VN - Ren'Py - Incest [v0.4.9] [17MOONKEYS]

Characters appear naked next to the chatbox, first thing that ook me WAY off from any kind of immersion.
There was nothing showing the MC looking at her breast, yet he mentions being caught looking. I guess its a work in progress and perhaps you'll see to those details later on, like actually focusing on something instead of just casually mention it in the chat box.

The story telling is off imo, but the story you're trying to tell has promise.

I wish you the best on this, but it needs a lot of work still.

So far (4.7) it has a good story and great models with a good bit of humor mixed in. hope android 17 keeps up the good work.

As someone with an impregnation fetish I also hope to see plenty of this in the future---if possible.

Renders are high quality, writing is good, story is very original and one of the most interesting on the site. Definitely worth an attempt at reading. Only downside is models kind of seem similar to other stock ones, but they're unique enough to not be distracting

The story is scary - the level is equal to edgar allan poe and NOT like some modern horror shockers. I like that very much.

The lenght of the dialogues is enjoyable. Not too short and not exhausting.
The storytelling is eclectic and brings a lot of new ideas.
By now NOT the same old stuff like the annoying older sister and the curious untouched younger sister.
By now i could not find any logical mistakes in the plot.
The polt is written so good, that i almost feel compassion for the (soon?) horned husband.

The Graphic is on the usual good level like many renpy games here.

Let me just say that I might be biased in my review so it's really up to you to Add a star or 2 if this genre appeals to you.

That being said, I don't really like horror VN's and I find the lack of "build up" boring (again this is personal taste).

The story is average, which is fine, it will appeal to horror fans.
The characters/models look ok, if not a bit generic, these models are seen across a lot of games. I find that a bit lazy personally, if you're going to create a game take some time to customize your characters.
The relationships are a bit too forced and in your face. I mean, it's like the space of a few hours(in game) you can f your A**T without much effort at al... and your M***R basically has 0 inhibitions... which is bizarre considering your relationship... anyway, maybe it's just me... I prefer the slow corruption....

Positives, the sex scenes are pretty good. Well done and will get you fappin....

Overall, I got bored, too much in your face... and story is meh (for me)

3 stars.

v0.4.5

Positiv:

1. Good looking character models
2. Well writen
3. Story is catchy
4. animated scene

Negativ:

1. Doll is creepy but its a horror-jerk game sooo please no jumpscares

Looking forward to the next version!

Crazy, crazy, crazy, i have never encounter a game like this in the forum, reallyyyyy reallyyyyy good story, at the beginning i was a little taken aback because i didnt like where the story was going with that doll and stuff, but hell, the game has so much potential, the characters are well designed and one point that i like about it, its the fetish of pubes in the game, makes it so kinky, this is definitely a MUST, I RECOMMEND THIS GAME 100%.

There is just one thing that i dont like and is that is not complete and the price you have to pay for it, and i would gladly pay if the devs compromise to give us a lot of updates, and that is a one payment on all of his platforms, because i cant have this game on my steam page, what would people thing nevertheless i will give it 5 stars, this game is FIRE and like i said before it has so much potential

really good, i love these kind os horror games with incest in it. and the models are so hot, and the dev has balls t o dont go with the "landlady" crap, goes straitgh to mom/aunt. looking foward to the next updates.

Pretty good so far. Love the model of the aunt and what little I saw of the mother. Right now it's basically a self contained short story but will apparently keep going with the mother and whatnot. I really liked this and the other game by the same developer, UFO, but they seem pretty slow with updates so I'm not going to hold my breath for a lot more content soon

I was wary at the start but then in came the doll. A real good story, written well. As the game progresses we will see if aunty is pregnant as her hubby is shooting blanks (my assumption). Our hero is going to be working overtime, he has to satisfy both sisters as from now on. Great game

How Long To Beat: 30 - 60 minutes

A short, concise story between a mother and son in a haunted house.

There's really just one scene and it isn't animated. However, there is good sound design, the writing is straightfoward and succinct, and the renders are nice.

I'm not the biggest fan of the mom's character model. She's a grounded MILF design: curvy, big tits, thick thighs, natural belly. Not unattractive, but I tend to like a slightly more idealized face.

It doesn't do anything extraordinary, but it does what it does solidly.

RECOMMENDED. It can be played in one sitting, shows potential for the developer, and is nice for Halloween / spooky season.

This is an edit from the previous review.

Pros:
Top notch graphics 10/10
Improved conversations
improved story - more 3 dimensional.

Cons:
Disturbing imagery

For help with the dialogue feel free to contact me - I used to write fiction

Releases demo that has less content than first version to then try and ask you for $20 to buy steam version as its about to get to good part from first version, literally worse than internet going down as youre about to climax wtf is this shit

A bad Demo, no sex, no story, no character development, just an older milf that you DON'T fuck.

This is an obvious ploy to try and get people to go buy the full version, but the 'demo' is so bad I can't see any success on that front.

Friends, just say no and move on. Hundreds of better VNs here to meet your kink that aren't scams.

I'm baffled how this has such a high rating. This "demo" is about 2 minutes of content. The story makes no sense. There really is no story. "We're at this house. Hey Aunt, can I call you mom? Hey mom, let's sleep naked. I'm going to have sex with you now. The end."

I found the "completed" 1.0 version, and it's about 4 minutes of content. I'm not one to make accusations, but it's monumentally strange that this demo has 52 pages of comments, 29 reviews, such a high rating, 2 minutes of the total 4 minutes of total game content, and there's just nothing there.

This is reselling previously published free game.
Developer decided to try to sell game that was here presented as free game.
Price is 19 $
Avoid!
Other than that I enjoyed the game but this developer attitude is just horrible.

Honestly it's pretty average right now. It doesn't do anything new or better than other renpy games. The busty milf is in my opinion the only positive. I understand that you are still at the beginning of the game so i'm still hopeful for what's to come. Personally I wouldn't mind if you added some interracial NTR to spice things up (you could just make it optional if you don't want it to be a main part of the story).

(Review for v0.4, updated from v0.2)

This is a little horror game with you and your aunt spending the night in a house on the country to take some photos, and some strange things happening as it was to be expected.

Both the MC and aunt are models from UFO. You have a quickie with your aunt, though it's all based on stills and there are no animations; the game is quite vanilla except for the very good looking renders.

The story is still quite short for now, the gameplay lasts for like 20 mins. There's virtually nothing yet worth fapping to but you might like the jump scares

It starts off strong. An intriguing premise, a decent horror setup, and then the writer gets bored and just makes it porn. Basically this game starts out like a slow-burn. You've got to seduce your mom and circumstances either help or hinder that. But then the second you kiss your mom for the first time, it's just straight to fucking.

EDIT: The developer took this criticism to heart and made some changes. It is a much better game now. The sudden ramp-up in sexiness has an in-universe explanation now, the writing is smoother, and there have been other story changes. I added one star to my review and am open to adding a fourth if development continues in this manner.

First off, I have to thank this game for blending horror and arousal so effectively that it left me both terrified and turned on. It truly hosts some chilling supernatural events, though it's a short play. The adult content is sufficient for its length and features a classic incest storyline. I recommend it for a one-night fap session; the mix of horror will surely spice up your evening