VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Jack Fondle [v0.1] [Teky]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    ThorMcBalbo

    Review version : demo

    art 7,5/10: Fist game even that I prefer the background to the models. I've extracted the archive and looked at it, the house picture are really something, even the light that gets inside the house is well made. The models are pretty standard and sometimes, expressions and posing doesn't always convince me.

    Story 5/10: As usual since it's so short, it can't get a sufficient vote but is an interesting start. On the down note we the language. for the native speakers can be even cringier than my writing. oh... I've almost forgot: a couple of rules = 4 rules.

    Overall 5/10: To little to be classified as demo since we don't actually have "The Feel" of the game, just a little 2 minutes window on it. The story starts as a black screen with text in the corner and that should really be changed, But the heist scene was kinda of fun, maybe with few renders more could even improve. Anyway, we will have to wait for future release to see if the game is worth it or no