Ren'Py - Invulnerable [v1.03] [SwagFire Games]

GOOD i liked it very much, I hope you work on the sex scene art so that it looks more detailed and better, but overall it looks very good, I like that you mixed allot of fetishes together aswell. keep it up

Game version: [v1.02a]

Only played this because of the scat tag, because beggars can't be choosers when it comes to scat in a "normal" game instead of the 50th femdom RPGM game. It's just one super short scene and it's... alright. Kind of like the whole game: it's alright I guess. The art varies between okay-ish and pretty good, though I have the sneaking suspicion the game is missing an "ai cg" tag because sometimes the characters will suddenly look weirdly different. Also a bunch of the animations are either buggy or lazy because you'll suddenly have three hands, grabbing both of a chick's tits and jerking off at the same time.

Surprisingly good audio design. One of the first things I noticed was the ambient sound at night in your house and I was like "why don't more games do that?" Lots of music and constant sound effects, it's a very audio rich game that isn't just looping the same DRM-free music like most VNs.

The writing is surprisingly not terrible, pretty good even and more than you would expect in a game of this sort, I was actually reading dialogue instead of skipping to the next sex scene. The main problem with this game is its "sandbox" structure and how a lot of the scenes get arbitrarily cut off because "that's enough content for day 5, come back in like two or three days and get drip fed a bit more." It's just handled in such a jarringly bad way that the first time it happened I thought the game was bugged.

Like, MC will have a spicy scene with his mom and at the end she's like "follow me and fuck me!" and he's like "finally, time to fuck mom!!!!11" and then the scene just fucking cuts to black and ends and the quest log will be like "wait a few days." And this isn't a single occurrence, this type of shit, where a scene implies it is immediately continuing with something but then just ends, constantly happens in the game. It feels like whoever wrote the script and whoever designed the systems were different people and none of them knew how to correctly pound the square writing into the circle sandbox.

A bunch of the sex scenes are terribly underwritten and basically just "watch the animation and maybe she'll cycle through saying "uhhh" and "ahhh" until you click the CUM button." Especially the two "main quest" chicks for some reason have the worst written scenes in the game, I guess because their content was turned into some half-assed trainer system with menus and you having to buy stupid items in two (2!) different shops to give them to progress because what this game needed was more arbitrary, badly implemented systems.

The game has some decently written, attractive LIs and some non-cringy maledom content (though I personally hate both mind control and pet play, so that's minus two LIs because that's all they do for some reason), I just hate how it's structured in a way where you can never concentrate on anything because the content is doled out in little snippets and a lot of the sex scenes are really boring and basically just "fuck you, we made an animation, isn't that enough?"

Still, there are some scenes worth seeing in here and I appreciate the deviations from vanilla content, there's some foot fetish stuff (mom's footjob was one of the better scenes and random stuff like perving on Eve's socks at school was a fun little tidbit), the prospect of sissyfying your wimp friend at school, the aforementioned scat scene where you make the old Latina maid at school shit herself in front of you to humiliate her. The mention of smells in the writing at all is something I guess I have to highlight because it is sadly so rare. There's clearly at least one competent pervert writing for this, I just don't get why he decided to phone in half of the scenes.

so badly done everything, so many characters are just puppets for fucking, I thought that all of us (who installed this shit) love the original perosnage for what they turned out in the comic book or adaptation, but here just nothing in common. Everything is bad, art style, plots, characters, writing, technicality, usability. Just garbage, don't waste your time on this, neither to play it nor to finish it to any end.

The gameplay is slow and repetitive, with limited variety or meaningful choices. However, the UI and art style are decent, showing some promise. With more work on pacing and content, it could improve a lot.


Overall: Needs improvement.
Rating: 6/10

This is a parody game where, based on the writing, every single Invincible character has been lobotomized before story start. The game gives you nothing to do except bang your head against mind-numbing "combat" for ten minutes, read the two arbitrarily decided scenes you're allowed that game day, then forward the time. The artwork, with its ghoulish version of the show's style, actively made my dick shrivel up during the sex scenes, with the only almost-exception being the blatantly traced Something Unlimited images.
You would have a better time just using your own imagination.

Game is fine, not great but also not bad. The art looks good and the writing is okay. However, in my opinion the fighting part/training to get exp is a bit too annoying/grindy for such a linear corruption game. Hopefully the developer adds a bit more choice into the order you can choose to corrupt some of the girls in the future and makes the exp grind less.

still in early dev but the game is quite good, too few scene for now but most of characters are here, looking for next updates
need to improve the sandbox world
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I noticed a wave of recent low reviews and felt compelled to right this injustice.
Is this the best game ever? No. But is it nearly as bad as some recent reviews suggest? Also no.

I'd like to address some recent review comments here with my own experiences.
1. Yes, there’s clicking through liner storylines, but it’s no different from other games in the genre. You progress through small story chunks and unlock content. It’s standard fare, with minimal grind.
2. A recent review compares art from this game to a $750K-per-episode TV production. Yes, the art is worse if you want to make that comparison. But...why?
3. Not all characters have content yet, but this is a relatively new game that’s making steady progress. With time, it will likely expand to a comparable level.
4. The Writing is not the best, but also not the worst. It’s a porn game, and it gets the job done with no major grammatical issues.
Overall, it’s a decent game with the usual growing pains of a new sandbox title. Give it a shot.

Review v0.7a
The game is mediocre at best.
Anything about it is "okey".
The art looks worse than from the original show.
The story as "alternative universe" had the right idea, but not the right execution.
Not enough built up and sandbox exploration.
Animated scenes are short and have not very appealing.
The only thing that makes the game somehow interesting is that it's a parody to a popular show.

It has the shell of a game that could be ok. But the way it comes together is terrible.
It's a bit of everything, just not done right.

You know i actually like a few of the females from this show, but after playing this i doubt i still do. It just ruins it.

And what's with the focus on side characters if not milking? Don't tell me people play this to have a good time with aquatica girl, or chinese copy poison ivy.

I like sandboxes done well. But this game is why people hate sandboxes. Just wasting your time doing linear things in a sandbox setting.

Worst of all, skipping is broken. Only works sometimes.

I keep seeing positive ratings on this and picking it up again, thinking I must be missing something. But no, not really. As of today (0.7a) this is still amateurish, shallow, and clumsy. The writing and characterization is simplistic, the graphics are forgettable, the mechanics are barely functional, and the sex scenes have all the eroticism of a third-grader on a playground making a circle with one thumb and finger and sticking his other finger through it while he leers at you.

Maybe it will get somewhere worthwhile eventually, but for now, not worth your time.

on paper this game looks decent, but it does not really play all that well.
the character art is only average and the gameplay is just slow click nonsense, the story lacks focus and there are way to many characters for such an early stage
And it also have payed scenes and adds on your screen. I am never going near this one again

The developer introduces new characters and you don't care about them. There's few sex scenes and they are too easily animated. Everything is over repetitive.

Even if it's a parody, it's far from the Invincible story. It's truely one of the poorest dugeon game I have ever played. Don't waste your time with this.

I think this game is pretty good. I love the concept, and much of the artwork is very good - particularly Deborah, Eve and the chick that works at the burger place. I hope more time is devoted to Deborah in particular going forward.

There were a few issues I ran into like:

• the quest help page disappearing after a couple seconds of bringing it up (although that seemed to get better)
• buttons or labels that didn't disappear when they should have
• a few grammar errors, or just awkward dialog

It was fairly repetitive, but I expect that from this type of game. I think my biggest issue was that, even with the quest help screen, it was hard to tell what to do to progress the story as I got further in.
Was I ever supposed to be able to fight that warrior woman to take over the league?

This game has potential, however I still feel like the dev made some poor choices with the design of this game.

There are too many characters, and 1/2 of them are plain and uninteresting (like why did he add the tv-series version of Amber). And for some reason the updates bring little content across all characters at once instead of focusing on 1 or 2 characters per update which makes this game painful to play between updates. The dev also advertises his Patreon in game with logos inside locations which is very immersion breaking and ugly.

The art is pretty good, the writing is not great because of unserious it is but I feel like that's a running theme of this game unfortunately.

I would personally remove all characters that are not from Invincible and replace Amber with the comic version and try to focus on immersion by removing advertisement mid game.

Very good start with a lot of promise. The grammar and spelling need some work and the "gameplay" is nonexistent and purely there to make it take longer, but I could forgive all of that for the art and the premise. The thing right now that is keeping it from being 5 stars is this is a parody game where the vast majority of the content is dedicated to OC women. I can't fathom the decision to have 20% of the content be real characters and the remaining 80% be your fanmade characters. Why even be a parody at that point? Hoping to see more debbie, eve and actual invincible characters in future updates.

so, i rated this game 5 star at first, but i had to come back and change it to 1 star, but it still have some nudity and my fav characters, so 2 star

to the developer of this game - what you doing, man? too much grind, and you have to open phone everytime to tack your mission and stats, too much time wasted doing "training", my man you forget the main narrative of the game - "FUCKING", and the teacher doesn't count, snake girl, burger girl , fuck those, these npc's are boring, include main main characters, and with significantly less grinding, rather focusing on fighting mission, focus more on longer sex scene animations, that also with main main characters

man you shatter my dream, nah, this deserve 1 star

Pretty good game if you are into rape/domination/slavery. There isn't too much content yet. Writing is alright. It being concise it the best part; You don't need to read mountains of text to understand what's going on.
Also, there's an in-game guide and you can easily cheat if you don't wanna grind. I also like the art. Hopefully the game will get more updates in the future.

I really really like the art, it's done really well, and honestly that's mostly what's important in a porn game.

However, this game has a horrendous main gameplay that involves a lot of clicking and repetitive elements. It's super annoying to have to manually sleep by clicking through 30 menus, and then have to do even more clicking to finish the monotonous quests.

I disagree with most people that every game needs to be a VN, and I do here as well. But, the dev should really consider removing some of the gimmicky sandbox gameplay and have the art shine through instead

[v0.3a]

I like the parody. I like the specific direction the dev chose for the story, basically getting Mark on board with the Viltrumites. I also like the art.

What I don't like at all is the gameplay loop. It's a completely boring and linear trainer grinder loop. You essentially follow the laid out story progression without any freedom, but the entire process is a tedious grind for money, stats, going to school, attending class, and "training" girls one step at a time.

Frankly, it's extremely boring to play through. And each sexual interaction is short and without any build up or a sense of eroticism. Each step relies on the previous steps as a form of build up, but the steps are separate instances and the eroticism/anticipation doesn't carry through. The fact that each individual scene is so basic and ends after like 3 lines of dialogue doesn't help matters.

There are sections of the game where nothing is happening and you gotta grind a stupid burger flipping job. You make like 8 clicks to sleep, wake up, get to the burger place, work, and get out. Repeat 20 times to buy a costume to progress one step for a girl.

I honestly have a very hard time believing anyone can actually like this kind of game design. The point of having a map and "sandbox" environments is to give some degree of freedom to the players to tackle things their own way and/or provide an immersive world that they can explore. What's the point of following a completely on the rails grinder where there is only one place you can go that does anything at any given moment?