Ren'Py - Abandoned - Jay's Lust [v3] [Temptation Games]

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is Version 3...

This game has many references and behaviors that play on stereotypes rather than any anchor in reality... It has many references and statements that are not only borderline racist, but also sexist... Not sure how anyone could get pleasure from this tripe...

The visuals are 2D hand drawn characters, reminiscent of what you might find in graphic novels... The backdrops are a mix of 2D hand drawn, and actual real photo's (probably used without permissions)... The developers didn't even make an effort to modify the real photos to blur out peoples faces and/or business signs... Add to that, the protagonist penis goes all the way down to his knees, when flaccid... Talk about total and utter over the top and unrealistic, and again someone taking a stereotype and blowing it out of proportion...

The script is a mixed bag, with some spelling/grammar errors mixed with attempts at gang slang type dialogue from the protagonist and random outbursts from people nearby... The plot (there really isn't a story plot) revolves around a sexist male protagonist, who just wants to have lots of various forms of sex with some select racial groups of women... The author's try to portray the protagonist as a street wise black man living in the gang filled streets of New Your City... The characters personality and the whole story uses a lot of way over the top stereotypes, unrealistic behavior, unbelievable personalities, over the top scenarios, and very overbearing language...

Right out the gate, the first woman he meets is a white woman from the U.K. who is lost trying to get to her boyfriends business building... The protagonist feigns an offer to help her, and she just goes along with everything... To include following him through unfamiliar neighborhoods towards his home, where he offers her a glass of water, and she just willingly and without question goes up into his apartment, a strangers apartment, where he immediately tears her clothes off, literally... And she just goes along with it, having sex on the balcony while the entire neighborhood screams out obscenities as they watch... He even stole all her money and pocketed her cell phone, and she doesn't even complain or scream out or react at all to any of it... So totally immersion breaking and over the top... I had seen enough at that point to know just how dumb this VN/Game was going to be....

This whole game plays into so many stereotypes and forms of unrealistic behavior for all characters involved, that I'm sure it will offend far more people then it will actually entertain...

Overall, this game was a waste of my time... It has no roots in reality at all, as it is just an over the top porn game with some unrealistic story elements...

One part racist two parts awesome finally a story that gives an accurate representation of things instead of the PC culture bullshit MSM feeds you.

Gives an accurate portrayal of the future of america if the good guys didn't win in 2016

This is just silly. It looks, reads and plays like it's been done by a teenager in need of stimulation or fantasy. The assumption that an average white woman walking in a black neighbourhood is looking to become a BBC bitch is not only racist but unrealistic. As is the idea that all black men just want some fancy white pussy as their ultimate goal. CGs are less than adequate and lack detail although my guess is that dev tried to imitate GGGB drawings. I give it 1 star for writing good english and trying to entertain.

The game does not have enough depth. There are not enough multiple choices. It's short as history. The actions are badly introduced. The drawings are not very interesting. However I love the theme, big cocks big tits ... and even if it lacks pervesion, it's still a hot story.

Reviewing after version 2. Loved it. Pretty straight to the point, but there are a couple different paths, which could be explored more in the future.

If you like interracial and want to get really aroused, then play it! I liked the language used. Some funny lines in there too.

PS - some one should add interracial rimming to the tags.

Jay's Lust [v1 0.1]

IMO this is slightly racist and sexist. This follows the trope that black men are thugs with big dicks. White women are bimbos that crave to be abused. Some will like that, but I find this disturbing.

The art ended up slightly disappointing too. It looked good at first but the longer you play there seems to lack of it but also it looks off. Especially the sex scene, LOL they cropped the photo above to cut out the awkwardness of the intercourse in the picture.

Lastly the writing is amateurish. There is a serious lack of logic. Characters do things that would NEVER HAPPEN normally and requires explanation but there isn't any. It's just dumb.

1/5 at best.