I'm a gamer who values narratives above all else and Jason - Coming of Age doesn't do a terrible job of creating a low fantasy story arc. However, it is subverting expectations in a way that is not feasible if you want to tell an epic journey. What starts out as a romcom turns into a fantasy novel without much of a twist. It just kind of meanders to a point where increasingly supernatural things happen without anyone wondering why.
Essentially that disenfranchises people who started playing Jason because of the initial premise and doesn't move things along quick enough for those seeking fantasy.
Also, at some point the developer integrated AI transitions that do look pleasing to the eye but they are still glaring because of AI's inconsistency. Movement flows between realistic to uncanny in a couple of seconds. Facial properties slightly change while they move from point A to B to point C.
The story is very disconnected in the beginning and when the initial payoff finally arrives you've kind of settled for different love interests already. The final moments are less impactful depending on your previous choices and LIs. The lack of railroading could be freedom, but it doesn't work when you have an LI in mind to progress the plot.
That's mainly a storytelling issue. The lack of focus early on makes you care less in the end, because nobody ever told you that you should care about this or that person specifically. So you have invent a cheesy line like (((SPOILER - "don't touch my harem" to achieve an emotional breaking point. Otherwise it wouldn't make much sense to feel so strongly and sacrifice so willingly for a street whore, does it?" - /SPOILER)))
But I don't expect developers on F95 to write creative masterpieces, so that's not a reason for me to deduct a star. It's just something to look out for as the story progresses. This visual novel lacks tension and that is mainly due to bad storytelling. So while I enjoy the visual, artistic side of things and am not terribly judgemental when it comes to the overall narrative, I strongly believe that Jason needs some serious focus or it risks to become an average experience.
Essentially that disenfranchises people who started playing Jason because of the initial premise and doesn't move things along quick enough for those seeking fantasy.
Also, at some point the developer integrated AI transitions that do look pleasing to the eye but they are still glaring because of AI's inconsistency. Movement flows between realistic to uncanny in a couple of seconds. Facial properties slightly change while they move from point A to B to point C.
The story is very disconnected in the beginning and when the initial payoff finally arrives you've kind of settled for different love interests already. The final moments are less impactful depending on your previous choices and LIs. The lack of railroading could be freedom, but it doesn't work when you have an LI in mind to progress the plot.
That's mainly a storytelling issue. The lack of focus early on makes you care less in the end, because nobody ever told you that you should care about this or that person specifically. So you have invent a cheesy line like (((SPOILER - "don't touch my harem" to achieve an emotional breaking point. Otherwise it wouldn't make much sense to feel so strongly and sacrifice so willingly for a street whore, does it?" - /SPOILER)))
But I don't expect developers on F95 to write creative masterpieces, so that's not a reason for me to deduct a star. It's just something to look out for as the story progresses. This visual novel lacks tension and that is mainly due to bad storytelling. So while I enjoy the visual, artistic side of things and am not terribly judgemental when it comes to the overall narrative, I strongly believe that Jason needs some serious focus or it risks to become an average experience.