Jack's Story [v0.1c]
Plot structure (story/events/writing) - A Typical corruption/ voyeurism story is not original but a staple of AVNs. The story progression is... progressing. The current tags are accurate. A few grammatical errors, misspellings. Roughly 20 minutes of play time as of [v0.1c]. I'm a stickler for matching dialogue with scenes; this game does pretty well, with only one issue I noticed.
Graphics—Standard DAZ, a bit grainy at times. The models are not bad, and they are not common Genesis models. There is... one semi-animation.
Gameplay—It's Renpy. It plays fine. The GUI, saves, and loads are good. There are no issues with Playability or Performance. There is no music at the moment.
Final words - The DEMO release was somewhat premature and rough around the edges, but [v0.1c] starts filling out the story and softening the edges.
There are some adult scenes, but too short for fun time. If you want to fap you're going to have to wait. Porn logic is present.
I recommend this game. I'm giving it 3 stars because more content is needed per update, and image quality should be improved. It's good that the developer is active here. I'm sure the game will improve with each update, and I will up my score if needed.
(Ignore the previous review; those issues are not present now, and the reason reviews should not be allowed on demos.)(PTGAD)
Plot structure (story/events/writing) - A Typical corruption/ voyeurism story is not original but a staple of AVNs. The story progression is... progressing. The current tags are accurate. A few grammatical errors, misspellings. Roughly 20 minutes of play time as of [v0.1c]. I'm a stickler for matching dialogue with scenes; this game does pretty well, with only one issue I noticed.
Graphics—Standard DAZ, a bit grainy at times. The models are not bad, and they are not common Genesis models. There is... one semi-animation.
Gameplay—It's Renpy. It plays fine. The GUI, saves, and loads are good. There are no issues with Playability or Performance. There is no music at the moment.
Final words - The DEMO release was somewhat premature and rough around the edges, but [v0.1c] starts filling out the story and softening the edges.
There are some adult scenes, but too short for fun time.
If you want to fap you're going to have to wait. Porn logic is present. I recommend this game. I'm giving it 3 stars because more content is needed per update, and image quality should be improved. It's good that the developer is active here. I'm sure the game will improve with each update, and I will up my score if needed.
(Ignore the previous review; those issues are not present now, and the reason reviews should not be allowed on demos.)(PTGAD)
