The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.0.1A...
Originally Reviewed on 12/17/2017
Well, this was definitely a different sort of experience playing the introduction, to this Visual Novel/Game...
The visuals were definitely good, not realistic, but did fit the humorous theme of this VN... There are some semi-animated scenes that looked hilarious... Such as when two of the roommates started to fight, I was laughing up a storm... Then when you get knocked down by the other roommate and she began uncontrollably grinding on you, albeit it was so totally far fetched, but hilarious at the same time... The backdrops are alright... I wish it was easier to save game, as I couldn't tell how to do it, since this VN uses the Unity Engine... Now, when the intro was done, there was a save button... But it looks like it only has one save slot, so I wish that it had multiple save slots rather than just the one, especially for use during play throughs...
The script had a few flaws in the front intro text that made it seem like it was missing something, perhaps some sentences... Not sure if that was due to poor translation/interpretation or just needs some revisiting... There were a few spelling and grammar errors as well as some broken English through out the script... Over all I could make out what was being implied, even when it was hard to read... The characters are hilarious with different personalities, some over the top, but that just added to the humor... The women, of the house the protagonist is staying at, all seem to be sex starved, and are funny when reading their dialogue and monologue... It should make for a hilarious story, which I assume is the goal of the plot... I did enjoy the humor a lot...
Over all it has some scripting issues to work out, but does look promising... It is definitely a lot more creative then other erotic VN's I've read, being filled with farcical characters, and having lots of funny dialogue/monologue... It is in early stages of development, so there isn't much content at the moment... But I look forward to seeing how this one pans out further down the road into it's development...
Originally Reviewed on 12/17/2017
Well, this was definitely a different sort of experience playing the introduction, to this Visual Novel/Game...
The visuals were definitely good, not realistic, but did fit the humorous theme of this VN... There are some semi-animated scenes that looked hilarious... Such as when two of the roommates started to fight, I was laughing up a storm... Then when you get knocked down by the other roommate and she began uncontrollably grinding on you, albeit it was so totally far fetched, but hilarious at the same time... The backdrops are alright... I wish it was easier to save game, as I couldn't tell how to do it, since this VN uses the Unity Engine... Now, when the intro was done, there was a save button... But it looks like it only has one save slot, so I wish that it had multiple save slots rather than just the one, especially for use during play throughs...
The script had a few flaws in the front intro text that made it seem like it was missing something, perhaps some sentences... Not sure if that was due to poor translation/interpretation or just needs some revisiting... There were a few spelling and grammar errors as well as some broken English through out the script... Over all I could make out what was being implied, even when it was hard to read... The characters are hilarious with different personalities, some over the top, but that just added to the humor... The women, of the house the protagonist is staying at, all seem to be sex starved, and are funny when reading their dialogue and monologue... It should make for a hilarious story, which I assume is the goal of the plot... I did enjoy the humor a lot...
Over all it has some scripting issues to work out, but does look promising... It is definitely a lot more creative then other erotic VN's I've read, being filled with farcical characters, and having lots of funny dialogue/monologue... It is in early stages of development, so there isn't much content at the moment... But I look forward to seeing how this one pans out further down the road into it's development...