VN - Ren'Py - In-Security [v0.3] [NTR Bakery]

Well, I tried the game today for the first time, in the end there is still little substance at the story level, you can tell that there are two predefined paths, therefore, the game is for a specific audience, whether NTS or NTR, so, already in this situation, the circle of players is aimed at only two genders, the graphics are not homogeneous, there are discrepancies in the characters, both visually and in the bodies, disproportionate rendering, audio, only a few sounds, the menus are missing options, as in the game, basically, you only have the single choice, either choose NTS or Choose NTR, now the NTS plot has its own nice story, at least from what we understood now, the choice on NTR, is too easy to understand, basically, in the journey of valor, FMC and the boss will fuck, behind MC's back, and here's where the plot falls, one day before the wife is loving and jealous of the colleague who courts MC, and then she goes to fuck the boss secretly, starting a relationship behind MC's back by MC. So, a game for fanboys, with a logic in the now well-known NTR path. Experienced players like me will immediately understand what happens in the next updates, and this is another point against it, when already in the second release, you left spoilers for the stories, therefore, linear and without mystery. It's like reading a detective story and knowing who the murderer is.

Great NTS game!

First of all, the wife is amazing. She is hot, has a nice personality, and handles the MMC's cuckold fetish amazingly.

The story is a pretty straightforward NTS story. The MMC develops a cuckold fetish. The FMC discovers learns of it by accident. She starts teasing and hinting at the MMC, and eventually, he finally takes the hint and confesses. In addition, the MMC secretly watching FMC flirt with is a very nice element.

The bulls are pretty nice. I personally prefer the black one.

Nts games are my absolute favourite type. So I've pretty much played them all, and this one ranks up there with the best so far. First, let me start off by saying that with the slew of NTR/NTS AI games being thrown around lately, it's super nice to see an actual game made with superior graphics. Because I can see how hard the Dev has worked to create his models, I don’t mind the use of AI to make his models animated. Plus, for AI animation, it's done pretty well.

So for graphics, I give 5/5.

Now for the most important part, the story.

While the story arc of a couple who work together while the wife/gf starts to get it on with others at the workplace is a very well-used trope, this still doesn't feel boring or humdrum. The IT angle, where the MC gets to use his hacker skills and work position to actually see what's going on, is refreshing from the usual, he's pretty much clueless and dumb archetype.

What I really like is the pacing. The Dev introduces us to the main characters in this play at a good pace, letting us get a feel for who is who while learning the basics about their personalities. At the same time, we get a very clear sense of how close and in love our couple is, which is a nice touch because most games neglect that aspect. When sharing or encouraging your spouse/gf to be sexually active with others, it makes sense to be in a good, solid spot in your relationship, and this is how it's presented here. I like that.

So, the pacing is beautifully done. After learning who our players are, the Dev wastes no time in setting the stage for the MC to slowly learn what his kink(s) are at a believable rate. Unlike most games where the MC and his wife/gf seem to either instantly jump into, hey I'm an insta slut that will get gang banged immediately upon discovering that my hubby/bf likes to share, or the opposite, where the Dev spends years just to lead up to a handjob given to a stranger, this game gets it right. The MC discovers he gets turned on by watching or knowing that his wife is being flirted with. He likes that she's desirable. Then he realizes he likes it when she reciprocates as well. After a few instances of him spying through the work cameras and doing some self-introspection, he starts to imagine scenarios where his wife is getting it on with others. This grows as well from small things to wham bam, thank you, ma'am, take a load while I watch.

I really loved the way the Dev used a wife/gf look-alike in a foreign film, getting railed to bring the sex question to the forefront of both the MC's and his gf's mind. I found it to be very original, which is hard to do nowadays.

Also, on top of the I wanna see my gf getting fucked by other men " storyline, we have a real story of intrigue going on as well. This isn't just a let's see how many ways and times I can get the MC's wife/gf laid, as is the case in most NTR/NTS games; this actually has a parallel plot to discover, and it seems quite interesting too. I am invested in seeing not only how sexy his gf can get with others and how far they'll sink into delicious depravity, but I want to see what happens to what he's discovering at the workplace as well.

Plus, I can see the obvious but still highly effective plot device of some bad Mafia types are working with my and my gf's boss types, and somehow, someway the MC's gf will end up getting railed by a bunch of tough guys. I like this a lot. I'm hoping to see a fresh spin on this.

So I give it a 5/5 for the story so far as well.

I also am super impressed with how hard and fast the dev is working. For an Oct launch of the game to now having a third installment out just before Christmas is pretty amazing and a sign of good things to come. The third installment is only available for his Patreons atm, but that alos is also a good thing. This Dev deserves to get paid so that he'll keep up the pace and hopefully become successful. I'd love to see a future where this guy's games are a staple in the NTS/TNR field.

I'd even go so far as to recommend supporting them. I'm not a rich guy myself by any means, and already support two other projects atm, I'm probably going to join this one too after the New Year.

TL/DR - Anyone who enjoys NTR/NTS games will be thrilled with this one so far. It's early on, but the amount of work in just two installations is significant and is excellently done. Definitely worth a dl.

This was really good. I'm very surprised at the start of this game and I had a really good time playing it. The renders are gorgeous, the animations are really good although there are some AI animations mixed in as well but they are really well done, you can tell the dev was careful with them so they don't look weird like in other games, the characters are really well designed and the female characters are really hot. But for me what stood out the most was the relationship and dynamic between the MC and his wife, they complement each other really well and you can tell they care deeply for each other, I honestly can't see myself going into the NTR route for them because of how I enjoyed seeing them discover this new new kink, so NTS it is then. It's 4 stars for now because it's still very early in it's development but I can't wait to see what it's in store for the game and what the dev will cook in here, there's definitely a lot of potential.

Definitely In-security (0.2 version) is off to a good start. First off, the story is pretty interesting, with well thought characters and dinamics (specially a good justification for the camera part, as well as not limiting the game to that). It is a bit of a slow burn but the game compensates that with the fantasies the MC plays in his mind and his scenes with his wife. Though, at least so far, it doesn't seem like the choices matter much. Hopefully that'll change.

Render quality is really good and character models are very good as well. Animations are well done also, even though the AI parts are noticeable, and sex scenes are pretty hot. I took out the music as I usually do so can't comment on that, and there are really few sound effects outside. And at least in my playthrough the only bug I found was a minor graphical problem in the lower part of the game-screen.

So, all in all, so far its off to a really good start and I could easily see it going up to 5 stars if they play their cards right.

Quality of renders is very good and interspersed with well generated AI-animations.

Writing is good, but appears already preset in a very cuck-focused direction of the game with rather few choices overall, which feels like there is little to no control over what happens so far.

The apparent target fetish range on a scale from cuck to pimp definitely points far-cuck

The design choices show a beta male MC with a scrawny appearance around the age of 20, while the girlfriend appears strong, tall, curvy and more decisive with looks suggesting an age around her late 20s. The MC's workspace also emphasizes his immature looks with a highly stereotyped hacker-den design and posters on the walls, creating further contrast to all other characters' more mature and adult appearances.

Other characters so far all look older, more muscular and masculine than the MC, while also appearing mostly attractive.

The only candidate for an old-ugly-bastard type character for humiliation content would be the janitor, whose design is old, long bearded with an unkempt appearance, but the direction of the game so far (v0.1) does not suggest to focus on those types of encounters.

There are some minigame events, which did not add any value to the game imo.
The menu design all the way to the textbox is also styled to appear very hacker™, though I found the fitting scanlines-designed textbox annoying due being animated.

Conclusion
Altogether a good effort I think, however not my personal cup of tea as I prefer the humiliation/corruption focused games with old-ugly-bastards and no interracial content.

Best of luck to the dev!

Very attractive female MC and supporting cast. I enjoyed the quick time event minigames, it adds an extra layer to usual visual novel which is just standard choices. Also seems that the MC and his girl have a good degree of control over things despite the unavoidable NTS. 5/5 as of 0.1

really good start, the art and story i have high hopes for. the only con i have is the mini game stuff. i had to go back and reread a lot because the mini games take away from the story. i hope the dev adds a way to turn them off.

VERSION: v0.1
SUMMARY: Pretty good start, lots of potential, but clearly for the cuck/ntr type
RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐⭐

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
4. Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
5. Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
6. Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
7. UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
9. Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐⭐
10. Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Really sexy/beautiful looking LIs
2. General renders and visuals are good and scenes are detailed
3. Animations during lewd scenes are great but its truly nice to see small animations during normal play scenes also.
4. Writing is structured and reads well, not bloated with frivolous text.
5. Story is semi interesting but nothing profound.

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Almost feels more kinetic than anything, not sure how you can avoid NTR or Cuck content and then if you playing this, you probably wont want to...so whats the deal here?
2. MC is a bit of a beta in his ways, where the wife is much more inclined to step out and makes that I question how they ever stuck together...
3. Lack of music and any really decent sounds save for annoying bells, phone ringing is pretty disappointing, especially lacking lewd scene sounds.
4. Stupid button spamming mini games are annoying.
5. Lack of gallery option.

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• I am not a fan of mini-games, mostly because they not done very well, either too annoying to complete and long winded or simply annoying period. Like in this button spamming is irritating and just messes up your mouse...why have crap like that?

TLDR:

Impressive for initial start, developer has some skills for sure and the visual quality is very good, the story is basic but lack of decent audio does make this a bit disappointing, especially considering the quality otherwise.

A great start of episode 1! I like the quality of story and the renders. Also, it releases with animation in the first update which is an additional Point for me. The UI is awesome too.

Looking/Excited for the next update

4 stars for sure! great potential! very few things i - just personally - not like or am sceptical about but the rest is just really damn good!

Pros:
+ NTR!
+ very sexy fmc with a extremely sexy face, nice "simple but sexy" hairstyle (happens way too rarely) and big firm tits with big nipples but also not too slim elswhere!
+ pretty damn good render quality!
+ great english (better than my english)
+ smooth interface/already a few choices
+ pretty good amount of content for a release to get an idea
+ male mc looks nicely average
+ animations are pretty damn great! (*)
+ intersting story/hot setting
+ fmc is much hotter than the other women as it should be


Cons: (quite personal)
- males have yet not enough variety
- "fat guy" is too fat and "old guy" (grey?) looks face wise too young there are much better old men presets out there (some really nasty looking which would be hot to see with hot mc luna
- great animations but: it feels a sometimes a bit unnecessary (just scared the time and energy is going lost there thats all...)
- sex scenes yet just with the mc (which in my opinion always in unnecessary (and i am scared it might be like JOHN but i hope not i hope later you can chose "don't want to have sex or be bored" and then fuck with the boss, janitor (who needs a remodel) and other nasty, ugly or weird guys

(please don't get lost in making amazing animations for minor - even potentially really sexy scenes - i hope you understand it right. also please use a real old men face and body model for older guys and add more variety of males not only "tall/muscular/groomed/young" looking men. (i could send you some intersting male presets cause at the moment guys like the black guy or janitor look like young fit men pretending/cosplaying old men.
also please let fmc and mc choose if she/he wants to have sex or not. PLEASE cause the game has so much potential and i would even like to support it more later on!

Story is decent enough and kept me interested. MC is going to be divisive probably since he's a guy in the chair nerd character. Sex scenes are hot and the wife is hot. No hard NTR just yet but there's the groundwork for it being setup and the wife becoming sluttier. Good start so far.