VN - Ren'Py - Indecent Wife Hana [v0.45 Patreon] [Fallen Eros]

This is a game written by someone with a very clear understanding of how the Netorase fetish works and delivers on every aspect of it.

For now the entire game focus's on Tsatsuki (the husband character) as he indulges in his netorase/cuckold fetish. There are lots of really hot scenes that have been beautifully drawn but the Dev is really good at "less is more". There's a thrill in not getting the full picture and speculating what the wife, Hana, may be doing behind closed doors. It's a big part of the fetish and the game centres around it and the internal monologue of a man that is letting his fetish consume him.

As a result this game is really not for everybody, specifically if you don't have have that kink yourself I think you'd struggle at least until Hana's POV is released.

However, if this is something your vaguely interested in or if you wanted to experience NTR without the emotional turmoil afterwards, this is the fap for you.

I'm on this forum because I like a good story and sharing stories in particular. So the description attracted me.

First up, I like the occasional humour in this VN, it can be fun at times and earned an extra star. Some jokes are overused too much, like, Yumi 'falls' way too often.

Unfortunately, this is just not sharing and I feel mislead by the description. The characters fail to resonate. The husband is pathetic, the wife is painstakingly manipulative, and Yumi a pathetic mute. Her claims of undying love just fail and she clearly has no respect for her husband at all, and just takes away from the enjoyment for me. 'On the same page,' stands for the wife doing what she likes. This cuck is just too pathetic and too well manipulated. The VN moves from sharing comedy to an NTR tragedy, for example, when hubby comes home and finds Yumi hiding in the shower with the wife after the wife hides Yumi and her pathetic attempts to lie to her husband.

I did like the wife checking in on the husbands mental state at the start, even though she uses an absence of communication to tease her husband to the brink of cruelty at times. Any sort of communication between husband and wife is so refreshing in a VN but it soon becomes a mockery of one of the few redeeming features of this VN. The wife only focuses on his horniness and 99% of the time is dismissive of his concerns. The husband pathetically just agrees with her and his concerns are dismissed. It would have been nice to see the husband and wife deal with these concerns on occasion and hash them out as a sharing couple would. It would have given the characters a little depth at least and opportunities for comedy with some imagination. All too often her decisions are unilateral (condom decision) and she does her own thing (including cheating eg, phone evidence at the beach) without talking to her husband. When hubby does bother to challenge her actions, she asks for forgiveness, hubby always excuses her and usually blames himself ugh.

Anyway, the visuals are good, although stagnant at times.

The background music was a highlight, not too intrusive, just a nice background rhythm. Good stuff.

Sorry it just doesn't work for me overall. I really wanted it to.

This game is too Japanese for its own good. I don't know what the deal is with the developer, whether he's a Japanese guy who publishes on western websites. Or if he's a westerner who's been overly influenced by Japanese culture and eroge game design. But the fact of the matter is, in it's current state, I can't recommend this game to anyone unless they're looking for a jerk off buddy simulator. Until he wraps up this story and finally tells it from the wife's perspective, the title shouldn't be Indecent Wife Hana, because that's misleading. The title should be, "Hana's Horny Husband" due to the absurd amount of text dedicated to him. His every thought, feeling and reaction is narrated in explicit (abhorrent) detail that makes up roughly 98% of what you're reading. For every line of text Hana has, her husband has about a hundred. And it's usually him telling you how he's masturbating and cumming as the screen flashes white. Hence why I call it a jerk off buddy simulator. Only people more interested in the husband than the wife would really enjoy this. It's not a question of "Are you into cuckolding?" It's "Are you into cuckolds?"

The other reason I say it's too Japanese is because of the translation/writing. Nevermind the honorifics, the word choices are what you'd expect. Very bland and clinical. I had to edit the script to make it fappable. Also, there's no voice acting (yet?), but it's written like they're trying to save money on that. I've played enough Japanese games to notice when the women have a fraction of the dialog that the men do, that's when you know their trying to avoid paying them. Since female characters are usually the only ones with voice acting. And when VAs are paid on a per line basis, of course she's barely going to have anything to say other than moans. Last but not least, I hated how the writing avoids addressing the elephant in the room at every turn. We can all see it, Yuma is a shota. But it's written in a way that the protagonist simply refers to him as just "another guy" with his wife. He is NOT simply just another guy. He's a kid. Stop ignoring the taboo that's amplifying the fetish. Yet another reason I had to edit the script to make it sound less censored and more fappable.

Oh yeah, almost forgot. Lots of lazily recycled sex scenes, a useless pubic hair option and inconsistent proportions in the art. In one scene Yuma will have a small dick (as he should) while in another it'll be huge. Same goes for Hana's tits and ass.

One of my favourite games. It plays a lot like an Atelier Sakura VN, no animations few choices which may or may not impact the story, lots of reused images, but the dialogue is very good, the only downside is the MC wanks into everything apart from a tissue, he's literally like a 13 year old kid whose just worked out piss isn't the only liquid his cock is capable of leaking. It's NTRS based, which I always prefer to NTR though the story looks like it could go down an NTR route at some point, not really because wifey wants to be unfaithful but because MC wants her to cheat on him, at which point anything could happen. I hope the game, which is much more a VN than a game stays true to its Netorase roots though, they really are a cute couple and they deserve a happy ending.

4 stars,
Some will like netorase, some will like netorare.
This one is dancing between the two, where netorase is teasing with netorare.
Like every scene could've been much worse than it "supposedly" was. Yet again we don't know. I do hope the dev will make two routes, one for the netorase fans and one for the netorare fans!
When he does or if he does, this review would be 5 stars.
I am one for the netorare, but I can appreciate netorase too. It would be a cool idea if he just switched it? Like the netorase route she really didn't do any, but in netorare she did it all.
Either way, this game is great! Some really nice cuckoldry! Not a fan of shota though but, I pretend it's a normal guy that is a geek like none other and he just "looks" like a little shota to implement who he is

Solid NTR game, except for the shota , but if I have to choose I guess a shota can be better than a fat ugly 60-70 year old, but.. not by much. I prefer good looking stealers. More credibile, the old ugly fat guys is so 80s and dated.

Could be a really good game in couple of years, but as of right now I cant give it more than 3 stars. It has pretty much no content, very little art compared to insane amout of text. Def. interested to see how this game is going to turn out in the future.

If im honest, the only positives to this is the wife (Hana) is hot and the images aren't bad. The issues I have is this is hardly a game or a VN. It's more of an adult novel with a few sexy pictures. There is a lot of text and no animations. If you're looking for a Japanese style cuckhold story with no fapability, this is the "game" for you.

Great game so far. I just hope this doesn't evolve into full blown ntr in the future. So far, the game has stayed true to its netorase roots and I hope it continues to do so. Looking forward to where the dev takes the game.

The perfect netorase game, the pace it´s incredible and OMFG HANA the perfect caring, sexy, understanding wife and again sexy AF it was love at first sight, 10/10. congrats dev, a truly masterpiece. S2

Excellent game. It stayed somewhat realistic and wasn't full of many of the tropes that you often see. The body shapes and sizes were refreshing and exciting and the way the creator used teasing throughout the game can be considered a masterclass.

Of course it isn't everybody's cup of tea given the topic but if you are in any way interested in these kinks I highly recommend

Great netorase game, the developer teases the player as skillfully as Hana teases her husband. Fair warning: if you're looking for something purely netorase, this game definitely has signs of steering into full netorare in the future. We'll have to wait and see if that's the case.

Don't skip the dialog to get to the art, there just isn't enough of it to be fulfilling if that's your preferred method of consuming visual novels. Not the game for you if you want 100 variations of each CG and you'd rather just browse the gallery (which is a patreon feature).

This is really more of a text based game than a visual novel. Yes, there are images (and good ones IMO), but they really just act as background for the text.

You see that first screen shot of Hana lying in bed getting fucked in the first post of this thread? That is the entire sex scene, from foreplay to orgasm. Seriously, that one image. You click through about 30 different dialogs, and that image remains static in the background the entire time. Later, her nephew comes to visit, and again you get one static shot through an entire lengthy conversation. The entire game is like this. No sprites, no animations... just a series of background images that change every time a scene ends.

And for some reason (maybe it's a Japanese style thing, I'm not an expert) the images you do get aren't even full screen. In a Ren'Py game. In 2022.

The dev also decided not to use the default Ren'Py controls, I found I couldn't use the scroll wheel to go back. Doing that instead brings up the text history. First time I've seen that after playing hundreds of Ren'Py games. Truly baffling stuff.

But, it does fill that niche for 'People that like NTR, but just don't want to see it'. Because those scenes (and the plural is putting in a lot of work here) are hidden away as well. There isn't much of a story, and the husband (the one being cucked in all this) is more of a cardboard cutout than a character.

Unless this really looks like your thing, I'd pass on this game.
It's more of a vN than a VN.

Never thought just by omitting certain details, it could add so much to the arousal! Very good grasp of the genre and I thoroughly enjoyed reading to the lastest update. Would like more graphics and animations though

Been following the progression for a while. I really like the story being different from the normal ntr stuff. The story keeps getting better and better each update. The art knocks my socks off everytime i look at it. Looking forward for more updates.

For me at least (based on the version 0.6 public release), this has definitely been a refreshing take on netorase and definitely a good break from the typical ntr games present.

Having a more introverted shy and good-willed single student involved in the relationship is much appreciated, as opposed to the chad McBigDick Rapist. Having the wife take initiative in introducing the swinging with confidence (thinking of both the husband and the student but also testing their limits) is also particularly nice. It adds a bit more realism as opposed to her simply being brainwashed from repeated sex or rape. If it does come to some nympho brainwashing, I at least hope there will be a choice and freedom for the reader to go down whichever path they prefer (heck, ill prob read all routes considering how good the game is so far).

I mention these changes in typical ntr roles (and transition to more consensual netorase) as I feel there is not enough of these type of games. The stereotypical ntr story definitely has its place amongst eroge games (and can be very good), but at times becomes cliche and aggravating to a reader.

Not to mention, the art is also great. So good that at first glance, like many others, I had thought this was by a Japanese studio.

Regardless of what direction the creator has for the story, art and dynamics of the game, so far this version has definitely made me look forward to the final product.

It made me part with £12 to access it early, that alone should tell you something as to the quality of the game, especially when I rarely pledge to other creators (fallen eros is now my 4th creator out of all the ones that I am pledged to as of writing). Now alright it's a visual novel, but the pacing and writing is really good, the characters themselves shine out in personality in that they are all distinctive, at least the main 3 we encounter.

Through the writing combined with art and decent background sounds we are never too sure how much is serious and how much is teasing, and the confusion at to the motives of himself, his wife and the other guy is mirrored beautifully in making you, the player ALSO feel it.

I'm not ashamed to say I've found some inspiration in this novel, I might make one with Futa, what do they say? Imitation is the most sincere form of flattery?

This VN is absolute gold for those who love Netorare/Netorase. Now if you haven’t played this before then you might be wondering if I made a mistake by listing both, but, as of V0.9.1, I believe this VN can be both based on how you choose to interpret the events that occur during the story.


Now I’ll move onto the art style, and, I gotta say, it’s amazing! The details and work put into the art elevates every aspect of this VN and makes it stand out among all the other VNs out there.

Unfortunately, the VN suffers slightly from grammar issues, however, they are relatively minor and you’ll likely easily mentally correct the grammar issues as you read.

Overall, I think this is one of the best NTR/Netorase VNs out there and has the potential to keep on getting better as the story develops. It’s definitely an absolute must-try for all NTR lovers out there, and even if you don’t usually like NTR, I’d say give it a try, maybe you’ll love this VN as well.

Though, I will warn you now, there is a lot of blue-balling involved in this VN and it leaves a lot to your imagination, at least, for now. So if you can’t handle that, then I would suggest waiting until the Hana POV is complete which will be done once Tatsuki’s POV is finished.

Really well written, great art, updated regularly.
If you're a fan of netorase, this game is for you.

Progression is believable and there's a really nice mix of not knowing if things are going well or about to get out of hand. Lightyears ahead of a lot of the stuff that gets thrown up here.

Fallen Eros is really doing great work. Looking forward to what comes next!

Normally I don't like NTR stories, they are character driven stories where I hate all the characters involved: the weak-bitch MC, the hypnotized-by-giant-cock girlfriend/wife, and the cruel arrogant new guy who frequently taunts the MC mid sex.

Indecent Wife Hana is (at least currently) an exception to that: Tatsuki while not really macho by any measure at least stands up for himself, with rude individuals as well as his wife, setting boundaries and pushing for what he wants out of this, most importantly is that this whole scenario is pleasurable for him. Hana seems to be a kind caring individual who loves the MC and enjoys satisfying his sexual needs, rather than just wanting new dick. Most importantly is Yuma who respects both Tatsuki and Hana and seems more grateful than anything.

All in all, it is an erotic story about three people who I don't want to throw off a cliff.

I love it. What I love most about this is how they leave you with that "what happen when the husband is not home?". What I always liked is when the wife knows that the husband likes "that" and plays with it, just like in this game, and another thing I love is when they leave what is happening "to your imagination" (referring to certain situations in the bathroom, for example), its very good. As I said art drives me crazy, I feel it as some kind of cartoonish style and I feel that it fits very well with the body of the woman, which I also love