VN - Ren'Py - Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

It's in really early stages but it was amazing, an enjoyable plot, variety of character with different personalities, nice models, although is something linear is a really well done novel. I hope to see more of it, I think that in a year or two it will be one of the best games in this site.

Liked the characters, liked the plot, and liked the girls. A couple of things were excpectable, but nevertheless enjoyable. Looking forward to more updates. Keep going the good work. Layla is one of the cutest characters ever, hope 0-6 incluedes more of her.

Review at V0.5.5

This game is one of my mistakes in judging at first glance.
The first time I started this game, I dropped it before getting off the plane in the game. because I thought this game just was one of those games that if you even open the refrigerator or wardrobe, a girl will fall out of it and try to have sex with MC !!! . And this is not a game I want to play. but this judgment was wrong.
The second time .I was bored and had no other work, I did not have another game on the computer. So I played with the lowest expectation of a game .then OMG !!!.

First of all, this game does not need sex scenes to convince the player to continue the game. So far, the beautiful, complex and strong storyline of the game is enough for this purpose. The game has beautiful and deep characters and keeps players eager to know about the game's characters. The characterization of the characters, their connections and their past are well done. The game's storyline is such that its continuation cannot be guessed, we may be surprised at any moment. In general, all the efforts to make this game have reached a good result, which I hope will continue in the future.
I do not want to reveal anything about the game. So I suggest you just play and enjoy it.

thanks for this game. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next updates.

Fantastic renders and animation, fun game design if relatively simple. There's no real way to get off path though more branching might be nice. Main character looks 25 which is whatever but still it works.

One of the best written games I have ever played. The story is awesome. The characters are complex. Sometimes mysterious, sometimes funny, sometimes deep. And the character development during the story is very good. Combined with detailed and very good visuals. The animations could be better but it doesn't really affect the game.
Play it! You won’t be disappointed.
Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work.

Really liked this one (0.5.5.) Fun, quirky dialogue without errors, an eye for detail, nothing rushed. Interesting characters, enough foreshadowing to create some mystery, but not too much. Great pacing and a good use of flashbacks.

Great renders, good looking models. Looking forward to what comes next!

Excellent story and character development! I really feel for all of these folks in the story. Writing is wonderful, just enough humor to make it fun without trying to turn it into a yuck-fest. I love that it's not wall-to-wall boinking, which lends a little more realism to the story. My only bone to pick is that the story is SO deep with so many branches that my patience will be tested waiting for the next chapters. All in all, and 5-star effort. Bravo!

Well, well, well! This is quite the game you have here my friend! I'll admit that when I saw the girls I said : I can't miss on trying this one out! Consider me very impress! I played it and not only did I liked the girls, which was obvious to happen, but the story ! Damn, man! I don't know how to put this, but for me it just feels incredible! I don't want to give any spoiler, so I'll just say in case anyone reads this comment before playing : just play it! I personally enjoyed every bit of it! It just gets better and better! Really strong and good work done here! Good job! Can't wait for the rest of it!

What to say about this VN

What i like so far :

-) The story is intriguing and interesting
-) The characters are great
-) I like the detail, one of them when the MC picking up Erynn in front of her campus, i like that its crowded and not just an empty space.
-) The scenery is also great

Have to say tho the animation is not the smoothest here but to me that is the only minor issue about this VN.

100% HAVE TO CHECK THIS OUT!!

holy shit this story. no the game itself is so well made it looks so great. i can't wait for the next updates keep going like this. the ending of v0.5 was hard seeing two best friends like that. the hole story is just it keeps my want to know more about it.

[As of v0.6]

The Good:
- Amazing Girls
- Dialogues are fun
- Cute romance moments
- FANTASIC STORY (Dev named this game right)


The Bad:
- GOD awful Animation
- Sex scenes too short


Conclusion:
A game which story is more important that solely sex.
A MUST try.
4/5.

Please work on dem animations, it would have been a 5.

Very Good Game. Interesting Story. Graphics are good too. One of my favourite games. Needs to be updated soon can't wait anymore. Please give more updates. Hope story would be good to in the future. And to be honest I don't like that Ethan character so please don't let him be ex-boyfriend or have any affair in the past with Alexis or Erynn . Thank you so much for this game. Keep it on.

It's overall a good game quite pleasant.

Good but not great graphics, poor animations but there is some that's already a good point ahaha.

Story is interesting. A little problem with pacing because there is an another story in the story (no spoiler). So when things are going well, all stop and you play a new game sort of... I was displeased even if this story was still interesting.

Big problem for the choices.. Generally they are Good answer/bad answer type and not really a choice. Like someone said before here in the review, they need more impact in the story if you need to have choices at all btw... I didn't tell, there is no impact but as i have played, i have counted 2. One of which is quite painfull cause you have to choose between 2 girls with no middle ground ok i was greedy, all games don't have to be harem or fuck all around type. Reality can be good too .

About reality, i dislike a lot the fact that the main character is a chick magnet who don't deserve anything. They fall like flies ( not sure if there is any idiome like this in english) and the MC doesn't earn the girls. There is sometimes, the MC is charismatic and tease/flirt with them but generally the girl is attracted to him like flies with poop. Hum.... ok i have something for the flies today....

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So that's it a good game, but not a top notch one. Hey that's still a good job from the author nonetheless

PS/Edit: BTW the MC is gorgeous! No gay but wow at least i can understand why the girls are falling for him. For once is nice to have as much work on the MC as for the girls.

It is an excellent game, that has a lot of goos characters that you can feel connected with. It is a game tha doesn't need to be full of sex scenes to connect you to the game. Definetely one of my favorites

I got captivated, I discovered it yesterday and I went through the five chapters without a break. It's really like watching a good serie,. For me that's really what I'm looking for, an immersive game where you take a liking to the characters and sometimes you don't even think about sex anymore.

And the characters change clothes every day, that's a big advantage over some of the most known games.

I don't know if you understood what i mean, I never used skip button in this game. And It's a good way to work on my English, but unfortunately I can't talk to my teacher about it. Cause I live in the real life haha

Easily now, one of my favorites. Came for the fap and stayed for the story as they say. I was extremely hooked as of v0.5, and honestly upset when the update was over. Will be watching for updates on this in the near future.

This is a good VN
PROS
Renders are clean
Characters have depth
Ladies are sexy
CONS
Choices need to have fire power
Overall
So far this is a good VN. Story has purpose, and the characters aren't one dimensional. As mentioned, the choices need to have meaning. The MC is supposedly carrying a grudge and when given the opportunity to express his anger, frustration, or betrayal, it goes no where when you chose to do so. I do however like this VN. I even recommend giving this one a play through. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to where things go with the next update.

Dude, finished this game so soon and i wish to have a time machine to travel to future and play this game in this final version, is amazing! Great work!
I'm so amazed with all characters, all have emotions and back historys, and the mc is badass af, i really like this game, i wish success for the creator

Its very rare for me to feel this frustrated when a chapter (update) ends. It was a great cliffhanger. I just started this yesterday and ate it up. I am surprised how deep I got into it. I had such a turn around on my opinion of Lexi and Erryn so quickly, That is the Dev doing their job here. I am going to be impatiently waiting for the next update, Renders are very good overall. Writing is solid. I usually give something criticism, but I dont have much. Thanks for a very good story!

In short: this is a pretty decent, but very un-unique game.

The game looks good. Most renders have lots of detail. Faces, hair and eyes look realistic. English is flawless and the conversations are often believable... but also kinda boring.

And that's exactly what started to annoy me after a while. Even though everything looks quite good, there is not one aspect in this game that makes it original from other games.

You have litterally seen it all before: standard school setting, hot single mom, hot single neighbor with hot daughter that both look the same age, hot teacher, hot principal, standard goofy best friend that strikes out on all the girls while they all magically fall in love with you, random hot stranger that 'accidentally' turns out to work at your new favourite bar, etc.

I found that the endless string of clichés and 'perfect' looking models started to get boring after a while. But if you don't care about that this is a pretty good game with beautiful renders.

One last thing: the animations are... there. At the start of the game they're pretty bad but they get better with each update. So that's promising for the future.