Unity - Onhold - Indoctrination [v4 Tech Demo] [The Architect]

Good job on this so far.

I'm a fan of Goons Raid Her, and this brings me back to it, which I can only see as a compliment. The graphics are good, and so are the models for the female characters. Can't wait to see more of it.

Remember to use capital "i", when the characters refer to themselves. For example: "I am not so sure." instead of "i am not so sure."
Same goes for contractions, where you use apostrophes, for example "I am" contracted would be "I'm".

Tbh, this is way better than 99% of H-games out there!!! I really wish we could get more than just a short tech demo, 'cause this shi has insane potential – it could easily become the best Mass Effect-style H-game ever made if they expand on it properly
upd: if Tali is not for FemShep, than she is gonna be mine

Indoctrination V0.3 game review.

First thing I want to say is amazing job making this game. This game could not have been easy to make in this 3D environment with all the different models and ship layout of the Normandy. The main character moves through the world in real time. The passive animations where characters are standing there are not completely still. The steps feel like you are on a metal ship. Though was a bit janky to move around. Often felt like the game was forcing me to be almost perfectly aligned to access something like the computer at the start of the game.

First thing I recommend at the start of the game is a game menu. Allowing the player to choose to start a new game or immediately load a previous save. Was annoying to play the intro every time I booted up the game when I wanted to load a previous save.

Did like the text saying we are in the Milky Way galaxy and also all the little touches you added to the game. Like how the player can learn Asari live for nine hundred years on your data pad.

The instructions on how to click through dialogue and skip through conversations with holding Shift was much appreciated. Helps a lot with new playthroughs. Even the cheat options are a great little addition to the game. Allowing players to choose for themselves if they just want to watch the porn or want to play the game normally.

Also really did enjoy the little bit of combat this game did have. Like needing to shoot the little rats aboard the Normandy. Helps remind us this was based on an RPG game where you explore the galaxy and fight dangers.

Though did find the first hot scene with the MC and commander Shepard to be a bit weird. I mean, I thought armor was made of metal or at least a material very hard. Yet the player is able to play with her boobs as if she is just wearing a t-shirt. Would not be a problem if Shepard was in business casuals where it is just clothing. She is on her ship after all and not on a mission.

Did love the outfit for Liara from ME3. The white and streaks of blue really help show just how beautiful the armor is. Though do feel like her boobs are a bit on the small side. Thought this took place after ME2 so Liara really grew a big pair of blue milkers. This also applies to her sex scene where I was a bit disappointed by how small her breasts are.

Though must give credit for a porn game, the scenarios do feel slightly believable. How Liara would need to infiltrate Omega to spy on Aria and being a dancer is one way to do it. Or how EDI is trying to surprise Jeff with her more slutty behavior and needs someone else to alter her core.

Back to gameplay, really like the intelligence gathering the player does. Similar to the sex scenes, the parts where the player is finding information about the other crew members all feel believable. As if this information would be available to the public and just take a bit of detective skills to put the pieces together.

Did love the renegade option to slap Liara’s ass. That was my favorite moment in the game.

Did love the part where if you choose to install Tali’s A.I. hacking module and get a blowjob with EDI, her eye color changes to pink. That was a really nice touch.

5/5 For potential. The game looks good but some of the mechanics can be improved. The speed up is kind of weird it would be better if the character would just run instead, then there is the movement it kind of sucks but it's manageable can be improved. I love the gathering information aspect of the game, it forces you to actually look around and read what it says making it more fun and engaging (I hate them games with insta-unlock buttons and stuff), and I also love the choices matter aspect it gives depth to the game. I hope this game finishes (unlike other games that are still incomplete after 5 years+) and rooting for it.

Excellent game with very good mechanics, also integrating the mechanics of the game from which it takes inspiration, the little plot that I could see in the demo left me intrigued and with a lot of pleasure, it really promises too much and I think it can be a complete success, if the plot develops as it is going it will be a success, the minigames and hacks are super good, it deserves the 5 stars without a doubt