[Review for v0.01]
Unfortunately, as it stands now, the game is little more than another slop VN on a platform filled with them. That doesn't mean it's irredeemably bad or anything, but there's a long way to go.
The premise is pretty simple, nothing that's never been done before, and I don't really mind the exaggerated proportions. The renders are fine, though the animations have a bit of a beginner vibe to them, and I really like the music used. Ultimately, though, there's nothing here that particularly stands out. And on the other hand, it has some pretty glaring flaws.
Chief among said flaws is the grammar. Other than the exposition at the very beginning, there isn't a single line that doesn't have at least one grammatical error. Another flaw is the writing as a whole, the dialogue is incredibly stilted and unnatural, people talk at instead of to each other, and if I have to read something being described as "interesting" again I might just go mad. It's clear the dev isn't well-versed in conversational English or in the English language altogether, but a dedicated editor would probably fix these issues. Still, I place a lot of importance on the legibility of a VN, especially when it has four and a half stars.
Now, normally I'd just rate this two stars and never touch it again, but I'll put my biases on clear display: I am much more lenient with a game if its main focus is breeding, and this one gets bonus points for having (basically) Amazons as the main girls. I'm a weak man, and whatever integrity I carry in these reviews does not hold up to the fantasy of getting a bunch of virgin warrior women pregnant.
So yeah, 3 stars and I'll be keeping an eye on it. I do hope the grammar improves, though.
Unfortunately, as it stands now, the game is little more than another slop VN on a platform filled with them. That doesn't mean it's irredeemably bad or anything, but there's a long way to go.
The premise is pretty simple, nothing that's never been done before, and I don't really mind the exaggerated proportions. The renders are fine, though the animations have a bit of a beginner vibe to them, and I really like the music used. Ultimately, though, there's nothing here that particularly stands out. And on the other hand, it has some pretty glaring flaws.
Chief among said flaws is the grammar. Other than the exposition at the very beginning, there isn't a single line that doesn't have at least one grammatical error. Another flaw is the writing as a whole, the dialogue is incredibly stilted and unnatural, people talk at instead of to each other, and if I have to read something being described as "interesting" again I might just go mad. It's clear the dev isn't well-versed in conversational English or in the English language altogether, but a dedicated editor would probably fix these issues. Still, I place a lot of importance on the legibility of a VN, especially when it has four and a half stars.
Now, normally I'd just rate this two stars and never touch it again, but I'll put my biases on clear display: I am much more lenient with a game if its main focus is breeding, and this one gets bonus points for having (basically) Amazons as the main girls. I'm a weak man, and whatever integrity I carry in these reviews does not hold up to the fantasy of getting a bunch of virgin warrior women pregnant.
So yeah, 3 stars and I'll be keeping an eye on it. I do hope the grammar improves, though.