Ren'Py - Innocence or Money [S2 E2] [MarcialART]

Review for version 0.3

Ok, so played through both the "Innocence" and the "Money" path of the game. The game is actually decent. There is some grind, but not too much.

I have 2 main cons about the game:

The first con, for me at least, is that the "Innocence" path have zero adult content. If you don't have any content, then you should choose a different direction for your game. Make it a visual novel that's linear or if you want to have two paths, make content for both.

The second con is in the "Money" path. It seems that every time someone comes within 3 feet of the MC, she starts moaning. It doesn't matter who it is. Guy blackmailing her starts touching her leg, she moans, old dude grabbing her ass, she moans and always she wants them to continue. At the same time, she is saying that she loves her BF and wants to stay true to him.
I would have liked, if she had some resistance towards the men or showed some kind of discomfort.

That being said, the MC is hot and there is definately potential here. I like that the camera-angles are different from day to day even though you are doing the same thing. The renders and animations are great and the in-game walkthrough is great.
I hope this helps

As of now I can only rate this 3 stars

Review for season 2 ep 1

Yeah, its the same as before. There really only is one route here, if you are looking for adult content. The game is still hot, if you wanna be a slut tho. The dev has put some different camera angles in the game, which is nice from a technical level, but becomes annoying. I maintain, that the game is average, so still 3 stars from me.

Version 0.0.1 so very early.

With 3 stars I'm giving it the benefit of the doubt.

The renders are average, which is good enough.

There are a few cons, hopefully some will be ironed out in the future:
- Dialogue is quite poor
- The game is already starting to be a grind (each day clicking for eating and showering becomes boring fast).
- The story is at the moment a bit flat. There is no immersion, it's just a simple vehicle to show some pictures. This used to be ok, but nowadays the bar is higher as there are quite few games that do that a lot better.

It feels like a game from someone who likes to render the graphics, but didn't think enough about the game mechanics and the story- telling and that's where it needs work to become anything more than average.

Edit for 0.0.4 - Rating changed from 4 to 5 stars. Spelling and grammar has improved noticeably as has the quality of the dialogue/scenarios/buildup. First major scenes live up to expectations. Hygiene and food variables are still completely unnecessary extra clicking every day.

Pros
- Good, solid corruption premise
- Very hot female MC
- Corruption scenarios are promising

Cons
- Spelling/Grammar is atrocious
- Dialogue is not good

One comment - this is a great start, but why include hygiene and food as part of the sandbox experience? Seems entirely unnecessary and very obnoxious. Hate when games add variables in just to fluff up content.

Models looks really hot.
I'd like to see some reverse NTR with the little sister and the boyfriend.
I like the progression system
The game looks promising. Let's see how fast is the dev
I hope the updates will not take too long.

I really liked this game, the slow corruption, the very beautiful girl with a very nice body, I liked it very much.I really liked the story, the developer made a good effort to get a good story with a female protagonist,the story is about a beautiful young girl who works to meet her needs for a good life, will do it in an honest way or will be tempted by easy money.
we will decide this with our choices.

My reviews getting often a bit too long thats why i try to keep it as simple as possible:

Pros:
+ fem protag
+ corruption
+ girl has tits
+ cute face (very close to doll-like but still feminine)
+ nice haircut
+ nice kinks
+ great and easy navigation
+ very great written intro and explanations!
+ good, very clear hud
+logical urgencies
+good english


Cons:
- could maybe look a little bit more mature
- lacks a bit of the lower body department (thighs, hips, ass)

(thats already it with the cons. pretty subjective ones but for me important sorry)

looks promising and unlike many other games it really has some good, creative introduction , a cery clear hud and is smooth to navigate. great job on that!

will keep an eye on it!