VN - Ren'Py - Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

as of 0.7
this game is so underrated.
the characters are beautiful and have great personalities.
the story is narrated properly in spite of all the time jumps, it flows naturally.
renders are all very well crafted, a lot of effort goes into them by the likes of it.
animations are top tier, not to overly complicated but always effective.
one thing i think needs to be praised:
the humour, i genuinely laughed out loud with various scenes in this game. something i can say only one or two other games.
one thing i think deserves criticism:
so much unnecessary drama. the game is self aware of this, yet there’s so much of it that doesn’t play any part and i believe most players know exactly what’s happening and that the mc is just overreacting and jumping to conclusions. it gets a bit tedious.

10/10 layla best girl

massive amount of dialogue vs sexual action, pretty dry dialogue at that with very little action. The graphics are ok and the character designs are ok but could use more curves. Over all the engine is ok and I haven't seen any bugs are far as that goes.

Love this game ! Great story line and superb character specification.
only think that bother me that i have been forced to go for a single character i i don't even care or fell important. That character we purposed in our childhood(In the game .

This game is simply fantastic! I've played a few VN's in my time, and never have i ever come across one such as this. At fist glance this game does not look like anything special, but after the first few minutes in the game you understand why this game stands out. The characters in this game are so real and well written. They are uniqe, have their own voice, thoughts and motivations. The writing in this game is just on another level compared to other games on this site. They are realistic, and sweet, and flawed and funny. They feel like actual people.

The renders and animation are good, but nothing special. The funny thing is, that does not matter at all when the charecters and story come alive through the writing. It is soo rare to find a good writer in these types of games, so we sould really appreciate one when she comes along.

The game has also got some meat on it, you wont finish in 20 min, and you will not feel the need to skip through dialoge. The choices in the game matter alot, and there a lot of choices. I was very conflicted while making a few of them, and hastily scrolled back when i saw the heartbreaking consequences.

The creator is professional, keeps a thight schedule and interacts with the fans. Something that is also kinda rare in games on this site. I cannot express enough how deighted is was at finding this diamond in the rough. Thank you Nyx!

Impressive all around, so far. As of version 0.6a, this story has my full attention. Intertwined is a perfect name to describer the inter woven story lines. I really look forward to the continuation!!

What I like
The story
Great character backgrounds and arcs
Strong emotion, the feel of the bonds are wonderfully well done
The women are gorgeous

Needs some work
Model lighting/color. While the women and overall models are great. The skin coloring seems off on some. Also I find that some look a little plastically.
Maybe some more close up skin detail/blemish to make them more realistic.

Overall great looking VN so far and only very minor nits to pick. Would be about a 4.5 overall for some room to improve.

Intertwined has some of the most beautiful women I have ever seen in a game. There's an intangible x-factor that the author has tapped into that exceeds what should be possible in this two-dimensional medium. Lurking around each corner of this game is a female love interest that is even sexier than the last.

The story, on the other hand, has the sort of high drama that wraps itself around you and pulls you in, not allowing for a breath along the way. One cannot be disconnected from a narrative that wrenches your heart with every twist and turn to this degree. Intertwined is not a mindless fap; it is a conduit for our deepest romantic insecurities.

And the method of storytelling is smooth, despite being nonlinear. We're in the present, then we're in the past, then back to present, then further back in the past again...and yet it's seamless enough to maintain the narrative flow.

If you are looking for a game to simulate acute feelings of love, loss, and everything in between, this is the one. If I had one criticism, it's that the drama can reach absurd levels at times...to the point where you'll have to look away from your screen and take a breather because of the feels. But I would also argue that achieving such emotional attachment in a short amount of time is a sign of a meticulously successful venture.

And did I mention the crazy hot babes? 5/5 would recommend

Very good story, dramatic and romantic, focussed on actual human relationships, with many girls. The characters are interesting, and the web of relationships between them is fun to discover.

Good design and renders, decent models (even though some of them aren't so original). The only imperfection is primitive sex animations, but that doesn't matter much.

I recommend this to every fan of rich, dramatic and immersive stories.

[0.6]

1) great story, 2) great characters 3) Great game.
Highly recommended. I ended up completely hooked on the story and I only regret not having played it before.
My congratulations to the author and I look forward to the next chapter.

Intertwined is a surprise for me. Read the synopsis and looked at some reviews – everything seemed to not be for me. The cookie-cutter premise, choosing paths and cheating. I've played games like that, and it led to minimal content if you didn't want to replay the exact same scenes again and again.

Yet here we are. Five stars. Replaying back-to-back.

What is it that makes Intertwined special? For me it's the characters. The MC is one of the best written ones here. His model is also ok, despite the stupid profile (is it the underbite or what, but his lower face looks just dumb from the side). But the real stars here are the girls. They have so much personality, so much fun with the MC, and seeing their thoughts on screen also helps falling for them.

The models & renders are just gorgeous. In many games there's maybe 1-2 super hot girls, yet here you are spoiled with choice. What is especially great in the steamy scenes is the lead up, touching and passion. You can see the enjoyment. Just wish there was more text to go along with the scenes. The animations are, as usual, meh.

Intertwined is also special in that you won't be chained immediately to a single girl. Oh no. You have a chance to sleep with almost all of them and create a glorious, stupid, sexy mess of secrets while not feeling like the worst.

Intertwined was so special to me, that I had to support the dev. Up there with the greatest and only my second 5-star rating.

Writing & story 5.0 - great. The jokes land, the feelings are felt. The dialogue feels natural and everyone acts like they should. The story mainly seems to be the mess we create, and I'm all for that. There could be more descriptive writing in the sex scenes – you cannot show everything.

Renders & Models 4.0 - good. The most beautiful characters, somewhat brought down in some scenes by the strange skin-tone and stupid side profile of the MC. The animations do not add anything much, but the posing is A-class in them. The characters actually touch each other. SHOCKER.

[Review for v0.6]

To make a long story short a good game with well written story and decent renders. So after the shortest way of evaluating this game let's take a closer look


I'd like to start talking about the story first since I think it's the best side in this game, which is weird considering this is an adult game where how it looks generally matters more than what it actually tells. Still the story itself isn't the most original story it's a teenage drama but the narrative is the aspect that levitates the story. Characters are also not just bumheads with dicks (not including Zach lol) or fuckdolls without souls, every individual have their own struggles and traumas which are mostly told or at least teased like Erynn's situation. We don't know what exactly she's going through but we've seen that something is off
I really loved that narrative has that big flashback sequincelife with Andres right before reunion with your mom, it wasn't really necessary but it is a good addition and it changes the rhythm in a good way. Not something new yet again but works just fine. But there are a lot of other flashbacks which keep the narrative quite active and dynamic.
Also the decisions matter. I mean, not really surprising but just wanted to mention it's just fine.


Renders are not the sharpest, cleanest ones but they're quite good. Character designs do vary which is great so you're not stuck with same girls with different names. Animations are decent but improving. The thing is that some relationships do take their time to progress so sad to not see some of the characters in action but instead of unpleasant rushing in the story i'd still preder eagerly waiting for the upcoming updates just as I am doing right now.

I'd probably give it a 4.5 but since there is no such option I say it's a good 4 out of 5

Keep up the great work

Wow, wow, wow. I came into this game with high expectations and they were still easily exceeded. Honestly this is one of the very best games I've had the pleasure of playing.

For starters the writing is excellent, you start to care for the characters very quickly and choosing a favorite is next to impossible. There's funny moments and more serious ones too, all are handled very well.

The renders and character designs are excellent whereas the animations aren't but they're OK. It's a minor issue when the game excels in every other area.

What also surprised me was how much content the game has, it's only around nine months since the first release and it already has more than most games. When you consider the quality of the content too that's seriously impressive, the dev deserves massive praise.

Honestly this game is awesome and the creator deserves massive success. I eagerly anticipate the future updates.

Amazing game! Story wise it's super addicting and well written. Full of twists and turns. Keep the updates coming! (Pun intented)

Never a game lived up so much to its name. It really is interwined!

5 stars

Very great storytelling and renders! Will be following this one with every update. Very interested in how several storylines will unfold with several characters. RARE when I am not tempted to skip a ton of dialogue constantly. Not sure if it's the interesting characters or if it is the lack of bs dialogue but became very invested.

A phenomenal game thus far, both in graphics and storyline. Just discovered it a few days ago, and I'm almost caught up to the current point, and have already been feeling pangs of disappointment over knowing I'm going to have to wait for future updates. But I can't praise it enough for both it's quality of sotrytelling and quantity of content. An absolute 5-star must play....I'm even thinking that it might just be taking the top spot on my list.....Well done

For myself, the best game I have played.

I like the fact that it is story based and has nothing to do with Incest or a harem.
The story itself is very well written, the characters and the dialogues feel very natural.
and the drama adds even more believability.

"For life or relationships, there is no walkthrough".
" OutOfAshes"

Only one thing remains to be said

Fantastic work Nyx keep it up

Purely going by the story, this is easily in the top 10 games on the site. The characters are believable and interesting if the situations and coincidences are bit over-the-top. It does feel like a lot of the female interest is unearned, but hey, it's the genre.

The art is also fantastic. The girls are gorgeous and the renders are great.

I don't care for the point system though. All it does is force people to use walkthroughs and mods. It's just an annoyance. Better to remove all choices which don't branch and probably to pare those down a bit too as it's a lot more convoluted than it needs to be. It is manageable with a walkthrough or mod though and I've certainly seen far worse.

What an amazing story with everything it needs to put a spell over me! There's a bearable protagonist for a change, character development and some branching, too. I was just catching up on the last episode (v0.6a) and again, it felt so real that I simply forgot about playing a porn game.

Review after v0.6a

I admit that when i started this game i was expecting another typical "guy turns 18 and suddenly all women want to fuck him" kinda deal and... turns out i was right. It's exactly like that! But at the same time, it's also a lot better than what i expected.

pros
- The girls and women are stunningly beautiful
- The writing is excellent
- The storyline, although generic at times, keeps you entertained and wanting to know more
- A lot of content! I can't believe how much it is for just a 0.6 version.
- There's no grind or unnecessary chores to advance a storyline
- It has many choices that actually make a difference depending on what you choose

So, after all that someone would ask "why the 4 stars then?"
This is why...

cons
- You're playing as the guy and that means you're not supposed to know what the girls are thinking. Here though, the dev thought it was a good idea to insert their pov's as well, which is a huge turn-off. It's different to have a scene with just the girls where they can talk about MC or whatever, but when you have a scene with MC and a girl and you show us what MC is thinking and what the girl is thinking, it takes all the mystery and fun away. Not that it would make a big difference since all the girls are thinking so far is "omg, he's so cute, i really like him, etc".
- The transition between scenes sometimes feels rushed, like it's missing an in-between scene. e.g. it's morning and MC agrees on a date at night and next render is him at the door ready for his date...
- Zach is conventionally attractive, yet not a single girl is into him and they all want MC. That's a bit unrealistic. They must add a girl that wants Zach or at least finds him worth a fuck.
- Also, there're not enough Zach/MC scenes. They're supposed to be buddies, but they had like 4 scenes so far. All MC does all day revolves around girls.
- No music. I don't really mind that much but when you mention that MC plays guitar, it's a bit ironic to not have any sound
- Because of all the girls, you need walkthrough if you want to know every outcome
- MC was best friends with Erynn since kids but somehow he had no idea who Alexis was? She was his first kiss if i'm not mistaken.
- The other guys are either bullies or molesters
- - Lastly, unnecessary upcoming incest. I have a feeling that my previous comment is just a helping step for the son to comfort him mother and inevitably develop a more intimate relationship, but i hope i'm wrong. This game has already lots of girls and milfs, it doesn't need incest! MC doesn't have to also want to fuck his mother just because other games include that. Please dev, no incest!

Overall, this game is more a 3.5 than 4.5, that's why the 4 stars. It's a mess, but I really enjoy it, despite the many flaws i personally see and i honestly recommend it for anyone to download and play it. You won't regret it.

p.s. i keep playing all routes and discover new things, so i will edit my review frequently after updates or if i forgot to mention something.

There are many interesting characters in this game. I really do want to see more of them in the next chapters. And please add milf & mom routes, please? They are really hotter than the other girls combine lol

Very captivating storytelling. Interesting characters, good plot with a lot of drama. A lot of choices also.

One of the best I've played so far. This remaining text is for the purpose of extending this review to fit the 200 characters minimum - kek.