VN - Ren'Py - Isekai Paradise [v0.5 Patreon] [Soultice]

Game version: 0.3

This game would be much better if the MC wasn't such an unlikable a*shole. He even seems to have at least two different personalities: One seems to be kind and respecful, even humble while the other is sexist, over-the-top-arrogant and selfish.
Get this, dev: A man can have all the pussy and STILL act as an adult man at the same time!

The grammar/ translation is full of mistakes and typos, but this didn't annoy me very much- I still got the message.
The writing isn't good either. It's boring and another of these "Kid with giant penis + Women, who crave nothing more than big penises the MC's big penis (You know, personality is soo overrated)" kind of games.
Humor is childish/ immature and slightly cringe-worthy at times.

The only field where this game shines is the sex: Renders are good, so are the animations during the sex scenes.
In no way extraordinary, but solid.

Another annyoing thing is some paywalled content (I think it's ~ 5 locked scenes, most of them with new characters). It's getting more and more at the later chapters. Completely unneccesary.

Atm, I'm just following this game because there's just enough content to make my Peter wiggle.

Has a good story with the pacing well thought out and very well written and the humor is good but is quickly passed to not get cringy or distracting from the story. LI's have some personality and are unique enough to give attachment. Overall very good, will be waiting for more updates.

[v0.2] Review
Good 3D hentai animation and a cheesy story for players to endear the characters to while not front loading too much story to understand the plot/world. Love it when I get inserted into an H-Game that uses a story to supplement the H-Scenes.

I'm looking forward to further updates.

We'll start with the obvious, the game looks amazing. No question that a lot of work has been put into that, and as far as I'm concerned it's payed off. As was stated below however, during the sex scenes the background moves, as well as the characters. This is definitely unsettling and nauseating after a while. If the dev went back and made the backgrounds static, such that only the characters were moving, it would dramatically increase the quality.

The writing is...rough. The game needs a proofreader desperately, there's a number of misspelled words and grammar errors. It's not enough to really detract from the game, but when coupled with a very unoriginal story, it drops it down to 3 stars for me.

All in all, I think the game could definitely hit 4 stars. Get a proofreader to fix spelling mistakes and smooth out the background during sex scenes and it'd be an easy 4 for me. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.

The writing isn't very good, but it's not so bad that it ruins the game.

The renders and animations are very good. Enough that I would have given it 4 stars if it weren't for one major issue:
The dev attempts to animate the background as well during the scenes. It is so out of sync with the action in the foreground that it's only a nauseating distraction that makes it impossible to focus on the high quality animation happening in the front.

this game is something ive been looking for a long time, plot is short so you wont get bored before some juicy content. Great characters and thier diversity, and even better animations. Personally top 1 so far.

I really enjoy this game when I play it with out my big head but with my small head. The author definitely know his track, either you make a game with good story like a VN, or if you are not good at writing story you just make tons of sex scenes like a hentai manga. I love both, and this game is obviously on the second track. The story is basically on the level of Japanese isekai toilet paper light novels, but with a lot of high quality sex animations. About 7 sex scenes so far in 0.2. I don't want be too picky on adult games and for many games, even if they aren't perfect but have standout qualities, I sincerely hope we can approach them with a different mindset and perspective(using big head or small head to think ). After all, games like these aren't something you come across frequently.

It's really interesting, I have to say, it's the first time I've played a game where I'm an isekai character. There's a system and a harem that reminds me of Japanese anime.

The update is also extremely fast, I remember it only takes 1-2 months for you to update to the 2nd version, it's worth a try.

Review for v0.1

The game name and the opening lines talking about dying and waking up in a new world "just like manga or anime" told me more than enough about this. It's an admittedly pretty looking game filled with very generic writing and a cringe anime-inspired protagonist.

This opening chapter has not captured me in the slightest, mostly because it does absolutely NOTHING new. While I can also understand wanting to just lean into the typical power fantasy isekai thing, even then does it fall extremely short. To the point I started skipping dialogue because the protagonist was giving me a headache. You get offscreen killed by "truck-kun", wake up in this new tropey fantasy world, and immediately start casting a bunch of magic and leveling up because you're overpowered. The MC has nothing noteworthy to talk about. Picture a stereotypical anime MC and try to guess his lines, odds are you'll get pretty close. He's just annoying man.

Two of the girls practically fall for you immediately and throw themselves at you, we get some generic lines about a demon king, decide to form a party to take him down, blah blah. Literally nothing you haven's seen before if you've played (or watched) anything similar. Couldn't tell you much of anything else writing wise because there just isn't anything TO talk about.

One thing I will praise is the inclusion of extra animations for things like battles and such. I think it's always a nice touch when an AVN includes extra details like that.

Again yeah the renders, models, and animations are all good enough. But it feels empty when the writing, especially with the MC, is actually mind numbing. Hard to see myself ever enjoying this unless the writing astronomically improved. I'll leave this at three stars for now given it's so early, but should nothing improve I'd drop the score down a star and move on.

Ugh, i knew i should've expected it from a game called isekai paradise, but fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck is it insufferable to read through

The little content it has took me a while to get through due to having to fucking reel back from cringe and recover, like is this satire? is the dev purposefully doing this to do some social commentary? I wish he'd stop, he's not good at it

I foolishly believed i'd see some trope subeversion or something, a new interpetation of the medium, fucking ANY sign of originality

Sadly i was disappointed

Though in 0.1v, if this is the quality that will be continued, im not quite hopeful of this game

for what they're worth, the models are fine, though i'd say the outfit choices could be better

The writing of the few scenes was also quite dull, and given it's a vn, there will be no gameplay section

Good Points
+ Even tho it's cliche, the Isekai series with MC leveling up, seeing his status screen, being kind of OP, etc, still fun to play. And that ''Damn it... I just killed a shitting Orc.'' thing was quite funny, along with some other references.
+ Characters mostly has cute emotions, writings, etc, like Drunk Kaela, how she says she wants to be with MC forever, asking him not to send her back, etc, it was truly ''aww'' moment.
+ Art style is good, girls/woman looks hot/cute/sexy, and MC's design looks kind of unique as well.
+ We have animations for some small stuff and things like magic attacks, their existence is cool, but they need improvements for sure, especially animation physics.
+ Sex scenes has lots of animations for different positions, and angles, even tho they need bit improvements, they are kind of decent.

Bad Points
- There are some really annoying cliches, and characters, like male hero being cliche pestering, egoist, ''I'm the rightful one!'' type, going after MC's women, etc. And like this is not enough developer even let MC & Hero duel, and make the MC lose... I mean seriously? Why? To make players die from cringe while watching it? BRUH...
- Aside from cliches there are tons of unlogical stuff happening as well, one second on screen you can see MC beating very high level BOSS, then another second you see him getting kidnapped like idiot, lost his powers, and ended up in pathetic situation where he could have easily killed, how can someone be this dumb?! Or how players are waited to like dumb MC like this? Seriously is writers ever gonna stop ridiculing the MC, and showing him OP same time?! And what's up with potion literally making MC just a normal guy with no powers at all, how OP stuff like this supposed to make sense, and why it's even working on MC in first place?! Then the curse cast on his dick will make his dick disappear if he can't endure for a hour?! Who writing/creating these scenes?!
- Even tho he is OP they still making MC Porter, a job where no promotion exist, so he will be stuck with E-Rank is quite annoying, and nonsense, thanks to this his party can't take any good quest and stuck with easy ones, in these type of isekai stories worse ones are the ones MC is getting forced to stay E-Rank or level 1, DEV going this way is very bad decision. Not to talk about this is literally reason Vega caught on him,
developer should have thought better about these stuff for sure.
- How MC died just explained with a couple of sentences with a black screen, more detailed explanation with some images to show what happened like truck-kun hitting MC, etc, would look better and more professional.
- Writing is a bit weak it seems, the talks happening between people feel a bit rushed, and it is almost like a person who has written dialogues just wanted them to quickly end, a little bit more detailed dialogues could be a good improvement.
- Monster designs can use some improvements, they look a bit low quality and too cartoonish when you compare them with the more realistic art style of humans.
- Facial expressions can use some improvements, especially girls in sex scenes look a bit robotic, they don't have any animation for their eyes, face, and head it seems, so it looks like their body is moving, alive, but their head frozen in place, and that creates kind of robotic look.
- All sex scenes has weird screen shake effect, it makes no sense at all, and looks pretty bad as well.
- I'm not complaining, the sex scenes are good, and not gonna say slow-burn style is better, but the sex happens too fast and feels too rushed, maybe should happen after a little bit more dialogue? I can understand the mushroom sex scene since it was an accident, but Melfa's sex scene especially feels rushed.
- English is a bit rough, maybe better proofreading or a translator could be a good improvement.
- Choices matter, but bad kind of, choosing to engage with one character can block a sex scene with another character, meanwhile it shouldn't because MC has quite high stamina and time, like after the sex he had with Fiona he could have sex with Relya as well, but instead it's getting skipped, and that's quite nonsense.
- Some content was paywalled and that's pretty bad decision. If DEV wants people to invest in his project he should start fixing the problems of the game and create a better game instead of locking away the content.
- Characters looks bad when they open their mouth, DEV needs to figure out how to properly do that for sure. and Kaela's face can use some changes as well.

For The End
Honestly this is one of great examples of how a project with good potential could be ruined by poor execution, writing especially biggest reason why this game is this poor despite the having fundamental stuff like interesting art style, hot looking characters, great renders, and animations.

It's great for me. It's been a while since I've had a game with such beautiful graphics and it's great to play on my phone. I really like this game, but I've only played it a little bit and I still like it.

Standard OP protag isekai story but the world is still interesting enough.
English is a bit rough but definitely understandable.

The four stars is really for the art. The scenes and animations are great and I can't wait to see more.

This is a really great game. The story quite interesting, and the models are gorgeous.

Graphics:
The models are gorgeous, and the environments are nice as well. For me 10/10

Animations:
The animation is so smoothFor me 10/10

Story:
The story has me hooked.(Personally, I like harems and pregnancies.) For me 10/10

Characters:
Characters are beautiful For me 10/10

Overall 10/10 For me
Isekai Paradise is a game worth playing, in my opinion. I really recommend. All the girls are definitely standouts. they are gorgeous.

Ahhh what could i say, i love the graphics and the story looks like manhwa type shit which is interesting, the girls is also cute. I would say again the graphics truly amazing, hope the journey continue.

0.1 Review.

It's an isekai alright. If that's what you are into then step right up. But let us not for a moment pretend the average isekai has a good story. The writing is only good in so far as it accurately recreates a low tier trash isekai. Which if that's intentional A+ for effort.

A major upside however is that atleast you get some porn to go with it. The characters look great. The sex scenes are equally good.

Honestly makes it kind of hard to rate since it's both terrible and fantastic. So erh..it's mid? Whenever the only positive a game has to offer is the porn it leaves me wondering why I wouldn't just go watch some actual porn instead. So yeah mid I guess.

the gameplay is very nice at the beginning of the game the characters are made beautifully the world is made well the plot is nice and reads well the game has a good start and has a chance to become a good game

Great start to the game! The ahegao and dialogues are great. Character design and pacing is done well. Hoping to see more characters and the story to develop into something great. Wishing the developers all the best!

The dev is on a whole other level. Graphics are great, storyline is fun, and very good pacing.

Hopefully a gallery feature would be created as the scenes are really just too good.

Wishing you all the best with your game and looking forward to more.

This game is definitely on another level.

Nothing I have to say, it's unusual for me to give reviews to new games, but damn! This shit is out of this world, definitely dev's from another world.

How can this game so good?

Badass overpowered MC, perfect sound effects, amazing visual effects, high graphics, pretty girls, everything is perfect, just need a gallery menu (I honestly don't care).

Well I won't gonna say anything just try the game!!!!!!