especially considering the quality otherwise.
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    SasakiHiro

    A great start of episode 1! I like the quality of story and the renders. Also, it releases with animation in the first update which is an additional Point for me. The UI is awesome too.

    Looking/Excited for the next update (y)(y)(y)
  6. 4.00 star(s)

    Pogo123

    4 stars for sure! great potential! very few things i - just personally - not like or am sceptical about but the rest is just really damn good!

    Pros:
    + NTR!
    + very sexy fmc with a extremely sexy face, nice "simple but sexy" hairstyle (happens way too rarely) and big firm tits with big nipples but also not too slim elswhere!
    + pretty damn good render quality!
    + great english (better than my english)
    + smooth interface/already a few choices
    + pretty good amount of content for a release to get an idea
    + male mc looks nicely average
    + animations are pretty damn great! (*)
    + intersting story/hot setting
    + fmc is much hotter than the other women as it should be


    Cons: (quite personal)
    - males have yet not enough variety
    - "fat guy" is too fat and "old guy" (grey?) looks face wise too young there are much better old men presets out there (some really nasty looking which would be hot to see with hot mc luna
    - great animations but: it feels a sometimes a bit unnecessary (just scared the time and energy is going lost there thats all...)
    - sex scenes yet just with the mc (which in my opinion always in unnecessary (and i am scared it might be like JOHN but i hope not i hope later you can chose "don't want to have sex or be bored" and then fuck with the boss, janitor (who needs a remodel) and other nasty, ugly or cunning guys :devilish:

    (please don't get lost in making amazing animations for minor - even potentially really sexy scenes - i hope you understand it right. also please use a real old men face and body model for older guys and add more variety of males not only "tall/muscular/groomed/young" looking men. (i could send you some intersting male presets cause at the moment guys like the black guy or janitor look like young fit men pretending/cosplaying old men.
    also please let fmc or mc choose if she/he wants to have sex or not. PLEASE cause the game has so much potential and i would even like to support it more later on!
  7. 4.00 star(s)

    Hatsume Kill

    Story is decent enough and kept me interested. MC is going to be divisive probably since he's a guy in the chair nerd character. Sex scenes are hot and the wife is hot. No hard NTR just yet but there's the groundwork for it being setup and the wife becoming sluttier. Good start so far.